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Insight. Final Chapter.
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“Because I convinced her of it,” Tina replied, a sense of pride coming through in her words.
“That’s sick,” Bette muttered, caring little anymore whether she angered her or not.
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Helena held her finger to her lips and hovered in the hallway, listing to the muted sound of hushed voices coming from the end of the coridoor where Bette and Tina were talking.
She put her hand on the doorknob to her right and slid open the door, stepping into Tina’s private office and encountering a space she’d never once been allowed to enter.
The others followed, stepping cautiously as they watched Helena taking in the room, giving a tiny shudder at the long leather couch and the shrine of photographs adorning the fireplace.
She picked one up and glanced at it briefly, before turning and smashing the glass sharply against the corner of Tina’s desk, removing the back and extracting a long broken shard.
The rest of them looked on horrified, the sound of glass breaking done with quickly, but not fast enough that Tina and Bette would not have heard.
“Stay here …” Helena hissed, walking past them and exiting the room again, she hovered in the doorway and looked back, “I mean it this time, stay here.”
She started walking down the coridoor with one foot resolutely in front of the other, as a conversation with Evie played out inside her mind, warning her of what to expect.
“She won’t just take it lying down,” Evie mumbled, her head upon Helena’s chest as they lay together on the sofa in the afternoon, “she’ll fight for me,” she added, “she likes to win.”
Helena stroked her hair, “It’ll be okay, we’ll figure it out somehow. I’ll ask my mother to help us, I bet she likes to win more.”
“You hate your mother.” Evie noted, appreciating Helena’s attempt at a joke. “Where would we go?” she asked sorrowfully, turning around and sitting up, “Both our jobs are here …”
Helena smiled back at her, “I don’t care, I don’t care if I never write another word as long as I have you …”
“Let her go Tina …”
Tina stood with Bette in front of her, one hand across her mouth as the other held Bette’s arms behind her back, pulling her backwards so she lost any leverage her height might have afforded her to break free.
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well if that isn’t a csi/law & order twist lol. Great story!!!
Good save at the last minute there, sofa! Well, well, well. That was one twist beyond. I should never have doubted the redoubtable Peggy. The old girl may be crusty, but she’s got a heart of gold. But poor Bette had to wander through this whole thing seeming not only lost, but a little dense as well.
Wait! You mean to tell me Tina was wearing the fuck me shoes when she was getting all Mrs. Peel/Avengers on Bette’s ass? Well, Bette showed her! Whoops! Upside your head! I said Whoops upside your head!
Tina needed hitting, that’s all there is to it. So Marina suspected all along, did she? It must have been hard, thinking you know something yet not able to prove it, and not able to see justice done. I’m really glad Helena didn’t do anything rash, though. This was really a great story, sofa, such a fun ride, and I loved the twists. Muchas gracias!
This was indubitably the most wonderful story I’ve ever read in my life. I am beyond myself with admiration! So skillfully and patiently executed! Thank you sooooo much! I hate to see it end, of course. But am sooo pleased with your tenacity at posting daily! Thank you, again. This was just stellar…Stellar, I say! Couch, you are the bomb! You blew my mind! :)
Holy Fu$%ing shit batman!That was totally awesome! Best twist on the characters EVER! You’re in my top 3 Sofa! I say we bring back the rating system!!!! Just for this one alone!!!!!Thank You.
Did I tell you ? – you’re in a league all your own! (well I meant to)
Do, I get any points for detecting that Satina was trouble? Helena acting Jennyish is a whole other kettle of fish on the DSM-IV spectrum…. L-Nore was a good game of smoke and mirrors. I love the visual of Peggy and her muscle. In my mind she’s wearing a trench coat, hat tipped to one side and red lip stick. In case you hadn’t noticed, I enjoyed reading this story!
So…Sofa, let’s see, it was a Belena story and you did make Tina the bad guy (but you let Tina and Bette have sex)and Helena and Evie were having an affair. O.K., I totally missed the twist about them all being in cahoots together, Helena, Peggy and Marina, to put the sting on Tina. (Clapping my hands and giving you a standing ovation)…really well done!
Bravo! Well done Sofa….even though I was hoping Bette would drop kick Tina out the window.
ah, retro, don’t we all wish that? haha, jokes! great story babe, serious standing applause:) i just can’t get over how good this is…plot, character, i mean yeah, you’re good, i knew that all along, but this bag of tricks, this wellspring of brilliance you keep pulling stuff outa, it gives me such a pleasant jolt every time. i wanna see more:) xoxoxox
Sofa, this story is beyond brillant! Seriously, you continue to amaze me with your wonderful character development and plot twists. I wasn’t always able to read and comment timely but I thoroughly enjoyed each and every chapter. Tina — a psychiatrist and a murderer — wow! Freud would have fun psychoanalyzing that one. Well done!
Sofa I highly enjoyed this twisty turny Belena/Helebette story.
Sofa, you put Nancy Drews ass on the curb woman. Outstanding performance. Thank you. Md
oh come on, whining like a child, this can’t be the end, i want more, more of these two together, oh and by the way great story, great suspense, great writing!!!
This was just excellent! You have truly out done yourself. Great job!!
SOFA!!! THAT WAS GREAT!! Loved the added twist at the end. This fic rocked! I so hope to see more of this caliber soon! Gosh I may have to go back and re-read it …again! LOL!!
Superb tale, start to finish! You seem to have a little Hitchcock in you, sofa…
Three words FAB U LOUS!! That was the bomb! Loved the twist!!!
This was fantastic!!! I was completely thrown. I had no idea what was coming!!!! Hostage jokes–LOL. Have I said that the story was great? Wonderful? Intoxicating? Thrilling? Better than average (evil grin)?
I had to check for the finale of this story while at work and I am so glad I did. This was amazing sofa, you are amazing!!! You are a superb writer and I definitely agree with others that this may have been one of the most intelligent posts ever on the site. No need to bring back the ratings system…There’s no contest!!! Thanks for such a wonderful read. yb1
omg…i just read this whole thing just now…it was brilliant…it was psychotic, it was romantic, it was almost like old greek tales…i loved it…good job!
Well im a huge tina fan so i hate she turned out coo coo for cocoa puffs but like a good book with a great plot i just couldnt put this story down. infact i usualy dont continue belena stories beyond a few chapters so thats a testament to ur incredible imagination and writing so thanks!
Excellent tale Sofa. Had us all on our seats. Little Tibette but NOT!. Excellent story again. The crowd roars.
I am late in catching up but what an excellent little story this turned out to be. It kept me guessing up until the end. Wow… amazing!
Gee…zus!!!!!! Well, love or loss of it can drive a person CRAZEEE!!!!! Great story. U betta come up with something on one of your other stories soon…I seem to think u have one unfinished. Thx for writing.
O…M…G!!! MAYBE I am not as paranoid as I thought I was… hehe I knew there was a reason to be afraid of Tina… this fic was FREAKING AWESOME!!! I loved the suspense!! thanks a lot.. I hope you do a sequel =D
VERY GOOD!!!