Fan Fiction
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In the Beginning…………..Chapter 6…………Bon Apetite
Tina: I was wondering if you would like to go on a picnic this evening.
Bette: Id love to. What do I need to bring?
Tina: Just yourself. Theres a park not far from my house that people picnic at all the time, I thought we could go there.
Bette: Sounds great, what time should I come by?
Tina: Around six if thats ok.
Bette: Ill be there, and Tina?
Tina: Yes?
Bette: I cant wait to see you.
Tina: Me neither.
They giggled like school girls.
Tina: Ill let you go, have a good day Bette and Ill see you soon.
Bette: Looking forward to it, bye T.
Bette hung up and glared at
Bette: What face?
Bette: Jealous Al?
They laughed and Bette hugged her friend.
Bette: I still love you Al.
She says as she runs her hands down her own body.
Bette laughed at her and shook her head.
Bette: Whatever Alwhatever.
Bette: Thanks for breakfast.
Bette walked her to the door.
Bette: Bye
Bette: Well Al if you go out tonight, leave the tights and cape at home.
Bette got to Tinas with five minutes to spare. She had stopped and got a bouquet of flowers for Tina.
Tina opened the door and they both were smiling so happy to see each other.
Bette: Hi, these are for you. She handed Tina the flowers.
Tina: Thank you theyre beautiful. Come on in.
Bette came in while Tina found a vase for the flowers.
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(42 votes, average: 3.81 out of 5)
Damn girl, don’t stop now! Bring on the dessert!
Tinas body for sure is the dessert..lol..but who whouldt a dessert like that???..lol..great chapter i cant wait for more bring it on thanks :-0
… and thanks to you, Goldfish, we lucky readers are savouring your new chapter like a dessert ! Delicious…
Just read all of the chapters to this story..keep it going and let’s have dessert.
Ok I have to agreed with everyone else….Bring on the dessert!
“Bette was thinking of what dessert could be.” Aren’t we all?
woo hoo! And to quote Shades… “Damn girl, don’t stop now! Bring on the dessert!”
Stick a fork in me also. I’m done this is awesome.
Yeah I’m agree with Nanc and you can’t leave us like this please post soon, can’t wait to see the next one. Thanks!
I smell a nc-17 cooking with some pasta and sauce.
Bring it on girl I waiting
OH! You go goldfish!!! Bring on dessert, like now!! I love you for writing this story…it’s one of my favorites!!! Thanks!
Damn what a way to leave us hangin, BRING ON THE DESSERT …. and maybe T might give into her emotions/feelings!!!!
Damn baby, you’re so sweet! You know, seems your readers want Tina as dessert but I’d much rather have a goldfish ;) Alice is a riot – lmao!
K
Wonderful and sexy chapter. Love it, can’t wait for more.
Picnics are so romantic. I love the sexual tension building between B&T. Thanks, goldfish!
Megga- BRING ON THE DESSERT GOLD! Haha, love this story, please post again soon.
Delightful!
Here’s a quote from your story:
Bette: “You’re welcome and I loved every minute.â€
Thank God! Someone who knows the proper use of a contraction! Did they stop teaching that in school?
THANK YOU!!!
OHHHHHHH Hot stuff!! I love the cherry tomatoes!!
They may wish to count, that they both still have five fingers on each hand ! Very sexy, very cute, dessert sound like a hedonistic experience ! And the crowd scream, encore !
Bette is Dessert!!!
Cool. Alice was hilarious in this chapter. Reminds me of old school Alice…from season one….before the writers “killed” her charcter in season 2.
Shit Gold – bring on the dessert. Holy smoky. Post soon
Can’t believe you stopped there… ;) Bring it on…dessert!!
Wonderful chapter, goldfish! I love how you captured Alice – so damn funny! I also love the suspense building between B&T – ah, never enough of sweet moments between them for this fan :) Last but not least, I just love how you write – a mix of tenderness, laughter and hope…well done!
Great Chapter.. sorry I missed the chapter before.. but i got to read.. and Im commenting on both here.. hehehe.. hey girly… Im being GOOD LOL…. GF.. you know i love your writing.. the date and this second date.. I can feel the Love!!! hehe.. Cant wait til the next chapter! Woo! hehe
stop with the cliff hanger stuff post soon
Erm – please please post next segment!!!