Fan Fiction
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In the Beginning…………..Chapter 6…………Bon Apetite
Bette: What?
Bette:
Bette: I was lucky enough to have a wonderful evening with a beautiful woman.
Bette:
Bette: I really like her a lot, and well Al..I do feel different with her..I dont know what it is Im feeling.
Bette: Stop it Al, no one cares.
Bette is laughing so hard tears are falling down her cheeks.
Bette: Just picturing you again in that cape and tights.
They both laughed.
Tina had slept like a baby. She went to sleep thinking of Bette and woke up the same way. She loved the date, the concert, kissing Bette on the couch. Mmm. What a wonderful memory.
Tina got around and was drinking coffee and reading the paper. Her usual Sunday routine. She decided to call Bette, she had an idea and besides she wanted to thank her for last night.
Alice and Bette were still chatting and enjoying breakfast when the phone rang.
Bette: Hello?
Tina: Good morning Bette.
Bette: Hi Tina.
Tina: Did I wake you?
Bette: No, just having some coffee with
Tina: Im sorry, Ill let you go.
Bette: No, its ok.
Tina: Well I just wanted to thank you again for last night. It was wonderful.
Bette: Youre welcome and I loved every minute.
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(42 votes, average: 3.81 out of 5)
Damn girl, don’t stop now! Bring on the dessert!
Tinas body for sure is the dessert..lol..but who whouldt a dessert like that???..lol..great chapter i cant wait for more bring it on thanks :-0
… and thanks to you, Goldfish, we lucky readers are savouring your new chapter like a dessert ! Delicious…
Just read all of the chapters to this story..keep it going and let’s have dessert.
Ok I have to agreed with everyone else….Bring on the dessert!
“Bette was thinking of what dessert could be.” Aren’t we all?
woo hoo! And to quote Shades… “Damn girl, don’t stop now! Bring on the dessert!”
Stick a fork in me also. I’m done this is awesome.
Yeah I’m agree with Nanc and you can’t leave us like this please post soon, can’t wait to see the next one. Thanks!
I smell a nc-17 cooking with some pasta and sauce.
Bring it on girl I waiting
OH! You go goldfish!!! Bring on dessert, like now!! I love you for writing this story…it’s one of my favorites!!! Thanks!
Damn what a way to leave us hangin, BRING ON THE DESSERT …. and maybe T might give into her emotions/feelings!!!!
Damn baby, you’re so sweet! You know, seems your readers want Tina as dessert but I’d much rather have a goldfish ;) Alice is a riot – lmao!
K
Wonderful and sexy chapter. Love it, can’t wait for more.
Picnics are so romantic. I love the sexual tension building between B&T. Thanks, goldfish!
Megga- BRING ON THE DESSERT GOLD! Haha, love this story, please post again soon.
Delightful!
Here’s a quote from your story:
Bette: “You’re welcome and I loved every minute.â€
Thank God! Someone who knows the proper use of a contraction! Did they stop teaching that in school?
THANK YOU!!!
OHHHHHHH Hot stuff!! I love the cherry tomatoes!!
They may wish to count, that they both still have five fingers on each hand ! Very sexy, very cute, dessert sound like a hedonistic experience ! And the crowd scream, encore !
Bette is Dessert!!!
Cool. Alice was hilarious in this chapter. Reminds me of old school Alice…from season one….before the writers “killed” her charcter in season 2.
Shit Gold – bring on the dessert. Holy smoky. Post soon
Can’t believe you stopped there… ;) Bring it on…dessert!!
Wonderful chapter, goldfish! I love how you captured Alice – so damn funny! I also love the suspense building between B&T – ah, never enough of sweet moments between them for this fan :) Last but not least, I just love how you write – a mix of tenderness, laughter and hope…well done!
Great Chapter.. sorry I missed the chapter before.. but i got to read.. and Im commenting on both here.. hehehe.. hey girly… Im being GOOD LOL…. GF.. you know i love your writing.. the date and this second date.. I can feel the Love!!! hehe.. Cant wait til the next chapter! Woo! hehe
stop with the cliff hanger stuff post soon
Erm – please please post next segment!!!