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It Can’t Get Worse…But it Did
James, I hear James state
Why would James be calling me?
Oh James what can I do for you? You know Bettes not here right?
There is silence on the line.
Yes Im quite aware of that. Listen there is a reason as to why Im calling. Bette…shes…
I dont say anything as I wait for James to speak. Back in the beginning he would often call me for Bette. I just wait for what I know is coming.
Shes…in the hospital, James finally gets out
Okay so thats not what I thought was coming at all. I can tell the girls have seen my expression change, Whwhat, I ask shakily
Shes in the hospital, James repeats, She He trails off.
What happened to her, I ask fully aware how panicked I sound
There is another pause on the line.
She died, James states simply
This is when everything goes black. I open my eyes sometime later to see Shane, Alice, Dana and Jenny staring down at me.
You okay T, Shane asks
The phone I need the phone, I exclaim
Jenny hands me the phone which is still on.
James
Im still here Tina. Are you okay?
Yeah what did you say to me before?
I told you that Bette died. I didnt mean it in the literal sense…well I did actually but shes alivefor now.
What do you mean for now? What happened to her?
Well…she hadnt been into work for like three weeks and I had started to get worried about her, James starts
Three weeks. Bette has never taken off more than a week from work.
She took three weeks off?
The girls are shocked by this.
No, I said she hadnt been into work in three weeks. She took an indefinite leave of absence.
Wow. Go on.
James sighs, I went to the house and everything was dark but her car was there. I went and knocked on the door but no one answered. I started to get worried. The door was unlocked and I went in calling for her. I found her in the hall
James trails off and a cold tendril of fear went up my spine at hearing this pause.
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(42 votes, average: 3.69 out of 5)
Just thinking wow. She’d be on a ventilator and heart monitor. Good job… Maybe even have to have heart surgery to repair the damage even. So many direction this can go.
This does sound a lot like a stroke yes, my grandmother had one, but you have to remember that it takes a least a week for someone to starve. During that week brain damage akrewed. This is that. Hope it makes sense.
Now that is Drama, with a capital D!!! Dont’ stop now!
Wow great start..Sad but please continue…
Wow nice story.
I love that James is in the story. I have always liked him
totally want continuation
great start.. go on..and post soon
Oh dear my girl you have to continue with this
What a great chapter, you asked for it yourself, you have to continue!
This is brilliant
Oi vey what a start. Can’t wait to see how this one progresses. Brilliant btw
What? Are you kidding me? Of course, we want you to continue! Please…this is going to be good, I can already tell since you’ve started off with a bang…Hope you post again soon. Thanks!!!!
This is quite sad. Looking forward to what you do with this.
OOh drama I love it. Please continue.
absolute dynamite . continue plz. :D
Really interesting idea, can’t wait for more. James is great.
as you can tell by the number of comments that YES we what more …asap…great beginning…
You simply have to continue – you are freeking us out here. Post soon
OK now that is a wild way to take. It makes sense tho. Heart broken and stress. I can’t wait to see where you take this. Just don’t leave it hanging like some other have that tried this direction.
Great start. its scary and heartbreaking but i love it. PLEASE continue.
OMG!!!..this is a great start…you MUST continue..
there is no doubt that you need to continue with this story. I love it.
Oh yes please continue…I like these kind of stories….they make me wanna cry:(