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In the Beginning…………..Chapter 11……..Say What?
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Bette: “You mean you need a guinea pig.”
Tina: “Yes, but I need a tall dark and gorgeous guinea pig with taste.”
Bette laughed.
Bette: “I’ll do it T; you don’t have to flatter me.”
Tina: “Good, it’s almost ready.”
Bette sat at the bar/counter in Tina’s kitchen. She watched Tina cook. She loved watching her. Tina was dressed in a pair of shorts and tank top. She had an apron on the said ‘Bon Apetite’ on the front of it. Bette smiled at the thought
.. Tina had her hair up in a ponytail and bits of hair had escaped falling around her face. She had a bit of flour or sugar or something white on her cheek. Bette thought she couldn’t have looked sexier if she had tried.
Bette couldn’t help smiling by just watching her. She was so damn wonderful. Her mind was drifting into LaLa land. She had that completely smitten look on her face. Then she heard Tina saying her name and she snapped out of her trance.
Tina: “Bette, .Bette?….Hello..earth to Bette.”
Bette: “Oh..Sorry T, I was thinking.”
Tina: “Good thoughts I hope?”
Bette: “The best.”
Tina: “Ok, well I want you to try this sauce.”
She held a spoon full of the sauce up to Bette’s mouth for the taste.
Bette took the spoon into her mouth.
Bette: “Mmm.”
Tina: “So what do you think? Is it good?”
Bette: “I love youI.Ilove it.”
Tina: “What?….what did you say?”
Bette was stammering, trying to think. She couldn’t believe she said it out loud. Shitdid I say what I think I said? I did. Well there was only one thing to do
Bette: “I said I loved it, it’s delicious.”
Tina: “No.before that, what did you say?”
Bette: “I said..I .said.
She took Tina’s hands in hers and looked into her eyes. She took a deep breath and took the leap.
Bette: “Tina Kennard I’m head over heels in love with you. I want to spend every moment with you, I want to know all there is to know about you. I love you.”
Tina was smiling and had tears running down her cheeks.
Tina: “Bette you’ve made me the happiest person in the world. I adore you and all that you are. I’ve been waiting for this moment. I love you too.”
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…and there’s the story I came looking for! Very, very sweet. Everyone should have such a love as the one you write. Oh, and reward away…SOON!
Mmmmmmm…. Now THAT was nice! Good chapter! Hell, I’m relaxed after that massage. LOL! Bette sure does have one sexy back! I think I should be Tina’s assistant massuese. More, please. You’re doing great with this story!
dam… where can i get a massage like that… make me an appointment… Goldie… that was sexy… how the hell did tina control her self… esp. after touching her… dam girl…. please continue.. we need to know how bette got out of the bed…
what can i say so fucking cute!! lol
thanx for the update post soon thanks
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great chapter post soon
Everyone get in line after to give Bette amassage. How did Tina control herself> Bette sleeping while this was going on This is a great chapter thanks
Charming, elegant, and just so warm. Thank you so much, a pleasure to read.
K
Wonderful chapter. So sweet. Love this.
Oh yeah, loved it! Now bring on the reward!!!
Right! Poor Tina was crosseyed giving that massage to lucious Porter! lol
I’m sure Bette didn’t mind Tina sraddligng her. Very nice and sweet chapter. Boy, these two have more self control than anyone I know. To even think to have Bette laying naked in front of me. That alone is such a turn on…even when she is sleeping.
This story conveys such amazing love. It gives all of us (who need it) hope for the better tomorrow. Kiitos!
Sensuous ending to a beautiful evening. That’s some willpower. I wouldn’t have fallen asleep no matter how tired I was if she were massaging me!
Absolutley Amazing!
YAAAAY! I love this story! Keep em coming!
Oh yes, you are SO right to make them wait the right and perfect moment ! Being such a huge romantic heart too, I cannot thank you enough for feeling the same way !
And for me, I will always have all the patience in the world waiting for beautiful moments… This way I fully savour stories like yours. (Well, I must confess I’m such a gourmet reading fanfictions of quality !)
This was a really wonderful chapter, Goldfish… The shy and blushing Bette was so irresistible !
You fulfilled your chapter with such a palpable love surrounding everything… What a sweet, delicate feeling, thanks.
And even if she was so right to do this way, I also admire a lot Tina’s self control ! But, at the contrary of many others here, I fully understand why Bette quickly fallen asleep : to express her feelings and hear Tina’s ones in return was such a new and powerful thing for our so-called mighty Bette and I think all the deep emotions of the day were emotionally quite exhausting… in the best way ever, of course !
Now you are giving us a big suspense : will Tina keep such an amazing self-control to be able to wait one week more or will she finally surrunder before the end of this delightfully tender weekend ? That is the question ! (lol)
Thank you so much for such a beautiful and truly romantic story ! You are really talented. A lot.
P.S.: … so, Bette is a chocoholic ? How much I understand that weakness ! I am a pretty big chocoholic too, I’m afraid ! (lol)
I have some knots in my neck and back too, could Tina come over and get them out for me? About time goldfish, but thanks for putting me out of my misery, can’t wait for the next post.
Gold…now that was a sweet & sexy chapter. Tina definitely has self-control. Bette’s freudian slip was great. I’m glad you’re taking time with Bette & Tina — it’ll be worth the wait…romance is not dead. Gold…thanks for the chapter..really do enjoy your story.
Beautiful! A very intimate chapter and no sex needed. So many times we get caught up in the pleasures of sex and lose that ability to relate and be close on a more regular level.
There is the story I have been looking for too!!! I was getting worried!!! Thanks so much for the update and pls post again really soon.[You are the absolute best!!!] don’t tell anyone else though wink, wink!!
YOU ARE KILLING ME WITH THIS. POST THE REST OF THE STORY ALREADY!
THANKS. I AM LOVING IT!
Aww I’m soo happy that Bette had a Freudian slip!! So sweet, goldie! Thank you!!
That was so wonderfully sweet I think I need a glass of milk…Hmmm, Tina must have some kind of resolve to have continued the massage and not jump her bones! That was one of the most heart-stirring chapters I’ve ever read! Thanks!
oh please make that week pass quickly i cant wait any longer what Tina is doing is torture..lol..it was lovely Bette said “i love you” first..cute..now lets make love..lol..ok amazing as always cant wait :o)
wow..i need that massage too..! LOL~
Now that’s a good and hot massage I want to have. Ok they are so beautiful couple and can’t wait to see the reward. Post soon, thanks!