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In the Beginning…………..Chapter 11……..Say What?
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Tina: “You look beautiful.”
Bette: “In this?”
Tina: “Yes, you look beautiful, *****, cute and lovable.”
Bette: “thank you.”
Tina: “Now sit and put your feet up.”
Bette did as she was told. Tina handed her a plate of food and a glass of wine. She got the same for herself and sits down beside her.
They enjoyed a relaxing evening. They watched a movie, lying on the sofa wrapped up in each others arms.
When it was time for bed Tina made an unusual request of Bette.
She took Bette’s hand and led her to the bedroom.
Tina: “Babe I’ve been told I’m a ***** of a masseuse. Some have said I have great hands.”
Bette: “Mmm..really?”
Tina: “Yep, so I was thinking I’d like to show you how good I am.” She smiled at Bette.
Bette: “T, its ok if you’re tired, we can just sleep, and I know I’m tired.”
Tina: “Well I really want to do this for you.” She felt the tense muscles in Bette’s neck.
“See you are tense, let me help.”
Bette: “I have to admit I do love a good massage, and to get one from you wellwould be the best thing ever.”
Tina: “Good, now take off all your clothes and lay face down on the bed.”
Bette: “Uh.T”
Tina: “Babe I’ll behave myself..I promise. I want you to just relax, let me do this.”
Bette: “Alright.”
Tina: “I’ll turn around until you get comfy.”
Bette undressed and lay down on the bed on her stomach. She placed a sheet over her bottom that Tina had laid out.
Tina: “Are you ready?”
Bette: “Yes.”
Tina turned around and looked at Bette lying on her bed. Jesus..she wasn’t as prepared as she pretended to be. Bette was magnificent, her hair flowing over the pillow, her back and legs bare, were exquisite. She took a few deep breaths and told her self to control her libido, just for another week.
Tina: “I’m going to straddle you, ok?”
Bette laughed nervously.
Bette: “Uh yes, and T for future reference you don’t ever have to ask that again.”
Tina: “Smart *****.”
Bette: “Covered *****.”
Tina: “And I’m uncovering it.”
Tina took the sheet off of Bette and looked at the fully naked body of Bette Porter. She looked to the sky and said a silent prayer. A prayer to god to thank her for sending her this beautiful creature, and a prayer to give her self control.
Bette tensed a bit and Tina felt it.
Tina: “its ok babe, I’m just going to massage you now. Relax. I’m putting some oil on my hands.”
Tina started at Bette’s shoulders and neck. Slowly squeezing and rubbing the muscles the length of her neck.
Bette: “Mmm T, that feels nice.”
Tina continued working her hands over the mocha skin. Tina could feel every muscle and knot that was causing Bette to be tense.
Bette: “T you are good at this, you missed your calling.”
Tina: “Shh..relax.”
Bette: “I may fall asleep.feels so good. I need to say somethingbefore I fall to sleep.”
Tina: “Ok, what baby?”
Bette: “I love you.”
Tina: “I love you too.”
Tina moved on to massage Bette’s entire body, her bottom, her thighs and calves. The feel of Bette’s luscious skin under her hands was a definite turn on. Tina kept it under control, but she knew after this, and after they had told each other they loved one another it wouldn’t be long. She knew she couldn’t hold out much longer.
When she finished Tina slid up to Bette’s face. She was sound asleep. God she was beautiful. Tina reached over and kissed her cheek and shoulder and whispered in her ear.
Tina: “You have made me so happy Bette Porter. You will be rewarded..soon.”
Tina lay down beside Bette and draped her arm across her. She relaxed and replayed the evening in her mind, it didn’t take long and Tina was asleep herself with a smile on her face.
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…and there’s the story I came looking for! Very, very sweet. Everyone should have such a love as the one you write. Oh, and reward away…SOON!
