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    In Your Lies – chapter one

    Story written on October 27, 2005 by smile12345.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=57320
    Author Notes:

    A new Bette and Tina beginning, sort of…same characters, different story.


    Chapter one

    *Knock knock knock knock*

    The continuous knock on the door was impatient and urgent. Who the ***** could it be on a Friday night at 1:30 in the morning?

    “Oh my God, I’m coming!” Kelly Porter shouted across the living room while turning on the lights, and continuing, “Who is it?”

    There was no reply. Tina heard Kelly’s question, but somehow, the words weren’t able to escape out of her mouth. Why? Well, there were several reasons for this: first off, she was still supposed to be at her bachelorette party; second, Tina couldn’t face Kelly, not after she found out Kelly was in love with Eric, her fianc; and lastly, Kelly knew her sister, Bette, was heartbroken over Tina’s engagement. Whether or not Kelly knew that Tina was in love with Bette was a whole other story.

    The lack of reply from the mysterious person on the other end of the door frightened Kelly. They lived in a safe neighborhood, but it was late, and *****, it might be some crazy out there. She continued to walk towards her door, and looked into the peep hole when she finally released her breath, ‘Tina?’ Without further hesitation, Kelly opened the door.

    Opening just a small crack, Kelly blocked the front door and asked, well, more like demanded, “What are you doing here? It’s late, and shouldn’t you be at your bachelorette party?”

    “I need to talk to Bette,” Tina walked a few steps trying to enter into their apartment, but was blocked by Kelly.

    “She’s asleep, and I think it’s better if you left,” Kelly ordered. She tried closing the door to push Tina out, but Tina wouldn’t allow Kelly to do so.

    “Please Kelly, IIIneed to see her,” Tina begged. She knew herself she had no right to see Bette, no right to be near her because all Tina had done since she said ‘yes’ to Eric’s proposal was hurt Bette.

    Tina had no intentions of hurting Bette, ever. Bette Porter was the last person on earth Tina wanted to hurt; yet, she was the person that caused Bette the most pain. Call this all a nightmare, a joke, call it *****, no, it was fate. Something none of these people had ever expected to happen, happened. The impact didn’t just hit Bette and Tina, but it hit everyone around them, and everyone was injured in one way or another: physically or emotionally.

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    2. Where have you been I’ve missed!

      This was a good start and you did just fine for your first NC-17, I’m impressed. But if you ever think you need a proof reader just let me know.

      I hope you intend on continuing ‘Letting Go’ as well, because I was completely wrapped up in that story.

    7. You did fine on the NC-17–better than I’ve ever done. There’s a lot of stuff I can’t bring myself to write, so I understand. So hang in; you’re doing great.

    14. Hey..you can open your eyes now! It was great. I’m with albeez on this one..please continue if there is no wedding on Saturday. Thank you.it was beautiful

    15. Hey, where have you been?
      Oh wow… I love your Tina… direct and aggresive :) Oh gosh, I shouldn’t be readin this at work… I’m sooooo screwed… and with this NC-17 stuff somemore…
      Anyway… yes… please do continue with this one… and ‘Letting Go’ too :)

    23. YA BIG TEASE! I can’t BELIEVE you left off there! Of course it’s good! What on earth are you talking about? I pray to the higher beings that be (which really is you in this case, since you’re the writer and all)that Tina DOES NOT LEAVE Bette in order to marry Eric. . .it would just be a cryin shame. . .
      please post again soon!

    24. Continue? By all means. All of us want to see this story through to its logical conclusion, whatever that may be. You know we love “our girls” and want to see them together, happy and in love, and want to go along day by day to see how they accomplish this wonderful life that they both seem to want. Great post. Your NC-17 was good, much better than I could have done. i can’t write sex scenes either. Embarassing. Thanks for the post.

    33. What a hellava place to stop! Continue? What a foolish question…I think you had better or you are going to have your reputation trashed as just a teaser! Just kidding….great beginning. Please post again soon.

    36. You really have to continue smile….I have missed your story….I can see you are writing on a new one..is the old one going to continue or not??You´re doing great for your first NC-17…that was really fantastic smile…don´t be shy and do continue…we sooooo want more.

    38. TBC? Are you kidding? Yes Dammit! You’re doing a great job for the first NC-17… okay, now c’mon continue… tease :P. Missed you… glad you’re back!

    45. ok now that my horny part made a comment my other part will make…if Tina is only using Bette this is mean..and Bette shouldnt let Tina do this..again post soon

    46. Hey I’m no sexpert, but you did fine to me. I’m glad you’re continuing (in a sense) with Letting Go, even though the name In Your Lies doesn’t bode well for the future

    49. Fuck! YES..Do you need to ask.. this chapter was hot..you did good for your first time, please post the rest of it, it’s just cruel to leave us this way..lol. Thanks a bunch smile

    50. Ah, no don’t continue……as if!!!! pls do and post soon, I was missing letting go, have you totally departed from that altogether??…whatever I’ll still read!!

    53. Two thumbs up for you! Wow…you did a good job, keep it up. I want to see where this story is going? So are you going to continue with “letting go?” Great job!

    58. oh my god! that’s an amazing story.. really hot and heavy.. just what i like.. hehe.. YES! YOU SHOULD CONTINUE!! I look forward to the next chapter!!

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