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In Your Lies – chapter one
“Fine, but make it quick.” Kelly gave up on pushing Tina out. She couldn’t hate Tina if she wanted to. Regardless of what happened, Tina was a great person in and out. Whatever happened already happened, and there would be and could be no turning back. Everyone would have to deal, and suffer the consequences of their actions.
Tina let out a weak but genuine smile when she thanked Kelly, and entered into their apartment. “I really appreciate this Kelly, thank you.”
‘Thank you?’ Kelly thought, if Tina only knew the truth. To the eyes of an outsider, everyone thought Tina was the one to cause Bette that infinite amount of heartache. The pre-Tina Bette, was somewhat heeled of her former heartache, and now, Tina’s existence only deepened Bette’s wound, and permanent-ized her scars.
Bette’s room was dim, the lamp posts and the summer moonlight shone through the uncovered parts of Bette’s window. The faint light emitted, allowed Tina to see Bette peacefully sleeping on her bed.
Tina didn’t know where she found the courage or what possessed her to do what she was about to do, but the moment she saw Bette Porter on that bed quietly sleeping, she lost all control of her brain. Her heart began dictating her every action thereafter.
Tina immediately closed the door behind her. As she was walking towards Bette, Tina’s hands quickly unbuttoned her light blazer. She was now at one side of Bette’s bed watching her sleep, and before Tina knew it, she had unconsciously crawled into bed with Bette.
“Oh my GodTina” Bette must have been dreaming when she felt warm slender fingers snaking and gliding its way up her t-shirt. Though it was a dream, it felt so real. Bette hadn’t felt this alive for months, and if she could stay in this state, she’d rather be living in this dream forever, she didn’t want to open her eyes. She hadn’t felt Tina’s touch since she was student teaching for Alice, and that wastoo long ago. Time had certainly gone by slow for Bette when her heart was crushed by Tina’s decision. Time had passed by too fast for Tina, for she wished tomorrow would never come.
A dream? Far from it, there was nothing more real than this very moment. Tina was finally able to touch Bette again, and she refused to waste another minute. Tina felt her arousal building as her hand inched closer towards Bette’s chest. ‘Oh God, *****!’ Tina’s mind screamed when she finally met her destination, Bette’s firm *****.
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(50 votes, average: 4.12 out of 5)
Yes!!! You are doing a fantastic job!
Where have you been I’ve missed!
This was a good start and you did just fine for your first NC-17, I’m impressed. But if you ever think you need a proof reader just let me know.
I hope you intend on continuing ‘Letting Go’ as well, because I was completely wrapped up in that story.
Sorry *red with embarrassment*
Where have you been I’ve missed YOU!!!
Definitely. Please continue!!!!!!!
smiley go right on a head with this story IF there is no wedding tomorrow. thanks.
Yes, more please . . .
You did fine on the NC-17–better than I’ve ever done. There’s a lot of stuff I can’t bring myself to write, so I understand. So hang in; you’re doing great.
who would be crazy enough to say no, certainly not Bette. this was a great chapter please continue
Yes continue. Good Job.
You hook me up! Great job! A mysterious Tina and a heartbroken Bette. Give us more~
That was good! Keep it up!
I really love this version of Bette & Tina, it’s so interesting and I love where you take them.
great job with that nc-17 thingy…and continue of course (as long as there no wedding to eric LOL), missed your story
Hell yeah, this is awesome and interesting. And I agree with shezzy67 about your another story and hope you will continue both story soon please, thanks!
Hey..you can open your eyes now! It was great. I’m with albeez on this one..please continue if there is no wedding on Saturday. Thank you.it was beautiful
Hey, where have you been?
Oh wow… I love your Tina… direct and aggresive :) Oh gosh, I shouldn’t be readin this at work… I’m sooooo screwed… and with this NC-17 stuff somemore…
Anyway… yes… please do continue with this one… and ‘Letting Go’ too :)
glad to see you back. I missed your story. and yes you should continue with both stories.
fabulous start…More! More! Please!
yes continue–have you finished “letting go” miss that one too
yes, please continue
My My My – Good job! Tina rules!
