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    Insight. Ch5

    Story written on April 23, 2008 by sofasitter.
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    Insight: The capacity to discern the true nature of a situation …

    Bette stared off into space, “Huh?”

    “The cheesecake?” Marina reminded her, not having received any feedback on how that went,

    Bette smiled, “No … she’s not coming, I think she has a visitor in town, besides …” Bette added, “I think my friends think she’s a little strange, they’d probably rather I stopped obsessing over her,”

    “Maybe you should take your friend’s advice,” Marina mumbled, busying herself with making their coffees in order to avoid meeting Bette’s gaze, “something tells me you’d need to eat a ‘lot’ of cheesecake to get over this one …”

    ~

    “Then what did she say?” Alice asked, carting the popcorn and beer into the living room as Bette relayed Marina’s side of the conversation from earlier,

    “That’s it,” Bette replied as she set up the movie,

    Shane sat on the sofa sipping her beer, “Weird,”

    “Perhaps they dated?” Dana hypothesised, filling her mouth full of popcorn, “Helena and Marina,” she paused to shove some more in there, “I reckon Helena dumped her and Marina’s not over it yet,”

    Bette shook her head, “Helena and … Marina? … I dunno,”

    Alice shrugged, “It’s possible?”

    Bette hit play and paused the movie, holding up the joint Helena gave her, “Shall we?”

    They nodded enthusiastically, “Lets!”

    Shane lay back against the table at the poolside, Dana intermittently poking her to ensure she was still alive,

    “That shit’s gooooooooooooooooood!” Shane mumbled, finishing her sentence with a ridiculous giggle,

    Alice mimicked her laughing, sitting upright and pulling the hood of her sweater up over her head, she dipped her gaze down low and pulled a cigarette from Shane’s pocket, pretending to light it as she pulled her hair to cover her face,

    “Hey … who am I?”

    Shane lifted her head and laughed, “You’re Helena!”

    Alice mumbled something and nodded, pretending to drag rasply against the cigarette,

    “Alice …” Dana warned, thinking Bette might not find it quite so funny,

    “What?” Alice protested loudly, “All I need to do now is jump in a fountain with my clothes on and go shopping at midnight!”

    “Alice!” Bette’s tone urged her to stop,

    “I want some pie,” Alice announced, her thoughts erratic, she got up from the table and started to sway a little, “Shit … that shit *is* good …” she addressed them all formally, “I’m going to go see if she wants some …”

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    1. you know, i haven’t kissed a brit today, and i really should…anyway, this story is faaanfukckingtastic and i want more of it…it’s like a really good bar of organic chuklit with almonds, and i’m trying to gorge myself, but you’re not making it easy. the suspense is part of the package, you brilliant one, i get that, i do…i’m just soooo impatient, as you well know;) keep up the good work sweety xoxoxo

    3. You have no idea what you’re doing to me with this story, couch! Heheh…Absolutely none! I am totally … entranced … enamored … enthralled with it! Heheh…like your girl said, it’s “faaanfukckingtastic” (nice word, hb). I know and appreciate that you’re writing as quickly as you can…but when something is this good and enjoyable…it is truly hard to wait for the unfolding. Thank you so much for taking the time to write…My assessment is: I perceive it as truly brilliant and awe-inspiring! Quite! Keeps me thinking and wondering… :)

    4. So Helena doesn’t feel “real”? I started to doubt it myself, for a minute, with her disappearance, until Helena reappeared and Alice nearly managed to mess it all up. Have I mentioned how good this story is? I’m sure I have, but I’ll reiterate. It’s really good, sofa. Thanks

    8. Aghhhh…only more questions! You’re killing me here. I’m trying to figure out how everyone fits in, but it’s impossible. I’ll just wait for your next update.

    10. The cliffhangers, the slow burn is absolutely killing me. You have to keep going with this one b/c Helena is perplexing me. Alice, Dana, Shane and Bette smoking pot is too funny. What the heck is up with Marina? PPS!

    11. WOW!!!!! sorry I didn’t comment last time my wireless friggin’ well shut down while I was trying to leave the comment. Anywayz, suspense, suspense!!!! more…

    12. I laughed out loud when Alice made fun of helena (It was wrong, but SO FUNNY!!!) hahah… What can I say? I love this fic… it’s funny, clever, and unpredictable… PPS

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