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Insight. Ch11.
Final Chapter.
Helena set out on foot towards The Planet, her feet hitting the sidewalk with determined strides as she let her resilience carry her there, trying to shake off the uneasy feeling of doom that set in the second Bette walked out her door.
She passed the newspaper stand on the corner, where she would go to buy cigarettes, and the liquor store a little further down where the staff all knew her by name.
She took a short cut through West Hollywood Park, recognising that it was foolish to do so on her own and so late at night, but the park was no different to anywhere else she ever walked, it harboured the same ghosts.
When they held the memorial service, she stood in the background, uninvited. Like the lone black sheep, observing their grief as she struggled internally with her own, a person either side of her as they supervised her right to be there, still under section and under someone else’s control.
Free to go as she pleased now, Helena strode through the centre of the park, caring little about who else might be there. About half way through her stride turned into a jog, her jog into a sprint and by the time she reached The Planet just a few minutes later she had to stop and catch her breath.
She stood bent doubled forwards, her hand against the wall, mentally talking herself up to going inside, since not only was she not Marina’s favourite person but these kind of social gathering places made her uncomfortable.
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“She’s cute,” Dana admitted, relenting finally as Shane and Alice did their usual scouting of The Planet, trying to pick out someone the picky tennis star might feel like going for.
“You should go over there and ‘talk’ to her …” Alice suggested, rolling her eyes in defeat as Dana thought about it for a second and then looked as if she was leaning towards ‘No’.
“Oh come on!” Shane sighed, growing exasperated, “what’s wrong with her, she’s pretty … she’s not wearing any hot pants …”
Dana shook her head again, “I don’t know guys … wait a minute …” she spotted Helena coming in out of the corner of her eye, “isn’t that Helena?”
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well if that isn’t a csi/law & order twist lol. Great story!!!
Good save at the last minute there, sofa! Well, well, well. That was one twist beyond. I should never have doubted the redoubtable Peggy. The old girl may be crusty, but she’s got a heart of gold. But poor Bette had to wander through this whole thing seeming not only lost, but a little dense as well.
Wait! You mean to tell me Tina was wearing the fuck me shoes when she was getting all Mrs. Peel/Avengers on Bette’s ass? Well, Bette showed her! Whoops! Upside your head! I said Whoops upside your head!
Tina needed hitting, that’s all there is to it. So Marina suspected all along, did she? It must have been hard, thinking you know something yet not able to prove it, and not able to see justice done. I’m really glad Helena didn’t do anything rash, though. This was really a great story, sofa, such a fun ride, and I loved the twists. Muchas gracias!
This was indubitably the most wonderful story I’ve ever read in my life. I am beyond myself with admiration! So skillfully and patiently executed! Thank you sooooo much! I hate to see it end, of course. But am sooo pleased with your tenacity at posting daily! Thank you, again. This was just stellar…Stellar, I say! Couch, you are the bomb! You blew my mind! :)
Holy Fu$%ing shit batman!That was totally awesome! Best twist on the characters EVER! You’re in my top 3 Sofa! I say we bring back the rating system!!!! Just for this one alone!!!!!Thank You.
Did I tell you ? – you’re in a league all your own! (well I meant to)
Do, I get any points for detecting that Satina was trouble? Helena acting Jennyish is a whole other kettle of fish on the DSM-IV spectrum…. L-Nore was a good game of smoke and mirrors. I love the visual of Peggy and her muscle. In my mind she’s wearing a trench coat, hat tipped to one side and red lip stick. In case you hadn’t noticed, I enjoyed reading this story!
So…Sofa, let’s see, it was a Belena story and you did make Tina the bad guy (but you let Tina and Bette have sex)and Helena and Evie were having an affair. O.K., I totally missed the twist about them all being in cahoots together, Helena, Peggy and Marina, to put the sting on Tina. (Clapping my hands and giving you a standing ovation)…really well done!
Bravo! Well done Sofa….even though I was hoping Bette would drop kick Tina out the window.
ah, retro, don’t we all wish that? haha, jokes! great story babe, serious standing applause:) i just can’t get over how good this is…plot, character, i mean yeah, you’re good, i knew that all along, but this bag of tricks, this wellspring of brilliance you keep pulling stuff outa, it gives me such a pleasant jolt every time. i wanna see more:) xoxoxox
Sofa, this story is beyond brillant! Seriously, you continue to amaze me with your wonderful character development and plot twists. I wasn’t always able to read and comment timely but I thoroughly enjoyed each and every chapter. Tina — a psychiatrist and a murderer — wow! Freud would have fun psychoanalyzing that one. Well done!
Sofa I highly enjoyed this twisty turny Belena/Helebette story.
Sofa, you put Nancy Drews ass on the curb woman. Outstanding performance. Thank you. Md
oh come on, whining like a child, this can’t be the end, i want more, more of these two together, oh and by the way great story, great suspense, great writing!!!
This was just excellent! You have truly out done yourself. Great job!!
SOFA!!! THAT WAS GREAT!! Loved the added twist at the end. This fic rocked! I so hope to see more of this caliber soon! Gosh I may have to go back and re-read it …again! LOL!!
Superb tale, start to finish! You seem to have a little Hitchcock in you, sofa…
Three words FAB U LOUS!! That was the bomb! Loved the twist!!!
This was fantastic!!! I was completely thrown. I had no idea what was coming!!!! Hostage jokes–LOL. Have I said that the story was great? Wonderful? Intoxicating? Thrilling? Better than average (evil grin)?
I had to check for the finale of this story while at work and I am so glad I did. This was amazing sofa, you are amazing!!! You are a superb writer and I definitely agree with others that this may have been one of the most intelligent posts ever on the site. No need to bring back the ratings system…There’s no contest!!! Thanks for such a wonderful read. yb1
omg…i just read this whole thing just now…it was brilliant…it was psychotic, it was romantic, it was almost like old greek tales…i loved it…good job!
Well im a huge tina fan so i hate she turned out coo coo for cocoa puffs but like a good book with a great plot i just couldnt put this story down. infact i usualy dont continue belena stories beyond a few chapters so thats a testament to ur incredible imagination and writing so thanks!
Excellent tale Sofa. Had us all on our seats. Little Tibette but NOT!. Excellent story again. The crowd roars.
I am late in catching up but what an excellent little story this turned out to be. It kept me guessing up until the end. Wow… amazing!
Gee…zus!!!!!! Well, love or loss of it can drive a person CRAZEEE!!!!! Great story. U betta come up with something on one of your other stories soon…I seem to think u have one unfinished. Thx for writing.
O…M…G!!! MAYBE I am not as paranoid as I thought I was… hehe I knew there was a reason to be afraid of Tina… this fic was FREAKING AWESOME!!! I loved the suspense!! thanks a lot.. I hope you do a sequel =D
VERY GOOD!!!