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    It Can’t Get Worse…But It Did 3

    Story written on May 15, 2005 by Darwinsbrain.
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    We have some drama here people.

    Im glad you did, I say once again

    Do you want me to come with you to see her?

    I would like that very much James.

    He smiles gently at me and together we go into Bettes hospital room. I had already been on the verge of tears without even having seen her and when I did…I came undone.

    James~

    I knew that Kit shouldnt go into see Bette on her own. It was almost too much for me to handle and Im just Bettes assistant. Not her sister. So I followed Kit into the quiet, silent room. She started making soft strangled sounds and I knew something was going to happen, but just what I didnt know. As we walked closer to the bed Kit startled to tremble. At first it was just a soft trembling, hardly noticeable but then, then her entire body started to shake with the effort of trying to keep the tears at bay.

    I could see that the effort was almost too much for her to bear.

    Its okay Kit, I say softly, You can let go.

    As if all that she needed was the permission to let go Kit dropped to her knees as a cry, I hadnt ever heard before and hope to never hear again, bubbled from her diaphragm and outward. The sobbing, racking sobs came next and I dropped to my knees to hold her close as the sobs racked her body.

    Shes okay Kit, I whisper as I hold her, Shes alive. Shes okay. Well help her. Youll see.

    I rocked her for a few minutes until she quieted. I pulled her to her feet and together we gazed upon Bette as the occasional hiccup or sniffle would come from Kit. We both gasped at what we saw.

    Bette.

    She was awake and staring up at us.

    Bette~

    I have been going in and out of this deep sleep for a while now. The last time it happened I saw James staring down at me with such a look of horror on his face. I wondered for a brief moment what he was so horrified about. Then I remembered, I remembered the pain, the agony, the sorrow.

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    3. AWWWW yer killin’ me. More how about another chapter Now and then one after that and so on. I could read this for days, weeks, months. Get it. I love it. Please post again soon.

    10. I read your story a few days ago and was wondering where u are so i came back to leave a comment i love this story so please drop what ever your doing and write another chapter two would be ever better since you have kept us waiting so long ;-)

    14. Please!!!! Don’t keep asking, you’re killng me with the cliffies!!! I love this story, we love this story…it’s so intense and so awesome!!! Please don’t keep us waiting long. Thanks!

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