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In the Beginning…………..Chapter 11……..Say What?
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Bette took Tina in her arms and they kissed. They stepped back and looked at one another; both were smiling huge smiles, both with tear stained faces.
Bette started placing small kisses all over Tina’s face. In between each kiss was a declaration of love.
Tina was answering with an I love you of her own.
They couldn’t stop looking at each other. Until they smelled something burning. The sauce was burning.
Tina: “Oh *****!”
Tina ran to the stove and put the pan of sauce into the sink.
Bette: “I’m sorry you burnt the sauce.”
Tina: “It was worth it.”
Bette: “Well I did love it.”
They laughed.
Tina: “Bette you have ruined my plans for this evening.”
Bette: “I’m sorry; hear let me help you clean up. I forgot about the sauce.”
Tina: “No, I mean I was planning on pampering and taking care of you tonight. I know we won’t see each much of each other this next week. So I wanted this weekend to de-stress you.”
Bette: “Oh baby, you have no idea how much better I feel right now, just telling you how I feel, has made me less stressed.”
Tina: “Well I’m going ahead with my plan. I’m going to take care of you.”
Bette: “Mmm.that means?”
Tina: “Not that way.yet.” Tina laughed.
Bette: “Wait Tina I want you to know I didn’t say I love you so that you would make love to me. I said it because I mean it. I wanted to let you know how I feel.”
Tina: “I know, and thank you for being so patient with me.”
Bette: “Anything for you my love.” She took Tina in her arms and just held her.
Tina: “Mmm, you feel so good. But now is your time. You deserve some R&R. So go get changed into the lounge clothes I told you to bring. I’m getting us some food and wine.”
Bette: “You don’t have to do that, let me help.”
Tina: No I insist, please babe let me do this for you.”
Bette kissed her and went to change.
Bette came out in a few minutes wearing a pair of lounge pants and a white tank top. She had let her hair down loose around her face.
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…and there’s the story I came looking for! Very, very sweet. Everyone should have such a love as the one you write. Oh, and reward away…SOON!
Mmmmmmm…. Now THAT was nice! Good chapter! Hell, I’m relaxed after that massage. LOL! Bette sure does have one sexy back! I think I should be Tina’s assistant massuese. More, please. You’re doing great with this story!
dam… where can i get a massage like that… make me an appointment… Goldie… that was sexy… how the hell did tina control her self… esp. after touching her… dam girl…. please continue.. we need to know how bette got out of the bed…
what can i say so fucking cute!! lol
thanx for the update post soon thanks
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great chapter post soon
Everyone get in line after to give Bette amassage. How did Tina control herself> Bette sleeping while this was going on This is a great chapter thanks
Charming, elegant, and just so warm. Thank you so much, a pleasure to read.
K
Wonderful chapter. So sweet. Love this.
Oh yeah, loved it! Now bring on the reward!!!
Right! Poor Tina was crosseyed giving that massage to lucious Porter! lol
I’m sure Bette didn’t mind Tina sraddligng her. Very nice and sweet chapter. Boy, these two have more self control than anyone I know. To even think to have Bette laying naked in front of me. That alone is such a turn on…even when she is sleeping.
This story conveys such amazing love. It gives all of us (who need it) hope for the better tomorrow. Kiitos!
Sensuous ending to a beautiful evening. That’s some willpower. I wouldn’t have fallen asleep no matter how tired I was if she were massaging me!
Absolutley Amazing!
YAAAAY! I love this story! Keep em coming!
Oh yes, you are SO right to make them wait the right and perfect moment ! Being such a huge romantic heart too, I cannot thank you enough for feeling the same way !
And for me, I will always have all the patience in the world waiting for beautiful moments… This way I fully savour stories like yours. (Well, I must confess I’m such a gourmet reading fanfictions of quality !)
This was a really wonderful chapter, Goldfish… The shy and blushing Bette was so irresistible !
You fulfilled your chapter with such a palpable love surrounding everything… What a sweet, delicate feeling, thanks.
And even if she was so right to do this way, I also admire a lot Tina’s self control ! But, at the contrary of many others here, I fully understand why Bette quickly fallen asleep : to express her feelings and hear Tina’s ones in return was such a new and powerful thing for our so-called mighty Bette and I think all the deep emotions of the day were emotionally quite exhausting… in the best way ever, of course !
Now you are giving us a big suspense : will Tina keep such an amazing self-control to be able to wait one week more or will she finally surrunder before the end of this delightfully tender weekend ? That is the question ! (lol)
Thank you so much for such a beautiful and truly romantic story ! You are really talented. A lot.
P.S.: … so, Bette is a chocoholic ? How much I understand that weakness ! I am a pretty big chocoholic too, I’m afraid ! (lol)
I have some knots in my neck and back too, could Tina come over and get them out for me? About time goldfish, but thanks for putting me out of my misery, can’t wait for the next post.
Gold…now that was a sweet & sexy chapter. Tina definitely has self-control. Bette’s freudian slip was great. I’m glad you’re taking time with Bette & Tina — it’ll be worth the wait…romance is not dead. Gold…thanks for the chapter..really do enjoy your story.
Beautiful! A very intimate chapter and no sex needed. So many times we get caught up in the pleasures of sex and lose that ability to relate and be close on a more regular level.
There is the story I have been looking for too!!! I was getting worried!!! Thanks so much for the update and pls post again really soon.[You are the absolute best!!!] don’t tell anyone else though wink, wink!!
YOU ARE KILLING ME WITH THIS. POST THE REST OF THE STORY ALREADY!
THANKS. I AM LOVING IT!
Aww I’m soo happy that Bette had a Freudian slip!! So sweet, goldie! Thank you!!
That was so wonderfully sweet I think I need a glass of milk…Hmmm, Tina must have some kind of resolve to have continued the massage and not jump her bones! That was one of the most heart-stirring chapters I’ve ever read! Thanks!
oh please make that week pass quickly i cant wait any longer what Tina is doing is torture..lol..it was lovely Bette said “i love you” first..cute..now lets make love..lol..ok amazing as always cant wait :o)
wow..i need that massage too..! LOL~
Now that’s a good and hot massage I want to have. Ok they are so beautiful couple and can’t wait to see the reward. Post soon, thanks!