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Instinct part 10
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“I think my heart is already better… this is proof right here… I made it trough this”
“You still need the operation… I’m gonna call Izzy… tell her you are going to do it” I turned around to go out
“Wait… come here” I turned around and she was looking at me sweetly. I walked towards her and she grabbed my hand and kissed it “I love you” I leaned forward and kiss her. “You know… you are a great kisser” I laughed at that
“You are not bad yourself”
“I want to touch you so bad right now”
“Shut up!” I said starting to walk away
“Carmen…”I turned around looked at her but staid in front of the door away from Shane. “Im so wet right now”
“OH god!” I said turning around and I could hear her laughing I got out the room. I see Alice and Helena and Jenny crying and the others ad the verge of doing the same. I almost forgot of them. Izzy was trying to comfort them. They saw me walked towards them… they saw me and they’re face turned sadder. I guess my eyes are still red…
“Guys… she’s… she’s going to do it” All of them looked at me and I smile. The reaction I got from them was something I can’t even describe. Jenny threw herself at me crying
“Thank you" she said. hugs and tears of joy were exchanged for the second time this day.
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It was 6pm and I was exhausted… I said my good bye’s and I said I will be there tomorrow… they were doing the operation at 12pm… They were drugging her right now so tomorrow we can spend it taking like normal people before the operation. Right now I just wanted to rest… to be ready for tomorrow… because tomorrow… might be the last time I see her…. I know, I know, I have to be positive about this whole thing, but… fuck. I walked in to the bathroom and see myself in the mirror… I looked horrible… my eyes were red and I looked like I’ve been crying for weeks… I guess the last one took a lot out of me. I get the water running to fill the tub and I undressed… I can still feel her hands touching me. Why… why does she makes me feel like this… true love?… maybe… I don’t know… the only thing I do know is… we definitely have chemistry… not a normal one… the chemistry I have with her, is like the one you always hoped for or.
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^ me too! :D
me three! lol..I signed the pertition.. It would be friggin’ awesome if Brittany got her own show!=)
WHOA
I’m hoping that was a goodbye fuck. *crosses fingers* After all, Carmen’s mind was on Shane practically the entire time and she already knows she belongs with Shane. But I guess it would be hard to break it off with Nikki; she’s perfect on paper, and I’m sure Carmen’s very grateful for her and loves her to a certain extent. I hope Carmen makes the right decision.
loved it..was half expectin carmen to scream shane!
There is no Shane. :( I hate Nikky. Call me I am sush a child but still I hate Nikky beacuse she is so nice. Hate that!!!! Carmen told Shane they will be together. She lied???
it’s not fair of carmen to say that she’ll be with shane when she’s still with nicky.. okay it’s extremely difficult for her on her part but her mind is so consumed with thoughts of shane and i was so sure she was going to call out shane’s name when she was in the bed with nicky.. haha.. i’m with bum, i hope it’s a goodbye fuck. go nikki, go be with jenny.. :p