Gulp! Thanks for update!
Glad to see you post please keep going!!!
YA BIG TEASE! I can’t BELIEVE you left off there! Of course it’s good! What on earth are you talking about? I pray to the higher beings that be (which really is you in this case, since you’re the writer and all)that Tina DOES NOT LEAVE Bette in order to marry Eric. . .it would just be a cryin shame. . .
please post again soon!
Continue? By all means. All of us want to see this story through to its logical conclusion, whatever that may be. You know we love “our girls” and want to see them together, happy and in love, and want to go along day by day to see how they accomplish this wonderful life that they both seem to want. Great post. Your NC-17 was good, much better than I could have done. i can’t write sex scenes either. Embarassing. Thanks for the post.
Yes, please, please, please!
YES PLEASE..GREAT JOB ON NC-17..
Yes yes yes yes yes .guess that means plese go on. thanks
oh god! please continue.xx
YES YES YES… continue that is!!!lol that was very sexy your doing great!! thanks
YES..YES..YES…#1: I missed this!…#2: sooo veri HOT continue please!…#3: Tina is FUKED STR8^ 4 marrying Eric
Defo please continue missed you loved this new story NC-17 very well written
Continue???? ARE YOU KIDDING??!!? Your doing GREAT! I love this story, I ‘m so glad you brought it back. Please keep going. PLEEEEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What a hellava place to stop! Continue? What a foolish question…I think you had better or you are going to have your reputation trashed as just a teaser! Just kidding….great beginning. Please post again soon.
Yes, yes, yes! You must continue this story. It’s so hot. Bette’s getting her groove on…..
Uuum to say the least…nice way to re-emerge. Please continue! Great to see you pop up again.
You really have to continue smile….I have missed your story….I can see you are writing on a new one..is the old one going to continue or not??You´re doing great for your first NC-17…that was really fantastic smile…don´t be shy and do continue…we sooooo want more.
yes, i want more!
TBC? Are you kidding? Yes Dammit! You’re doing a great job for the first NC-17… okay, now c’mon continue… tease :P. Missed you… glad you’re back!
great story! yes, please continue
well i said goddamn!! smile come on now ur doin better than fine..the way u wrote is fucking WOW continue………and that was a pretty good tease there!!
OMG Yes!!! dont you dare stop! if this is your first NC-17, i cant wait to see your second!!
welcome back!!! god yes continue, you are doing a great job. keep up the good work.
Fuck yes please continue….I’m really impressed by your first NC-17. Great chapter – more please….
HEY…why did you stop in the best part?????..lol..please continue and soon..
ok now that my horny part made a comment my other part will make…if Tina is only using Bette this is mean..and Bette shouldnt let Tina do this..again post soon
Hey I’m no sexpert, but you did fine to me. I’m glad you’re continuing (in a sense) with Letting Go, even though the name In Your Lies doesn’t bode well for the future
Smiley,
Damn straight (excuse the pun) I need you to continue.
Pretty, pretty please.
A Fan.
Yes, and soon!
Fuck! YES..Do you need to ask.. this chapter was hot..you did good for your first time, please post the rest of it, it’s just cruel to leave us this way..lol. Thanks a bunch smile
Ah, no don’t continue……as if!!!! pls do and post soon, I was missing letting go, have you totally departed from that altogether??…whatever I’ll still read!!
err yes!
go ahead whith both story’s she can’t get married now or can she?????
Two thumbs up for you! Wow…you did a good job, keep it up. I want to see where this story is going? So are you going to continue with “letting go?” Great job!
That was sooooooooooo freaking hot!!! I’ve missed you :(. Please continue.
yes pls..i really want to see how the story goes(“,)
YES!! pleas continue!! This sounds like a great story! please post soon!
hey Smile what can I say that has not alredy been said… Please continue both storys.. Post soon:-)
oh my god! that’s an amazing story.. really hot and heavy.. just what i like.. hehe.. YES! YOU SHOULD CONTINUE!! I look forward to the next chapter!!
what’s going on? is the previous story finished?