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    Insight. Ch5

    Story written on April 23, 2008 by sofasitter.
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    Insight: The capacity to discern the true nature of a situation …

    By the time Wednesday morning came around, Bette found herself waking earlier with a prediction of what might adorn the front doorstep that day. Coming up with nothing more along the lines of their afternoon trip to Naples than perhaps an actual gondolier stood there waiting for her.

    She dressed hurriedly, throwing on a robe as she ran downstairs, pausing only to flick the switch on the kettle as she hurtled past. Yet when she opened the front door the doorstep was empty, and Bette felt her heart sink a little.

    It wasn’t until leaving for work over an hour later that she noticed the blacked-out limousine had gone, suspecting there’d be no more gifts to come.

    ~

    “Hey Al,” Bette sat at her desk, tilting the Venice pen from side to side and watching, entranced as the man on his gondola swept up and down, “you doing anything tonight?”

    Alice stood in the middle of her apartment, mid spring clean, “Uh … er … no … nothing,”

    “Good,” Bette replied, “you’re coming round to mine for popcorn, pot and a movie,”

    Alice nodded, “Sure, want me to invite the others …?”

    “Sure,”

    “Er … Bette?”

    Bette snapped back out of it, “Yeah?”

    “Is everything ok?”

    Bette sighed, “Everything’s fine Al,”

    They hung up and Alice rang Shane, abandoning her cleaning to get them both on board,

    “We’ve got to cheer her up!” Alice stated, growing mildly concerned that she’d never seen Bette act like a lovesick puppy in quite this way before,

    Shane agreed, “I know … it’s weird,”

    “So you’ll come?” Alice checked, preparing to call Dana,

    Shane nodded, “Uh huh … you said pot right? … I’m there!”

    Dana on the other hand seemed less impressed, “So not only do I have to bring the snacks but I have to drive and stay sober and watch you three fools get stoned?”

    Alice nodded, “Uh huh,”

    “Tell me Alice, *why* would I want to do that?”

    Alice grinned, “Because you love us?”

    ~

    Which was pretty much what Bette thought when she stopped off to pick up pie for them all at The Planet on her way home,

    “Just four?” Marina asked, “your new friend isn’t joining you then?”

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    1. you know, i haven’t kissed a brit today, and i really should…anyway, this story is faaanfukckingtastic and i want more of it…it’s like a really good bar of organic chuklit with almonds, and i’m trying to gorge myself, but you’re not making it easy. the suspense is part of the package, you brilliant one, i get that, i do…i’m just soooo impatient, as you well know;) keep up the good work sweety xoxoxo

    3. You have no idea what you’re doing to me with this story, couch! Heheh…Absolutely none! I am totally … entranced … enamored … enthralled with it! Heheh…like your girl said, it’s “faaanfukckingtastic” (nice word, hb). I know and appreciate that you’re writing as quickly as you can…but when something is this good and enjoyable…it is truly hard to wait for the unfolding. Thank you so much for taking the time to write…My assessment is: I perceive it as truly brilliant and awe-inspiring! Quite! Keeps me thinking and wondering… :)

    4. So Helena doesn’t feel “real”? I started to doubt it myself, for a minute, with her disappearance, until Helena reappeared and Alice nearly managed to mess it all up. Have I mentioned how good this story is? I’m sure I have, but I’ll reiterate. It’s really good, sofa. Thanks

    8. Aghhhh…only more questions! You’re killing me here. I’m trying to figure out how everyone fits in, but it’s impossible. I’ll just wait for your next update.

    10. The cliffhangers, the slow burn is absolutely killing me. You have to keep going with this one b/c Helena is perplexing me. Alice, Dana, Shane and Bette smoking pot is too funny. What the heck is up with Marina? PPS!

    11. WOW!!!!! sorry I didn’t comment last time my wireless friggin’ well shut down while I was trying to leave the comment. Anywayz, suspense, suspense!!!! more…

    12. I laughed out loud when Alice made fun of helena (It was wrong, but SO FUNNY!!!) hahah… What can I say? I love this fic… it’s funny, clever, and unpredictable… PPS

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