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If it makes you happy – Chapter 1
Then lets go Abby replied as she reached around Bette and turned the key which opened the door. She slowly guided Bette into the house as they continued to kiss, kicking the door closed behind them.
It came as a surprise to Bette when Abby pulled away quickly and stood staring at something over her left shoulder. Turning her head to follow the gaze of her date, the sight Bette found was nothing short of shocking.
What are you? She began to enquire but faltered as she saw the look of anguish in her ex-lovers eyes.
I thought you would have changed the locks by now. Tinas voice trailed off at the end of the simple statement.
Tina remained seated on the couch while Bette stood frozen, each woman unable to look away from the other as the silence grew.
Bette, I think I should probably leave you towhatever this is. Abby finally spoke up forcing Bette to realize that she was still there in the room with them.
Bette turned to her date and offered a helpless smile Ill walk you out was all she offered before leading the way to the front door.
Abby, Im sorry Bette offered as she closed the front door behind her This is unexpected and
Awkward? Abby offered.
Yes Bette admitted.
I take it that shes your ex-wife?
Yeah thats Tina and I have no idea what shes doing back in ourin my home.
Well, Ill leave you to find that out. Abby said as she leaned in to kiss Bettes cheek.
Im sorry, this isnt how I imagined the night playing out.
Im sorry too, Bette Abby offered with a sad smile.
Can I call you in the morning? Bette asked.
Call me when you work out what you want. Abby replied in an even tone.
What I want is you in my bed, naked. Bette replied in a lowered voice.
Then what am I doing out here while your ex-wife is in there? Abby asked as she waived a hand at the door.
Its not that simple. We have a child together and you know that! Bette tried to reason.
A child that shes now raising with some guy you despise. Abby said barely resisting the urge to raise her voice as her blue eyes flashed with frustration. She sighed and reigned in her temper before continuing. I know what I want, Bette. When you work out what you want let me know. Abby held Bettes gaze for a couple of seconds hoping for her new lover to assuage her fears but not a word nor touch was offered to reassure. With her pride still somewhat still in tact Abby turned and strode down the pathway in the direction of her car.
Bette bit her lip to suppress the possibly untrue words she had almost called out to her girlfriend. It was a lie to say that she knew what she wanted and that it was Abby. Bette had sworn that there would be no more secrets and no more lies, not after the way she and Tina had destroyed each other with such simple tools. She stood there and watched as Abbys sleek Mercedes pulled away from the curb at speed.
Bette squinted as she tried to read her watch in the evening light. What the hell was Tina doing in her living room at
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(45 votes, average: 4.24 out of 5)
Wow. Great start! Please post again soon!
good to see you are writing again…good start!
I like where this story is going.Great start- post soon!!
Hack! So glad to see you back again! I truly look forward to how you’re going to fix the train wreck that was season three…I enjoy every word you write – so thoughtful and provocative. Thanks for taking the time!
Glad to see you writing again. I’ve missed your style. Big question – can you redeem Tina in anyone’s eyes? That will be impressive! If anyone can…..
a most excellent beginning. Welcome back. You’ve been missed. Please continue :p
What does SHE want?
I’m so happy you’re back. This is a great start but way too short.
This beginning is tantilizing and intriguing. Tina is trouble but oh so tasty.
It take a lot of nerves to go back to the person that you left for someone else. What does Tina want and where is the baby? Just dont let Bette get hurt again,Tina has done enought to her. Where is her boy toy? thanks
this is great start..I can’t wait for the next chapter
This is interesting and yah what the hell is Tina doing there!
As a Tibette fan I am hoping that she and Angelica are both there. That is going to crawl on her hands and knees begging for Bette to at least listen to her. Please continue with this story. I can use a happy Tibette story about now.
woohooo..!! hack is back!bring it on!
hope you come back soon. looking forward to your take on s3 tibette. hopefully you can make some sense out it.
This is interesting start, and like it!
Looks interesting. I hope that their child and I hope you still have it be Angie, is ok.
I’m wondering too. Thanks for writing another story. Love to read your work.
OMG…I can’t tell you how happy I am. You should see the smile on my face. The set up is perfect can’t wait to see how it plays out. Thanks Hack. The Hack Attack is back, Yippie!
No we are all wondering what Tina, is doing at Bette’s house, It seems all is not too happy if for Tina & Henry, where is the baby, as she is sitting waiting for Bette to come home. But I am an B&T fan would love them still get back together.
Oooo, this looks like it’ll be interesting! Great start Hack!
Excellent start :)
Great to see you writing again Hack. Can’t wait to see what Tina wants.
Come on !!! Very nice start but why do people always stop when it starts being very interesting ??? It is a nice idea to have moved on the story to a few months. To see that Bette tried to change her mind is good too. Like the beginning anyway ! thanks !
What Bette needs now is an innocent, loving, comprehensive and know-what-she-wants girlfriend. But of course sometimes it’s different from what you want.
Eager to see what comes next. Thank you for writing!
EXCELLENT START……WAY WAY TOO SHORT!!!! UPDATE REALLY REALLY SOON!!!!
This is great. Can’t wait to see what happens when she goes back into the house. I have to admit, I’m glad Tina’s there…though she’s got some nerve. Really enjoyable read Hack. I hope you’ll post the next one for the weekend.
great chapter… now let’s find out what Tina has in mind!
ooooo, this looks very interesting!! Yes ehat does the trash bag(Tina) want?
Tina is the one who should have left. And Bette should have changed the lock. Tina’s presumptuous bitch to have barged in to Bette’s home and life like that. If she wanted to talk, she should have called and set up a time like a grown up. (No, not Tina.) What ever she’s up to, it doesn’t bode well that this is the mannner her opening move.
ok, so you’ve got me hooked. now bring it on!!
A new story by you? Yes! Great chapter and a nice start.
I don’t like Abby. lol There I said it. But really I don’t like a lot of people. Yes I realize I’m in the minority here but that’s okay. Ready for the next chapter!
Yeah great start, how what’ next. Good to see you back :o)
i want abby to came back and bette to send tina back to henry
Hey HG, Great to see you posting again on the site. An very intriguing and promising start. Is Bette really able to move on and commit to Abby or will her feelings for Tina re-surface? And what the hell is Tina doing there at 1AM. Hopefully getting the hell away from Henry. Can’t wait to read how this progresses and develops because given your talent and skills it is bound to be a very enjoyable and entertaining ride. Thank you so much as you were missed. Your Loyal Fan.
Oh sweet Jesus, you’re back! And so is Tina. The evil side of me wishes that Bette said, “Tina, can you get off the couch. Abby and I are about to have mind blowing sex on it. Thanks!” I am sooooo looking forward to this story Hackgirl. Please post soon!
Okay, you’ve piqued my interest.
Hey girl, don’t leave it like that. Post soon……… :)
I fully agree with funnyone Tina had NO right to be there. Still, I can’t wait to here whatever crap she has to spew
Nice to see you back Hackgirl, what do you have in store for us. Looking forward to reading more.
Great start! Bring it on. Please continue and MORE PAGESSSSS PLEASE!
Hack s back! Now I will have to visit this site very 2 minutes to see if she has posted an update. I might as well say goodbye to my career. Thanks Hack.
ok u have me hooked now!!! plz continue
Yay!!