Fan Fiction
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In the Beginning…………..Chapter 6…………Bon Apetite
Tina: The park is just around the corner I thought we could walk there, if thats ok.
Bette: Sure, Its a great day to walk.
Tina: Ok, let me get everything.
Bette: Here hand me something to carry.
Tina handed Bette a picnic basket, while she carried a small cooler with drinks and a blanket for them to sit on.
They walked and talked to the park, it was only a few blocks. Once there they picked a spot to sit. Tina spread out the blanket and they sat down.
Tina: Would you like something to drink?
Bette: Yes, what do you have packed in there?
Tina: Well I have water and wine, which do you prefer?
Bette: Lets have a glass of wine and relax a bit before we have our dinner.
Tina: Okay. Tina got out the glasses and poured them each some wine.
Bette: So tell me about your family.
Tina: Ok, I have a younger sister; shes in college back home. My mom and dad still live in
Bette: I have an older half sister; my mom and dad were divorced when I was in high school. They both still live in
Tina: What did they think when you told them.well.when you told them you liked women.
Bette: Ah good questionmy mom was ok with it and very supportive, but my dad .lets just say hes still trying to say its a phase Im going thru. Bette laughed.
They talked and got to know one another better. Conversation was never uneasy between them.
Bette: Ok.Im dying to know whats in the picnic basket. It smells delicious.
Tina: Are you ready to eat?
Bette: Yes, my stomach is starting to make noises.
Tina: Ok then lets start with some appetizers.
She pulled out a container of cherry tomatoes stuffed with a crme cheese mixture. She took one and put it up to Bettes mouth. Bette opened her mouth. Tina placed the tomato on her tongue.
Bette: mmmmthis is so good.
Tina: Glad you like it.
Tina took out some crackers then and spread them with a smoked salmon spread.
Tina: Let me feed you. I love watching you enjoy what Ive made.
Bette: I could get used to thisyou taking care of me..feeding me.
Tina: Good. Tina took the cracker and placed it in Bettes mouth.
God it was so sensual, feeding her. Watching her tongue take it inside her mouth. Watching her tongue lick her lips.
Tina reached up and touched Bettes lips with her fingers. Touching them so softly, Bette could barely feel it. But the spark she felt. It ran from Tinas fingers thru her entire body, settling deep inside her.
Bette: Ok my turn, let me feed you. Its only fair.
Tina: Ok.
Bette got one of the tomatoes and placed it in Tinas mouth. She watched as Tina sucked it inside. Her mouth chewing, some of it left out on her lip. Bette reached up and wiped it off with her fingers. She took her fingers into her own mouth and licked it off.
They continued this game back and forth with the rest of the meal Tina had prepared.
Before they could finish the food, they were both thinking the same thoughts.
Bette: If we keep this upwe will be putting on quite the show for the others in the park.
Tina: Yeah, I think we should go back to my place..I made dessert for us.
Bette: You did?
Tina: Oh yes.I did.
Bette: What is it?
Tina: Hmmyoull just have to wait and see. Its a surprise.
They packed quickly to head back to Tinas place.
Bette was thinking of what dessert could be. God..Shes so *****, feeding me, letting me feed herwhat could she have in mind for dessert.her mind was whirling with the possibilities.
Tina was indeed wanting dessert. But the strawberries and crme she had at home for them wasnt what she was craving at this moment.
TBC..
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(42 votes, average: 3.81 out of 5)
Damn girl, don’t stop now! Bring on the dessert!
Tinas body for sure is the dessert..lol..but who whouldt a dessert like that???..lol..great chapter i cant wait for more bring it on thanks :-0
… and thanks to you, Goldfish, we lucky readers are savouring your new chapter like a dessert ! Delicious…
Just read all of the chapters to this story..keep it going and let’s have dessert.
Ok I have to agreed with everyone else….Bring on the dessert!
“Bette was thinking of what dessert could be.” Aren’t we all?
woo hoo! And to quote Shades… “Damn girl, don’t stop now! Bring on the dessert!”
Stick a fork in me also. I’m done this is awesome.
Yeah I’m agree with Nanc and you can’t leave us like this please post soon, can’t wait to see the next one. Thanks!
I smell a nc-17 cooking with some pasta and sauce.
Bring it on girl I waiting
OH! You go goldfish!!! Bring on dessert, like now!! I love you for writing this story…it’s one of my favorites!!! Thanks!
Damn what a way to leave us hangin, BRING ON THE DESSERT …. and maybe T might give into her emotions/feelings!!!!
Damn baby, you’re so sweet! You know, seems your readers want Tina as dessert but I’d much rather have a goldfish ;) Alice is a riot – lmao!
K
Wonderful and sexy chapter. Love it, can’t wait for more.
Picnics are so romantic. I love the sexual tension building between B&T. Thanks, goldfish!
Megga- BRING ON THE DESSERT GOLD! Haha, love this story, please post again soon.
Delightful!
Here’s a quote from your story:
Bette: “You’re welcome and I loved every minute.â€
Thank God! Someone who knows the proper use of a contraction! Did they stop teaching that in school?
THANK YOU!!!
OHHHHHHH Hot stuff!! I love the cherry tomatoes!!
They may wish to count, that they both still have five fingers on each hand ! Very sexy, very cute, dessert sound like a hedonistic experience ! And the crowd scream, encore !
Bette is Dessert!!!
Cool. Alice was hilarious in this chapter. Reminds me of old school Alice…from season one….before the writers “killed” her charcter in season 2.
Shit Gold – bring on the dessert. Holy smoky. Post soon
Can’t believe you stopped there… ;) Bring it on…dessert!!
Wonderful chapter, goldfish! I love how you captured Alice – so damn funny! I also love the suspense building between B&T – ah, never enough of sweet moments between them for this fan :) Last but not least, I just love how you write – a mix of tenderness, laughter and hope…well done!
Great Chapter.. sorry I missed the chapter before.. but i got to read.. and Im commenting on both here.. hehehe.. hey girly… Im being GOOD LOL…. GF.. you know i love your writing.. the date and this second date.. I can feel the Love!!! hehe.. Cant wait til the next chapter! Woo! hehe
stop with the cliff hanger stuff post soon
Erm – please please post next segment!!!