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In the Beginning……………………Chapter 8…….Thinking It Over
Tina: No, shes so sweet. She has known since college she is a *****. She has told me she wants to go slow, wants it to be my decision. She stops if we get ..too heated.
Julie: Tina have you always felt like you might like women?
Tina: Not really, I mean in college I felt like I might be attracted to some girls, but Ive never acted on it.
Julie: So do you enjoy men?
Tina: ***** with men has been ok, but Ive always felt something was missing.
Julie: Ok, so tell me sis. How do you really feel, deep in your heart? Is she what you want?
Tina: I feelgod I feel like shes the part of me that Ive been missing. I feel we are meant to be together. I feel like I could so fall in love with her and be happy forever.
Julie: Whoashit thats some intense feelings Tina.
Tina: What do I do? Do I change my life? Do I take a risk? What will mom and dad say?
Julie: Tina I love you. No matter what I will always love you. I think you should take your time. Make sure this is what you want. Dont say anything to mom and dad until you know. Take it slow. Get to know her. Date. Make her wine and dine you.
Tina: Oh my god, guess what she did?
Julie: What?
Tina: She got us tickets to Aerosmith and I met Steven Tyler and Joe Perry!
Julie: No way!
Tina: Yes, that was like our first date. Julie: You are kidding me, right?
Tina: No, I swear, it was fantastic. By the way I have something for you from the concert.
Julie: Well I love her already, damn that is so not fair. I love Aerosmith.
Tina: I know.
Julie: Jeez, Do you hear yourself? When you talk about her, you sound so happy Tina. Ive never heard you sound like that before.
Tina: Really, I do?
Julie: Yes, well you did sound like that when you talked about Jessie. She laughed.
Tina: Hey, I loved that dog. She was my best friend, besides you that is.
Julie: Of course, so I say follow your heart sis, be yourself. Let fate take over.
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(42 votes, average: 3.69 out of 5)
It just keeps getting better and better!!!!!!! post soon!!!!!
This is just great! Please post soon.
K
wonderful story, just so sweet. I love it, can’t get enough.
Love your story. The pace is so sweet and Tina is so into Bette as Bette is with Tina. Really lovely pace. Pls. continue. Great job, Gold.
Add Julie to the list of great siblings on this site! Their conversation was very natural. It’s good to see Tina with asympathetic family member she can share her feelings with.
I also like that Tina has the resolve to do what is best for herself – shewants be candid with Bette and let the chips fall where they may. Will a woman as attractive as Bette, that takes self confidence.
Thanks!
*happy sighs* …. I don’t know what else to say, so, I’m going to keep repeating myself… I love this story! It’s so sweet and cute! (I,also, love your other story, too. Remember that one? :p )
nice- love what you’re doing…
Goldie… just wanted to let you know i found your stories again… and i am so glad i did… love your take on their beginning… tina could cook for me anytime…
And you can swim in my L Shaped Pool anytime… love your story… please continue
This is a great story! Love it!!! Please post soon!
I caught up with your story after vacation. It’s just wonderful and can’t wait for more…I like the very slow pace, it makes all of us wait anxiously for the next step.
I like this story. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
omg i love everything you wirte!!! lol your like i dunno but whatever it is keep it up cause its AMAZING!!!! well please post soon !! thanx
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Thank you for posting another chapter of your story!! As i have said before i am just loving it.
Sweet fate ! Sweet love ! Sweet story – thank you, a pleasure as always, keep going please ! : )
Bette’s been through it too, she’ll be understanding and patient.
Woo… great chapter GF!!! Loved it all.. hehehe..so cute Tina talking to her sister, but yeah Tina has it bad heheh but its sooo good.. hahaha cant wait for the next chapter!.. Fantastic job! :)
The way Tina and Julie ended their converstion was corny ,cute , and funny. I’m really enjoying this story.
Loving the story – you write the inner thoughts so well – looking forward to your next post
Great chapter….I don’t think Tina has anything to worry about…Post soon!
OMG Gold! You SOOO got the sister thing! Haha, whenever I call mine she says the same damn thing “you need my great wisdom once again?” Haha, too funny. I love this story, the pace is fantastic- it’s so nice to see them actually falling in love rather than jumping right into it. Please post again soon!
Bellissimo, bellissimo catering indeed ! I’m still reading your delicious story like I’d savour a very sweet dessert… wonderful feeling !
I love very much this marvellous complicity between Tina and Julie : who wouldn’t dream to have such a warm, funny, supportive and wise sister like that ? Especially an only-daughter like me, of course !
Thank you so much, Goldfish !
i´m pretty sure Bette will wait for Tina as long as she wants cuz they belong together..great chapter post soon please thanks
I love the pace of your story and your wrighting is so real i can’t wait for Bette and Tina to take the next step. I am sure Bette will give Tina all the time she needs because the end result will be sorth the wait. Post soon
I know I sound like the McDonald’s slogn here but in regards to your story…I’M LOVIN’ IT!!! The pace is great (sigh) – to fall in love – this is so sweet! More please goldfish…you are a wonderful author :)
Great chapter. I guess it’s my destiny to wait patiently for your next chapter. Thanks.
OMG! WOOHOO! WHOA! That was so Amazing Written I’m fouling I’m Love of you’re Story WHOA! I Love it Goldfish don’t take too long to posted again PLEASE LOL! THANKS It’s Beautiful Story and it’s really Sweet of Tina and her sister that was really Great their have a good sister relationship Please post soon.
I just caught up with your story. I love it! so sweet and the pace is perfect, they need to go slow and learn about each other. thanks and please post again soon.
Damn this is good and Tina’s sister is seem nice and fun, like it. Ok let see what’s next for Bette and Tina. Post soon, thanks!