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It Can’t Get Worse…But it Did
James~
Quickly I walk down the hall and outside and pick up my cell phone. I have her number. Ive always had her number in case of an emergency. This damn well qualifies as an emergency. Quickly I press the correct buttons and press the cell to my ear and listen to the ring. Good lord I never noticed how annoying a ring is. Come on pick up Finally I hear her pick up. It sounds like she was laughing. I hate to ruin her happiness.
Hello, I here her state cheerily
I dont know if I can do this.
Who is this, I hear her ask
James, I finally get out
Oh James what can I do for you? You do know Bettes not here right?
What kind of stupid question is that of course I know shes not with you
Yes Im quite aware of that. Listen there is a reason as to why Im calling. Bette…shes…
I cant freaking do this. I really cant. This is too damn hard. Im the only one that can do this though. Im the only one that knows. Looking around as if someone is watching me, which is ridiculous, I press the phone closer to my ear.
Shes…in the hospital, I finally manage to get out
Wh…what, I hear Tina ask shakily
Shes in the hospital, I repeat a little more strongly, She…
There goes that strength. Sucking in a breath I will myself to continue on.
What happened to her, Tina asks me
Tell her
She uh…died.
Tina~
I had the girls over for our now annual Friday night dinners. We were all laughing and having fun when my phone rang. I picked it up.
Hello.
There is silence on the line and I wonder if for a moment if it is her, but no she has long since stopped calling me. I dont know whether or not to be happy or sad about this.
Who is this, I can see the girls look over at me as I ask this question and I know they are wondering the same thing I just was
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(42 votes, average: 3.69 out of 5)
Just thinking wow. She’d be on a ventilator and heart monitor. Good job… Maybe even have to have heart surgery to repair the damage even. So many direction this can go.
This does sound a lot like a stroke yes, my grandmother had one, but you have to remember that it takes a least a week for someone to starve. During that week brain damage akrewed. This is that. Hope it makes sense.
Now that is Drama, with a capital D!!! Dont’ stop now!
Wow great start..Sad but please continue…
Wow nice story.
I love that James is in the story. I have always liked him
totally want continuation
great start.. go on..and post soon
Oh dear my girl you have to continue with this
What a great chapter, you asked for it yourself, you have to continue!
This is brilliant
Oi vey what a start. Can’t wait to see how this one progresses. Brilliant btw
What? Are you kidding me? Of course, we want you to continue! Please…this is going to be good, I can already tell since you’ve started off with a bang…Hope you post again soon. Thanks!!!!
This is quite sad. Looking forward to what you do with this.
OOh drama I love it. Please continue.
absolute dynamite . continue plz. :D
Really interesting idea, can’t wait for more. James is great.
as you can tell by the number of comments that YES we what more …asap…great beginning…
You simply have to continue – you are freeking us out here. Post soon
OK now that is a wild way to take. It makes sense tho. Heart broken and stress. I can’t wait to see where you take this. Just don’t leave it hanging like some other have that tried this direction.
Great start. its scary and heartbreaking but i love it. PLEASE continue.
OMG!!!..this is a great start…you MUST continue..
there is no doubt that you need to continue with this story. I love it.
Oh yes please continue…I like these kind of stories….they make me wanna cry:(