Mmmmmmm…. Now THAT was nice! Good chapter! Hell, I’m relaxed after that massage. LOL! Bette sure does have one sexy back! I think I should be Tina’s assistant massuese. More, please. You’re doing great with this story!
dam… where can i get a massage like that… make me an appointment… Goldie… that was sexy… how the hell did tina control her self… esp. after touching her… dam girl…. please continue.. we need to know how bette got out of the bed…
what can i say so fucking cute!! lol
thanx for the update post soon thanks
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great chapter post soon
Everyone get in line after to give Bette amassage. How did Tina control herself> Bette sleeping while this was going on This is a great chapter thanks
Charming, elegant, and just so warm. Thank you so much, a pleasure to read.
K
Wonderful chapter. So sweet. Love this.
Oh yeah, loved it! Now bring on the reward!!!
Right! Poor Tina was crosseyed giving that massage to lucious Porter! lol
I’m sure Bette didn’t mind Tina sraddligng her. Very nice and sweet chapter. Boy, these two have more self control than anyone I know. To even think to have Bette laying naked in front of me. That alone is such a turn on…even when she is sleeping.
This story conveys such amazing love. It gives all of us (who need it) hope for the better tomorrow. Kiitos!
Sensuous ending to a beautiful evening. That’s some willpower. I wouldn’t have fallen asleep no matter how tired I was if she were massaging me!
Absolutley Amazing!
YAAAAY! I love this story! Keep em coming!
Oh yes, you are SO right to make them wait the right and perfect moment ! Being such a huge romantic heart too, I cannot thank you enough for feeling the same way !
And for me, I will always have all the patience in the world waiting for beautiful moments… This way I fully savour stories like yours. (Well, I must confess I’m such a gourmet reading fanfictions of quality !)
This was a really wonderful chapter, Goldfish… The shy and blushing Bette was so irresistible !
You fulfilled your chapter with such a palpable love surrounding everything… What a sweet, delicate feeling, thanks.
And even if she was so right to do this way, I also admire a lot Tina’s self control ! But, at the contrary of many others here, I fully understand why Bette quickly fallen asleep : to express her feelings and hear Tina’s ones in return was such a new and powerful thing for our so-called mighty Bette and I think all the deep emotions of the day were emotionally quite exhausting… in the best way ever, of course !
Now you are giving us a big suspense : will Tina keep such an amazing self-control to be able to wait one week more or will she finally surrunder before the end of this delightfully tender weekend ? That is the question ! (lol)
Thank you so much for such a beautiful and truly romantic story ! You are really talented. A lot.
P.S.: … so, Bette is a chocoholic ? How much I understand that weakness ! I am a pretty big chocoholic too, I’m afraid ! (lol)
I have some knots in my neck and back too, could Tina come over and get them out for me? About time goldfish, but thanks for putting me out of my misery, can’t wait for the next post.
Gold…now that was a sweet & sexy chapter. Tina definitely has self-control. Bette’s freudian slip was great. I’m glad you’re taking time with Bette & Tina — it’ll be worth the wait…romance is not dead. Gold…thanks for the chapter..really do enjoy your story.
Beautiful! A very intimate chapter and no sex needed. So many times we get caught up in the pleasures of sex and lose that ability to relate and be close on a more regular level.
There is the story I have been looking for too!!! I was getting worried!!! Thanks so much for the update and pls post again really soon.[You are the absolute best!!!] don’t tell anyone else though wink, wink!!
YOU ARE KILLING ME WITH THIS. POST THE REST OF THE STORY ALREADY!
THANKS. I AM LOVING IT!
Aww I’m soo happy that Bette had a Freudian slip!! So sweet, goldie! Thank you!!
That was so wonderfully sweet I think I need a glass of milk…Hmmm, Tina must have some kind of resolve to have continued the massage and not jump her bones! That was one of the most heart-stirring chapters I’ve ever read! Thanks!
oh please make that week pass quickly i cant wait any longer what Tina is doing is torture..lol..it was lovely Bette said “i love you” first..cute..now lets make love..lol..ok amazing as always cant wait :o)
wow..i need that massage too..! LOL~
Now that’s a good and hot massage I want to have. Ok they are so beautiful couple and can’t wait to see the reward. Post soon, thanks!