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I’ll Never Get Over You – Part 4
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Dana froze when Alice opened the door and for a fleeting moment lost her voice. But just as soon as her mouth went dry Dana shook her head. She was a grown woman for god sake. She was one of the most powerful lesbians in California. She had just achieved a grand slam. She should have no problem with Alice Pieszecki. And with those thoughts forming in her head Dana met Alice’s eyes and waited for the blonde to speak. “Dana.” Dana could see the surprise in her eyes and dreaded that she had been waiting for Adam. “What are you doing here?”
Dana looked at Alice intensely for a moment before answering. “I forgot to tell you how beautiful you looked tonight Alice.” And before she even understood what was happening Dana had leaned forward and touched her lips to Alice’s.
There was only a second of hesitation before Alice was kissing Dana back, reveling in the familiar feel of Dana’s mouth pushing against her own. Alice let her doubt and fear that this would be over fall away as she tightened her arms around Dana’s waist and pulled her lover closer to her. There was no desperation in the kiss, Dana took her time reclaiming the woman that she loved. When both women finally had to pull away for air Alice’s lips cried at the loss of contact, but her heart danced with joy as Dana held their foreheads together and looked up into Alice’s eyes. Alice searched Dana’s blue eyes for any trace of doubt and found none. There was only the love that she always saw when she looked at the athlete.
Alice’s breath caught when Dana leaned forward and kissed her again. This time with more abandon than before. Alice got swept away in the feeling of Dana’s hands and mouth on her as they slowly and clumsily made their way to the couch that Alice used as a bed. They reached it a few minutes later both half undressed and out of breath. Dana pulled away from Alice and paused long enough to finish undressing Alice and herself and Alice felt the rush of blood in her ears as she felt Dana press their naked forms together for the first time in a year. She let her head fall back as Dana’s mouth traveled from her collar bone to her ear and back again. And when she felt Dana’s tongue massaging her pulse point it was too much for her to stand anymore and Alice fell onto the couch with Dana following close behind her.
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Hey there everyone, like I said I almost left the last part out because sadly I blush at the word ‘naked’ but after taking it out and adding it in about a million times, I just found that I wanted it there. I was a little iffy because I didn’t know if I captured the feel of the scene right, and there’s that blushing thing, but as I requested please be gentle, I’m trying to expand myself here….
That was such a Kik ass post!..THNX4writing, jus need2get rid of Leisha&Adam& It’LL b all GooD :D this lst scene was grt dude..abso-fuking-lutely spectacular..Post soon I hope? mwah
This story gets better and better. And the end scene there was hot but realistic and tastefully done, quite beautiful really. Please post soon xx
Wow… Just wow!!!
Bravo. I don’t think the scene could have been written any better. So emotional. Can’t wait to see what follows.
that was just amazing…..the love scene was beautifully well written…..don’t think it could’ve been done any better than that
You’re back with a vengence lol. I adore the bittersweetness feel of this story, and that last scene was achingly tender and throughly satisfiying. You never have to worry ; )
that was great! especially the last page. ;) whew!
When this chapter came up I actually went back to read both stories. Now that I’m caught up, I hope Danish can finally work things out. Your writing keeps getting better and better, you portray their pain and emotions beautifully. And that last scene was truly amazing. Thanks for posting it =)
Wow, thanks the emotions are wonderful, love this secure and caring Dana.
that was great but what will they tell their partners about this but I am just glad to see that they have sort of made up and I can wait for the next post as I love this story please post soon
i love this story and i am so glad that you have time to write more. you are one of my favorite writers on here and this is my favorite story. you write with so much emotion and feeling. the last scene was hot and if you think this is the worst of your writing i think you are doing pretty good for yourself. great post. glad to see dana and alice reconnecting.
I was wondering if you were going to post again. I know it has been a long while but I want to know what was in that box!!!