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Instinct part 10
“Don’t want to say huh? Well… why don’t I make does fantasy’s come true?”
I wish…
Our bodies were pressed against each other. She kisses me with a lot of passion… and fun… she’s playful and I like it… she’s not much of a biter… but she likes to lick……. She licks my neck… my chest… my nipples… I have to give it to her… I love her because she makes me feel so good… so fucking… good… she stops and she looks at me.
“What’s wrong?” she looks t me worried
“:What-what do you mean?”
“I don’t know… you’re off… and… ok didn’t take a very good look at your eyes… it looks like you were crying… a lot”
“It’s nothing….” I kiss her again but she backs off
“Baby… tell me… what-what happen?”
“They are operating on her tomorrow… she’s getting a new heart” she looks concern
“Wait I though they couldn’t”
“Yea… well it’s a long story but we got another donor”
“Well that’s good Carm… that’s very good”
“Yea…. It is, but tomorrow could be her last day also, if the operation doesn’t go well”
“No, no don’t think like that silly… ok… tomorrow will be a very good day and she will make it though that… and you told me you guys made truth so that’s also good… I know everything is gonna be ok… and I’m going to be with you…” she looks at me and I look back to does bright eyes… I push the hair falling in her face back and I smile at her…
“I love you” and I do… I do love her… when everything went wrong she was the one who made it good… she fixed me and she’s probably the reason I’m still here.
She’s great. She’s probably the girl of my dreams. She’s smart, nice, creative, she knows how to make me feel good, she’s rich and famous and she’s the hottest woman of 2008 according to GQ and Maxim magazines. The dream girl… and being here seeing her in front of me makes me wonder what am I doing…
“I love you too baby… man I missed this feeling” She intertwined our hands and got in the side so she was resting in the bed but she never took her eyes off me “I missed you eyes… your mouth” she touched my eyes and my mouth as she said that
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^ me too! :D
me three! lol..I signed the pertition.. It would be friggin’ awesome if Brittany got her own show!=)
WHOA
I’m hoping that was a goodbye fuck. *crosses fingers* After all, Carmen’s mind was on Shane practically the entire time and she already knows she belongs with Shane. But I guess it would be hard to break it off with Nikki; she’s perfect on paper, and I’m sure Carmen’s very grateful for her and loves her to a certain extent. I hope Carmen makes the right decision.
loved it..was half expectin carmen to scream shane!
There is no Shane. :( I hate Nikky. Call me I am sush a child but still I hate Nikky beacuse she is so nice. Hate that!!!! Carmen told Shane they will be together. She lied???
it’s not fair of carmen to say that she’ll be with shane when she’s still with nicky.. okay it’s extremely difficult for her on her part but her mind is so consumed with thoughts of shane and i was so sure she was going to call out shane’s name when she was in the bed with nicky.. haha.. i’m with bum, i hope it’s a goodbye fuck. go nikki, go be with jenny.. :p