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    It Can’t Get Worse…But It Did 3

    Story written on May 15, 2005 by Darwinsbrain.
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    We have some drama here people.

    Kit~

    I cant believe this. I really cant. I arrive home from a long awaited visit with David to find out that Bette is in the hospital after having had a heart attack and that no one had checked on her these past three weeks. I cant believe it. I had talked with Bette before I left. Told her that I would stay if she wanted me to.

    Shed been in such pain and I didnt want to leave her alone, but she convinced me to go, that I needed this time with my son. He was finally willing to speak with me. She told me that I couldnt pass up this opportunity and so I went. As the doctor leaves us I turn to face the woman sitting around me.

    Why the ***** didnt any of you go and see her, I demand as its the only thing other than Bette being alive that has been festering in my mind

    They all turn their attention to me and I can tell that they hurt, that they are ashamed for what they did, or didnt do. If someone had checked on her earlier. I tried to reign in my anger because it wouldnt help anyone.

    Never mind, I say getting to my feet, It doesnt matter while all of the people that supposedly loved Bette abandoned her because she made a mistake, a huge mistake, but still…a mistake.

    Everyone looks to Tina at me saying this and that angers me in a way I wasnt prepared for. With a growl I turned my back on them and stalked off to Bettes room with James scurrying after me.

    Im sorry Kit.

    I sigh heavily, I am too James. Im just so angry.

    Im angry as well. I should have checked on her sooner.

    I turn to look at him and see the worry etched into this young mans face. I can see how much he cares for my baby sister.

    It wasnt your responsibility to check on Bette, it was ours but I thank you for finally giving in and going to check on her.

    James sighed at this, The look that I had seen in her eyes before she left haunted me, gnawed at me. I had to go and see if she was okay, damned the consequences.

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    3. AWWWW yer killin’ me. More how about another chapter Now and then one after that and so on. I could read this for days, weeks, months. Get it. I love it. Please post again soon.

    10. I read your story a few days ago and was wondering where u are so i came back to leave a comment i love this story so please drop what ever your doing and write another chapter two would be ever better since you have kept us waiting so long ;-)

    14. Please!!!! Don’t keep asking, you’re killng me with the cliffies!!! I love this story, we love this story…it’s so intense and so awesome!!! Please don’t keep us waiting long. Thanks!

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