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In the Beginning……………………Chapter 8…….Thinking It Over
Tina: What time is it?
Bette: Its
Tina: Oh god, I need to get around too. I forgot it was Monday.
Bette got out of the bed and went to the bathroom. She changed back into the clothes she was wearing the night before. She came out Tina had a cup of coffee for her.
Tina: Here you go, for your ride home. She handed her the coffee.
Bette: Thanks, thats sweet.
Tina: Youre welcome, so do you have a busy day planned today?
Bette: Just the usual, I have to look at some ways to display the different artists work and do some paper work. Are you busy today?
Tina: No just finalizing some plans for a few events coming up. Some daily stuff, thats it.
Bette: Ok, well I better go. She reached over and took Tinas hand. Thank you for a wonderful evening, and night. Ill call you later. She pulled Tina in for a kiss.
The kiss was the sweetest kiss Tina could ever remember getting. One of those Ill miss you and can this feel any better kisses. The kind of kiss we all crave. They broke the kiss and Tina walked Bette to the door.
Tina: Have a good day, Ill talk to you later.
Bette: Thanks for the coffee, bye T.
Tina got showered and changed. Once she was at work she went to her office and shut the door. David and Allison were each working on menus and calls. She could be alone awhile. She called her best friend, her sister.
Julie: Hello?
Tina: Hey sis.
Julie: Tina, hey how are you?
Tina: Im good, and you?
Julie: Good, one more semester and Ill be out of here. Woohoo!!
Tina: Im so proud of you Jules, You are going to be a great as a social worker. You are wonderful with kids and you have a huge heart of gold.
Julie: Thanks Tina, I take after my big sister.
Tina: So are you busy right now, off to class or anything?
Julie: No, you know my schedule; Im free for the next hour. Whats up? Something in your voice tells me you need my great wisdom.
Tina: You know me too well sis.
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(42 votes, average: 3.69 out of 5)
It just keeps getting better and better!!!!!!! post soon!!!!!
This is just great! Please post soon.
K
wonderful story, just so sweet. I love it, can’t get enough.
Love your story. The pace is so sweet and Tina is so into Bette as Bette is with Tina. Really lovely pace. Pls. continue. Great job, Gold.
Add Julie to the list of great siblings on this site! Their conversation was very natural. It’s good to see Tina with asympathetic family member she can share her feelings with.
I also like that Tina has the resolve to do what is best for herself – shewants be candid with Bette and let the chips fall where they may. Will a woman as attractive as Bette, that takes self confidence.
Thanks!
*happy sighs* …. I don’t know what else to say, so, I’m going to keep repeating myself… I love this story! It’s so sweet and cute! (I,also, love your other story, too. Remember that one? :p )
nice- love what you’re doing…
Goldie… just wanted to let you know i found your stories again… and i am so glad i did… love your take on their beginning… tina could cook for me anytime…
And you can swim in my L Shaped Pool anytime… love your story… please continue
This is a great story! Love it!!! Please post soon!
I caught up with your story after vacation. It’s just wonderful and can’t wait for more…I like the very slow pace, it makes all of us wait anxiously for the next step.
I like this story. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
omg i love everything you wirte!!! lol your like i dunno but whatever it is keep it up cause its AMAZING!!!! well please post soon !! thanx
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Thank you for posting another chapter of your story!! As i have said before i am just loving it.
Sweet fate ! Sweet love ! Sweet story – thank you, a pleasure as always, keep going please ! : )
Bette’s been through it too, she’ll be understanding and patient.
Woo… great chapter GF!!! Loved it all.. hehehe..so cute Tina talking to her sister, but yeah Tina has it bad heheh but its sooo good.. hahaha cant wait for the next chapter!.. Fantastic job! :)
The way Tina and Julie ended their converstion was corny ,cute , and funny. I’m really enjoying this story.
Loving the story – you write the inner thoughts so well – looking forward to your next post
Great chapter….I don’t think Tina has anything to worry about…Post soon!
OMG Gold! You SOOO got the sister thing! Haha, whenever I call mine she says the same damn thing “you need my great wisdom once again?” Haha, too funny. I love this story, the pace is fantastic- it’s so nice to see them actually falling in love rather than jumping right into it. Please post again soon!
Bellissimo, bellissimo catering indeed ! I’m still reading your delicious story like I’d savour a very sweet dessert… wonderful feeling !
I love very much this marvellous complicity between Tina and Julie : who wouldn’t dream to have such a warm, funny, supportive and wise sister like that ? Especially an only-daughter like me, of course !
Thank you so much, Goldfish !
i´m pretty sure Bette will wait for Tina as long as she wants cuz they belong together..great chapter post soon please thanks
I love the pace of your story and your wrighting is so real i can’t wait for Bette and Tina to take the next step. I am sure Bette will give Tina all the time she needs because the end result will be sorth the wait. Post soon
I know I sound like the McDonald’s slogn here but in regards to your story…I’M LOVIN’ IT!!! The pace is great (sigh) – to fall in love – this is so sweet! More please goldfish…you are a wonderful author :)
Great chapter. I guess it’s my destiny to wait patiently for your next chapter. Thanks.
OMG! WOOHOO! WHOA! That was so Amazing Written I’m fouling I’m Love of you’re Story WHOA! I Love it Goldfish don’t take too long to posted again PLEASE LOL! THANKS It’s Beautiful Story and it’s really Sweet of Tina and her sister that was really Great their have a good sister relationship Please post soon.
I just caught up with your story. I love it! so sweet and the pace is perfect, they need to go slow and learn about each other. thanks and please post again soon.
Damn this is good and Tina’s sister is seem nice and fun, like it. Ok let see what’s next for Bette and Tina. Post soon, thanks!