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    In Your Lies – chapter one

    Story written on October 27, 2005 by smile12345.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=57320
    Author Notes:

    A new Bette and Tina beginning, sort of…same characters, different story.

    Tina’s lips soon followed behind her fingers which were now playfully circling around Bette’s erect right nipple. Her lips placed gentle yet passionate kisses beginning at Bette’s lower abdomen and moving itself up until they met Bette’s erect left nipple where she then took iinto her mouth.

    “Ohhhh.*****!” Bette shouted as her arousal was reaching a peak. Her hands were now clenched onto her blanket as she gripped them into a tight fist. “Baby, pleasedon’t”

    “Shh” Tina unwillingly stopped what she was doing to remind Bette to be more quiet, “babe, you’ve got to be more quiet, your sister is in the next room” and after Tina’s reminder, her lips went back to work sucking and nibbling at Bette’s left nipple.

    Tina raised her head and began kissing Bette’s collarbone, and licking her way up to Bette’s neck and finally stopping by her earlobe where she gently tugged on with her teeth, and whispered “Bette, baby, open your eyes. This isn’t a dream, I’m here, with you,” Tina tried to convince Bette. She needed and wanted to see Bette’s eyes. Tina needed to know that Bette still felt for her what she feels for Bette, and that she wasn’t just here making a fool of herself trying to make love to a broken hearted, vulnerable woman.

    No, this all felt too real to be just a dream. There was, there was Tina’s touchTina’s voiceTina’s scent. Bette hesitantly opened her eyes praying it wasn’t just a dream. She didn’t know if her heart could take the pain if it was just another dream, if her room was completely empty, and if Tina was no where to be seen. Drowning in this sensation of what was supposedly Tina, Bette’s tightly clenched fists released the blanket. Her hands moved in towards that body. There was indeed a body, and Bette wrapped her arms around Tina’s back attempting to pull her in closer.

    “Tina? What areyouOh God” Bette finally asked or tried to ask. She had been so wrapped up in Tina’s foreplay she barely had the strength nor brain power to form coherent sentences. What Bette meant to ask was, ‘What are you doing here? Isn’t today Friday and tomorrow Saturday, the day you’re about to walk down the aisle?”

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    2. Where have you been I’ve missed!

      This was a good start and you did just fine for your first NC-17, I’m impressed. But if you ever think you need a proof reader just let me know.

      I hope you intend on continuing ‘Letting Go’ as well, because I was completely wrapped up in that story.

    7. You did fine on the NC-17–better than I’ve ever done. There’s a lot of stuff I can’t bring myself to write, so I understand. So hang in; you’re doing great.

    14. Hey..you can open your eyes now! It was great. I’m with albeez on this one..please continue if there is no wedding on Saturday. Thank you.it was beautiful

    15. Hey, where have you been?
      Oh wow… I love your Tina… direct and aggresive :) Oh gosh, I shouldn’t be readin this at work… I’m sooooo screwed… and with this NC-17 stuff somemore…
      Anyway… yes… please do continue with this one… and ‘Letting Go’ too :)

    23. YA BIG TEASE! I can’t BELIEVE you left off there! Of course it’s good! What on earth are you talking about? I pray to the higher beings that be (which really is you in this case, since you’re the writer and all)that Tina DOES NOT LEAVE Bette in order to marry Eric. . .it would just be a cryin shame. . .
      please post again soon!

    24. Continue? By all means. All of us want to see this story through to its logical conclusion, whatever that may be. You know we love “our girls” and want to see them together, happy and in love, and want to go along day by day to see how they accomplish this wonderful life that they both seem to want. Great post. Your NC-17 was good, much better than I could have done. i can’t write sex scenes either. Embarassing. Thanks for the post.

    33. What a hellava place to stop! Continue? What a foolish question…I think you had better or you are going to have your reputation trashed as just a teaser! Just kidding….great beginning. Please post again soon.

    36. You really have to continue smile….I have missed your story….I can see you are writing on a new one..is the old one going to continue or not??You´re doing great for your first NC-17…that was really fantastic smile…don´t be shy and do continue…we sooooo want more.

    38. TBC? Are you kidding? Yes Dammit! You’re doing a great job for the first NC-17… okay, now c’mon continue… tease :P. Missed you… glad you’re back!

    45. ok now that my horny part made a comment my other part will make…if Tina is only using Bette this is mean..and Bette shouldnt let Tina do this..again post soon

    46. Hey I’m no sexpert, but you did fine to me. I’m glad you’re continuing (in a sense) with Letting Go, even though the name In Your Lies doesn’t bode well for the future

    49. Fuck! YES..Do you need to ask.. this chapter was hot..you did good for your first time, please post the rest of it, it’s just cruel to leave us this way..lol. Thanks a bunch smile

    50. Ah, no don’t continue……as if!!!! pls do and post soon, I was missing letting go, have you totally departed from that altogether??…whatever I’ll still read!!

    53. Two thumbs up for you! Wow…you did a good job, keep it up. I want to see where this story is going? So are you going to continue with “letting go?” Great job!

    58. oh my god! that’s an amazing story.. really hot and heavy.. just what i like.. hehe.. YES! YOU SHOULD CONTINUE!! I look forward to the next chapter!!

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