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In the Beginning……………………Chapter 8…….Thinking It Over
Julie: So tell me, whats bothering you?
Tina: Well..I met someone.
Julie: Thats great, are you in love?
Tina: Not yet.
Julie: That means you might be headed in that direction, right?
Tina: Right, I could fall in love very easily with this person.
Julie: Ok, so whats so bad about that? Do you want to focus on your new business or you dont want to get involved with any one right now?
Tina: No, business is great, I love the idea of companionship, of having someone her in LA for me.
Julie: Ok, dont tell me hes married. ***** Tina, you didnt get involved with a married man did you?
Tina: No, thats not it, not married.
Julie: Well then unless hes a mass murdered or some kind of pervert whats the problem?
Tina: Uhwell Jules.hes heis a she.
Julie: WHAT? What did you just say?
Tina: I saidIts a woman Julie, Im falling for a woman.
Julie: UhWow.
Tina: Say something.
Julie: Ok, well you have surprised me.so tell me about her.
Tina: Her name is Bette Porter. She is an art gallery owner, a Yale graduate. Shes smart, fun to be around, and beautiful.
Julie: Ok tell me how she makes you feel.
Tina: Ah.thats the thing. I feel so at ease with her. So comfortable. She makes me feel like Im the only one in the room when we go out together. I cant wait to see her again, when we leave one another. I feel this intense attraction to her, both her mind and her body.
Julie: Oh my sis, you got it bad.
Tina: What? How do you know?
Julie: I can hear it in your voice. I know you are sitting there twirling your hair with your fingers, and you have that damn dreamy look on your face as you talk about her.
Tina laughed.
Tina: Uh.ok youre right, but Julie its incredible. Ive never felt like this, when we kiss it
Julie interrupts
Julie: WHAT? Youve kissed her? Oh my god, tell me more.
Tina: Well, weve kissed a few times and when we do, god its so spectacular so electrifying its perfect. The kind of kisses you dream of.
Julie: Have you..wellhave youhad ***** with her?
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(42 votes, average: 3.69 out of 5)
It just keeps getting better and better!!!!!!! post soon!!!!!
This is just great! Please post soon.
K
wonderful story, just so sweet. I love it, can’t get enough.
Love your story. The pace is so sweet and Tina is so into Bette as Bette is with Tina. Really lovely pace. Pls. continue. Great job, Gold.
Add Julie to the list of great siblings on this site! Their conversation was very natural. It’s good to see Tina with asympathetic family member she can share her feelings with.
I also like that Tina has the resolve to do what is best for herself – shewants be candid with Bette and let the chips fall where they may. Will a woman as attractive as Bette, that takes self confidence.
Thanks!
*happy sighs* …. I don’t know what else to say, so, I’m going to keep repeating myself… I love this story! It’s so sweet and cute! (I,also, love your other story, too. Remember that one? :p )
nice- love what you’re doing…
Goldie… just wanted to let you know i found your stories again… and i am so glad i did… love your take on their beginning… tina could cook for me anytime…
And you can swim in my L Shaped Pool anytime… love your story… please continue
This is a great story! Love it!!! Please post soon!
I caught up with your story after vacation. It’s just wonderful and can’t wait for more…I like the very slow pace, it makes all of us wait anxiously for the next step.
I like this story. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
omg i love everything you wirte!!! lol your like i dunno but whatever it is keep it up cause its AMAZING!!!! well please post soon !! thanx
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Thank you for posting another chapter of your story!! As i have said before i am just loving it.
Sweet fate ! Sweet love ! Sweet story – thank you, a pleasure as always, keep going please ! : )
Bette’s been through it too, she’ll be understanding and patient.
Woo… great chapter GF!!! Loved it all.. hehehe..so cute Tina talking to her sister, but yeah Tina has it bad heheh but its sooo good.. hahaha cant wait for the next chapter!.. Fantastic job! :)
The way Tina and Julie ended their converstion was corny ,cute , and funny. I’m really enjoying this story.
Loving the story – you write the inner thoughts so well – looking forward to your next post
Great chapter….I don’t think Tina has anything to worry about…Post soon!
OMG Gold! You SOOO got the sister thing! Haha, whenever I call mine she says the same damn thing “you need my great wisdom once again?” Haha, too funny. I love this story, the pace is fantastic- it’s so nice to see them actually falling in love rather than jumping right into it. Please post again soon!
Bellissimo, bellissimo catering indeed ! I’m still reading your delicious story like I’d savour a very sweet dessert… wonderful feeling !
I love very much this marvellous complicity between Tina and Julie : who wouldn’t dream to have such a warm, funny, supportive and wise sister like that ? Especially an only-daughter like me, of course !
Thank you so much, Goldfish !
i´m pretty sure Bette will wait for Tina as long as she wants cuz they belong together..great chapter post soon please thanks
I love the pace of your story and your wrighting is so real i can’t wait for Bette and Tina to take the next step. I am sure Bette will give Tina all the time she needs because the end result will be sorth the wait. Post soon
I know I sound like the McDonald’s slogn here but in regards to your story…I’M LOVIN’ IT!!! The pace is great (sigh) – to fall in love – this is so sweet! More please goldfish…you are a wonderful author :)
Great chapter. I guess it’s my destiny to wait patiently for your next chapter. Thanks.
OMG! WOOHOO! WHOA! That was so Amazing Written I’m fouling I’m Love of you’re Story WHOA! I Love it Goldfish don’t take too long to posted again PLEASE LOL! THANKS It’s Beautiful Story and it’s really Sweet of Tina and her sister that was really Great their have a good sister relationship Please post soon.
I just caught up with your story. I love it! so sweet and the pace is perfect, they need to go slow and learn about each other. thanks and please post again soon.
Damn this is good and Tina’s sister is seem nice and fun, like it. Ok let see what’s next for Bette and Tina. Post soon, thanks!