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Insight. Final Chapter.
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Bette stared back at her, totally confused, “What?”
Helena bent to pick up the silver cigarette case, turning it over to reveal a tiny listening device, as Tina wrestled within the grip of Peggy’s security.
“I’ll take that,” said Peggy, relieving Helena of the tiny chip, “you can all go home now.”
Helena nodded and took Bette’s hand, leading her back to find their friends. She opened the door to Tina’s office and instantly Alice, Dana and Shane all leapt on Bette, clamouring to be the first to tell her how happy they were she was okay.
Helena carried on walking and stepped up to embrace Marina, holding her tightly in her arms,
“It’s over.”
~
The following morning Bette woke up in Helena’s arms to find the sun streaming in through the open blinds, bathing Helena’s face in a kind of ethereal glow.
She turned inwards, her own eyes met by a serious pair looking back at her, cunning like a cat’s and equally scathing. She turned away again, still getting over the sensation of having been played.
Helena sat up in bed, holding Bette’s hand close to her own heart as sincerely as she could.
“Come outside with me?” she asked, pulling Bette to sit as well.
Bette protested sullenly, “No … why?”
“There’s something I want you to know,” Helena whispered, “something I’d never ever lie about.”
They went down to the poolside and Helena stripped off the shirt and pants she’d been sleeping in, diving into the pool in her underwear.
“Get in!” she urged Bette, popping up from underneath, “it feels great.”
Bette discarded her clothes a little more hesitantly, joining Helena in the centre of the pool, “What now?”
Helena took her hands and held them beneath the water, “This is where it happened.”
Bette stared back at her and blinked. Too overwhelmed to care what else there was to know.
“I was drunk,” Helena mumbled, forcing herself to maintain eye contact, “we were really fucked and fooling around, I thought she fell,” she paused, looking into the water hauntingly. “I thought she’d just come up, and I waited, and waited, then when I finally realised she wasn’t coming up I screamed.”
She stared off into the distance and squeezed Bette’s hands even harder.
“It wouldn’t have made a difference,” Bette mumbled, “she was drugged, her heart stopped,”
“It doesn’t matter,” Helena smiled, “I let her down, and every morning when I get in here and swim it reminds me that I’m still alive, and it’s a waste if I don’t use it wisely …”
Bette smiled back at her, as Helena wrapped her arms around her neck and held on tight.
“You wanna get some breakfast?” Helena asked, “we could walk to The Planet?”
Bette nodded, letting her step back again, “Sure … so long as no one makes any sudden movements or cracks any hostage jokes …”
Helena grinned, taking her hand to lead her to the edge of the pool, “Don’t worry, I’ll look after you.”
Dr Hilton stood outside in the viewing room, studying the blonde woman within.
“What happened to her?”
“She killed her partner, by mistake, but then last night she confessed and after that she threatened to hurt someone else.”
“Where are her shoes?”
“We took them, tights too, figured she wasn’t beyond knowing how to top herself?”
Dr Hilton stared at the police guard with disdain, “How very sympathetic.”
He opened the door and entered the grey, windowless room, taking a seat opposite Tina as he lay his briefcase upon the table between them.
“Hello Tina, my name’s Dr Hilton, I’m the duty psychiatrist.”
Tina nodded meekly, “I’m not mad, I want to get out of here …”
Dr Hilton nodded, “We can talk about that … sure … first of all why don’t you start by telling me what happened?”
The End.
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well if that isn’t a csi/law & order twist lol. Great story!!!
Good save at the last minute there, sofa! Well, well, well. That was one twist beyond. I should never have doubted the redoubtable Peggy. The old girl may be crusty, but she’s got a heart of gold. But poor Bette had to wander through this whole thing seeming not only lost, but a little dense as well.
Wait! You mean to tell me Tina was wearing the fuck me shoes when she was getting all Mrs. Peel/Avengers on Bette’s ass? Well, Bette showed her! Whoops! Upside your head! I said Whoops upside your head!
Tina needed hitting, that’s all there is to it. So Marina suspected all along, did she? It must have been hard, thinking you know something yet not able to prove it, and not able to see justice done. I’m really glad Helena didn’t do anything rash, though. This was really a great story, sofa, such a fun ride, and I loved the twists. Muchas gracias!
