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Intercept(ed) [Valentine’s Day Challenge]
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“Instead you got groped and assaulted with a Martini,” the woman said, her voice lightly teasing. “I bet you’d like that choice back.”
“I would, but my night seems to be turning around.” Bette held out a hand. “I’m Bette. Bette Porter.”
The woman paused and then shook hands. “I’m Tina Kennard.”
“It’s my pleasure,” Bette said, holding Tina’s hand a few seconds too long. They hadn’t broken eye contact, either, and Bette suddenly realized what she was doing and dropped Tina’s hand unceremoniously. “Sorry,” she murmured.
“No, it’s okay. I didn’t mind.” Tina flushed. “I mean…”
“I know what you meant. Anyway. Nice to meet you,” Bette said. “I should probably…” Bette trailed off. She wanted to get home, get out of these clothes… but a sudden memory of the silent house and ticking clock stopped her. Kit’s words from earlier echoed in her mind. “You’re going to stay alone until you put yourself out there.”
“Listen,” Bette said, looking at Tina again. “I uh… this is going to sound weird, but I was wondering if maybe… you wanted to come with me to this night club…”
“With you?” Tina gazed at Bette with raised eyebrows.
“Yeah… it’s this place my sister owns… in WeHo.”
“You want us to go… like together?”
“Yeah. If you want. I figure I should try to salvage something from this evening. I thought maybe you might feel the same way…”
There was a pause, and the bathroom door swung open and two gossiping girls brushed past them.
“I don’t know,” Tina hedged. “I guess I could…”
“If you don’t want to, that’s okay.”
“No, I do. I have my car,” Tina said.
“And I have mine.”
Tina grinned and Bette’s heart skipped a beat. Tina was pretty but she was beautiful when she smiled. “I’ll meet you there then. What’s your sister’s place called?”
“The Planet. It’s on Maberly.”
“Lead on, then,” Tina said.
She followed Bette out of the bar and Bette felt her heart skipping along at a giddy pace. She hadn’t set out to find anyone tonight, but maybe she just had. Bette was taking a risk. She didn’t know where this night would lead, but it felt like the start of something…
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Love your story,amazing as always.Please continue writing.
looooovvveeeee your story very mutch amazing!!!
You should totally consider continuing this story!
Wonderful story, you are such a good writer. Another story please?
Loved it! Happy Valentine’s Day.
Nicely done! Where will this lead to?
Absolutely wonderful. Thank you.
LOVED IT! You should consider continuing the story, its been a while since we’ve had a an “alternate beginning for B & T.
I’m glad Bette put herself out there. I loved it. I would totally like you to continue this if you can. Thank you :)
perfectly marvellous!!!
What a special story. You really made me miss Dana and how adorable she could be. Thank you for sharing.
I think this should be continued!
L o v e l y !!
The end? I think not; the beginning…
Well done. Thank you – if you feel like writing more that would be great.
Sweet! No grasping, sweaty encounters in the bar bathroom. No hook up. Nice development and denouement. A lovely substitutionary romance for us, the lovelorn readers: Bette and Tina 4EVA! Somebody, tell us where we can get the bumpersticker! Thank you for the Valentine treat!
That was great! I liked the “flashdance” reference lol. I agree, this can’t be the end! Hope you do more with this! :)
This is good and like it, please continue, thanks!
Nice and fresh Tibette start