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I’ll Never Get Over You – Part 4
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Dana paused for a moment as she reached Alice’s breast bone loving the feeling and quiet sound of Alice’s heart beating wildly waiting for Dana to move again. She smiled as she let her tongue drag underneath Alice’s left breast stopping to once again suck gently on the side of it as she made her way to the center her tongue dancing around the nipple feeling Alice’s expectancy for a moment before finally grazing her tongue over Alice’s nipple.
Alice tensed as Dana finally captured her nipple between her lips. She moaned louder and louder and Just when Alice thought she couldn’t take any more Dana’s mouth dropped Alice’s breast and made it’s way over to the other one this time without the excruciating slowness that she had showed previously. And as Dana gave Alice’s other nipple the same attention that she had afforded the previous one she at long last moved her hand slowly against the wetness that was still building between Alice’s legs. Alice gasped as Dana’s fingers began playing over her outer lips lightly rubbing against her as she devoured her right nipple.
Deciding that Alice was ready for more Dana’s lips and tongue left Alice’s over sensitive ***** and made their way slowly down her beautiful body stopping only for a moment to slip her tongue inside Alice’s belly button. Dana placed open mouthed kisses the rest of the way until she found herself staring at Alice’s engorged *****. Her own breath caught in her throat as she breathed in Alice’s scent before finally descending upon her and recapturing the woman that she loved.
Alice’s heart stopped when Dana’s tongue finally found her ***** and she felt the familiar twitch in her legs as Dana’s mouth followed her tongue to close around the oversensitive flesh. Alice called out loudly as she finally came as Dana sucked hard while reaching up to find Alice’s hands with her own. The waves of pleasure continued as Dana’s tongue lovingly soaked up all traces of Alice’s ***** before kissing her way back up to stare into Alice brown eyes. The tears came a moment later as Alice realized what she had lost. All that she had given up.
Understanding her as always Dana leaned forward and kissed Alice with all the love that she could find. There would be plenty of time for apologies and regrets, but for right now Dana just wanted the moment to be perfect. Right now she didn’t want to think about what they would say to Leisha and Adam right now all she wanted to think about was the fact that the woman that she had always adored was lying naked beneath her and she wasn’t going to let anything ruin this moment.
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Hey there everyone, like I said I almost left the last part out because sadly I blush at the word ‘naked’ but after taking it out and adding it in about a million times, I just found that I wanted it there. I was a little iffy because I didn’t know if I captured the feel of the scene right, and there’s that blushing thing, but as I requested please be gentle, I’m trying to expand myself here….
That was such a Kik ass post!..THNX4writing, jus need2get rid of Leisha&Adam& It’LL b all GooD :D this lst scene was grt dude..abso-fuking-lutely spectacular..Post soon I hope? mwah
This story gets better and better. And the end scene there was hot but realistic and tastefully done, quite beautiful really. Please post soon xx
Wow… Just wow!!!
Bravo. I don’t think the scene could have been written any better. So emotional. Can’t wait to see what follows.
that was just amazing…..the love scene was beautifully well written…..don’t think it could’ve been done any better than that
You’re back with a vengence lol. I adore the bittersweetness feel of this story, and that last scene was achingly tender and throughly satisfiying. You never have to worry ; )
that was great! especially the last page. ;) whew!
When this chapter came up I actually went back to read both stories. Now that I’m caught up, I hope Danish can finally work things out. Your writing keeps getting better and better, you portray their pain and emotions beautifully. And that last scene was truly amazing. Thanks for posting it =)
Wow, thanks the emotions are wonderful, love this secure and caring Dana.
that was great but what will they tell their partners about this but I am just glad to see that they have sort of made up and I can wait for the next post as I love this story please post soon
i love this story and i am so glad that you have time to write more. you are one of my favorite writers on here and this is my favorite story. you write with so much emotion and feeling. the last scene was hot and if you think this is the worst of your writing i think you are doing pretty good for yourself. great post. glad to see dana and alice reconnecting.
I was wondering if you were going to post again. I know it has been a long while but I want to know what was in that box!!!