This was indubitably the most wonderful story I’ve ever read in my life. I am beyond myself with admiration! So skillfully and patiently executed! Thank you sooooo much! I hate to see it end, of course. But am sooo pleased with your tenacity at posting daily! Thank you, again. This was just stellar…Stellar, I say! Couch, you are the bomb! You blew my mind! :)
Holy Fu$%ing shit batman!That was totally awesome! Best twist on the characters EVER! You’re in my top 3 Sofa! I say we bring back the rating system!!!! Just for this one alone!!!!!Thank You.
Did I tell you ? – you’re in a league all your own! (well I meant to)
Do, I get any points for detecting that Satina was trouble? Helena acting Jennyish is a whole other kettle of fish on the DSM-IV spectrum…. L-Nore was a good game of smoke and mirrors. I love the visual of Peggy and her muscle. In my mind she’s wearing a trench coat, hat tipped to one side and red lip stick. In case you hadn’t noticed, I enjoyed reading this story!
So…Sofa, let’s see, it was a Belena story and you did make Tina the bad guy (but you let Tina and Bette have sex)and Helena and Evie were having an affair. O.K., I totally missed the twist about them all being in cahoots together, Helena, Peggy and Marina, to put the sting on Tina. (Clapping my hands and giving you a standing ovation)…really well done!
Bravo! Well done Sofa….even though I was hoping Bette would drop kick Tina out the window.
ah, retro, don’t we all wish that? haha, jokes! great story babe, serious standing applause:) i just can’t get over how good this is…plot, character, i mean yeah, you’re good, i knew that all along, but this bag of tricks, this wellspring of brilliance you keep pulling stuff outa, it gives me such a pleasant jolt every time. i wanna see more:) xoxoxox
Sofa, this story is beyond brillant! Seriously, you continue to amaze me with your wonderful character development and plot twists. I wasn’t always able to read and comment timely but I thoroughly enjoyed each and every chapter. Tina — a psychiatrist and a murderer — wow! Freud would have fun psychoanalyzing that one. Well done!
Sofa I highly enjoyed this twisty turny Belena/Helebette story.
Sofa, you put Nancy Drews ass on the curb woman. Outstanding performance. Thank you. Md
oh come on, whining like a child, this can’t be the end, i want more, more of these two together, oh and by the way great story, great suspense, great writing!!!
This was just excellent! You have truly out done yourself. Great job!!
SOFA!!! THAT WAS GREAT!! Loved the added twist at the end. This fic rocked! I so hope to see more of this caliber soon! Gosh I may have to go back and re-read it …again! LOL!!
Superb tale, start to finish! You seem to have a little Hitchcock in you, sofa…
Three words FAB U LOUS!! That was the bomb! Loved the twist!!!
This was fantastic!!! I was completely thrown. I had no idea what was coming!!!! Hostage jokes–LOL. Have I said that the story was great? Wonderful? Intoxicating? Thrilling? Better than average (evil grin)?
I had to check for the finale of this story while at work and I am so glad I did. This was amazing sofa, you are amazing!!! You are a superb writer and I definitely agree with others that this may have been one of the most intelligent posts ever on the site. No need to bring back the ratings system…There’s no contest!!! Thanks for such a wonderful read. yb1
omg…i just read this whole thing just now…it was brilliant…it was psychotic, it was romantic, it was almost like old greek tales…i loved it…good job!
Well im a huge tina fan so i hate she turned out coo coo for cocoa puffs but like a good book with a great plot i just couldnt put this story down. infact i usualy dont continue belena stories beyond a few chapters so thats a testament to ur incredible imagination and writing so thanks!
Excellent tale Sofa. Had us all on our seats. Little Tibette but NOT!. Excellent story again. The crowd roars.
I am late in catching up but what an excellent little story this turned out to be. It kept me guessing up until the end. Wow… amazing!
Gee…zus!!!!!! Well, love or loss of it can drive a person CRAZEEE!!!!! Great story. U betta come up with something on one of your other stories soon…I seem to think u have one unfinished. Thx for writing.
O…M…G!!! MAYBE I am not as paranoid as I thought I was… hehe I knew there was a reason to be afraid of Tina… this fic was FREAKING AWESOME!!! I loved the suspense!! thanks a lot.. I hope you do a sequel =D
VERY GOOD!!!