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It Can’t Get Worse…But it Did
Tell me, I remark softly
She…looked dead Tina. I thought she was dead. I called an ambulance and she was rushed to the hospital.
I get to my feet looking around for my keys as James speaks.
From what the Doctor has said she basicallystarved herself to death…almost. They say if I hadnt gotten there when I did shed be dead right now.
Starved herself
What do you mean James? Why would she do something like that?
Before she left she told me that without you she had nothing left to live for.
She killed herself? No wait James said she was still alive but she still basically killed herself. Hold up a second.
Wait, I started, You didnt check on her that entire three weeks she was gone?
I thought she just needed some space. Are you telling me you nor none of her supposed friends had checked on her either, James snaps at me
I flinch at this and look at the others. Good lord no one had even went to see her these past three weeks. Everyone has been here taking care of me. No one had even been there for her. I feel tears coming to my eyes at this.
She must have been so alone, I manage to get out as my tears start to flow more heavily
Yeah, James answers, I thought youd want to know about this. Were at the University Hospital.
With that the line goes dead and I look at my friends.
Whats going on, Alice asks
Did you check on Bette these last three weeks, I ask her with wide eyes
I have tried to call her but she never answered.
Did anyone try and go see her?
Everyone shakes their heads at this as I drop to my knees.
Oh my god what did we do to her?
Tina you are freaking us out, Dana commented as they set me down on the couch, Whats going on? Is Bette in the hospital?
Yes, she starved herself.
I get shocked looks all around.
James~
I am pacing back and forth outside Bettes room waiting for the Doctor to come out. When he does I practically pounce on the poor man, Doctor Mathers will she be okay?
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(42 votes, average: 3.69 out of 5)
Just thinking wow. She’d be on a ventilator and heart monitor. Good job… Maybe even have to have heart surgery to repair the damage even. So many direction this can go.
This does sound a lot like a stroke yes, my grandmother had one, but you have to remember that it takes a least a week for someone to starve. During that week brain damage akrewed. This is that. Hope it makes sense.
Now that is Drama, with a capital D!!! Dont’ stop now!
Wow great start..Sad but please continue…
Wow nice story.
I love that James is in the story. I have always liked him
totally want continuation
great start.. go on..and post soon
Oh dear my girl you have to continue with this
What a great chapter, you asked for it yourself, you have to continue!
This is brilliant
Oi vey what a start. Can’t wait to see how this one progresses. Brilliant btw
What? Are you kidding me? Of course, we want you to continue! Please…this is going to be good, I can already tell since you’ve started off with a bang…Hope you post again soon. Thanks!!!!
This is quite sad. Looking forward to what you do with this.
OOh drama I love it. Please continue.
absolute dynamite . continue plz. :D
Really interesting idea, can’t wait for more. James is great.
as you can tell by the number of comments that YES we what more …asap…great beginning…
You simply have to continue – you are freeking us out here. Post soon
OK now that is a wild way to take. It makes sense tho. Heart broken and stress. I can’t wait to see where you take this. Just don’t leave it hanging like some other have that tried this direction.
Great start. its scary and heartbreaking but i love it. PLEASE continue.
OMG!!!..this is a great start…you MUST continue..
there is no doubt that you need to continue with this story. I love it.
Oh yes please continue…I like these kind of stories….they make me wanna cry:(