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It doesn’t feel like falling
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Criminal
Chapter 7. It doesn’t feel like falling
“Tina, don’t do anything stupid.” Lieutenant Kroll said that to her once. Was this stupid? Falling in love with Bette? Maybe it was in other’s eyes. But she didn’t even feel like she was falling. It felt like she was up against the sky. So stupid she’d be, because there was no better feeling than that stupidity could bring.
When the tears dispersed, she opened her eyes again, and saw Bette had picked up her eyes from her book and was watching her carefully. Those big doe eyes instantly lit up. “How’re you feeling?”
“Mmm, better.” There was a little soreness in her arm but it wasn’t too terrible. Tina scooted to the edge of the bed and drank a bit more of the water.
“Do you want a shower?” Bette looked sympathetically at the messy blonde hair. Tina looked like hell, still pale and breakable, but one beautiful hell she was.
“Yeah, I feel disgusting.” She cringed her nose to demonstrate her point.
“You’re stunning.” Bette wandered into the bathroom to start the hot water as she muttered to herself.
Tina heard her. She smiled and found herself in a spirit for a bit of teasing. “What was it?”
“Nothing, come on in.” The water heated up and the vapor wreathed the room. She tested the water to see if it was warm enough. “Sorry I don’t have a tub. Maybe I should order one, hmmm…”
Bette had a clip in her hair, but it fell off a bit and got lost in her wavy curls. Tina watched as it loose up and fall. She walked behind the woman, and her fingers found their way to the woman’s thick brown threads. Like a gentle caress, she picked the little clip out of her hair.
The touch made the brunette shudder. It felt different, than any of the touches, yet not so different. She cherished every touches Tina gave her, and this one, this one was special, like Tina cherished her as well. All of a sudden, she assumed a new sense of shyness. So she straightened herself up, and turned around to look into the mesmerizing hazel pools through the mystifying fog. “I’ll… give you some privacy.”
“Ok.”
But neither moved.
Tina locked her eyes with Bette, trying to find something in the gentle stare. And she found it with ease. She found love. It was all it took to convince her that she was not crazy or stupid. She was just in love.
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Correction: I dedicate this chapter to Pie, my dear friend! Although…it is NC-17 and a teeny tiny bit inappropriate, but it’s a happy chapter, and a reminder for her to come back soon. She texted me this morning saying that she’s doing better, fighting an infection, but I’m sure she’s gonna kick ass!
And the inspiration of the title was from the song “Gold”, by Wake Owl. It is a really good song.
SO to my twitter family and fanfic readers! Stop by any time and leave me some love ;)
Peace :)
So glad there was some happiness for those two after the brutality. Thanks
Nice Chapter – nice dedication.
Pie seems to be recovering now so hopefully she’ll be back posting soon.
I would be pissed off if someone who supposedly cares for me, would allow someone to shoot drugs into me. I don’t care what the consequences are.
Other then that I really enjoy this story.
This was an awesome chapter… I loved the sexiness and them finally being together truly. But what I truly loved about this chapter was the cuteness factor and the verbal back and forth between them.. I just loved their playfulness!!! Great chapter!!
Wow this was awesome, thankyou!
Such a nice contrast to the violence of the last chapter. Beautiful musings of love and adoration.. Thank you, Rob! Again, Pie would be proud!
Wonderful, sweet and hot loving chapter! Just what we needed after that violence chapter.
It is good to hear Pie_Fair is getting better, she sure will kick ass!
It was a sweet and full of love chapter. It was very relaxing to read, an immense difference to the previous violence chapter.
I loved the playful banter between them.
really liked it. Thank you!
The more you get well soon Pie. and come back to us :)
Rob, it was amazing one NC: 17 pure quality,
my God !! was breathtaking, very sensual, very
romantic, wild and gentle at the same time,
all perfeito.elas simply torched this
history, and there is medicine for my poor heart.
ROB! ALL STARS.
Beautiful chapter amid all this terror!
RT,
I have been following this book and I don’t know if I have left a comment on your previous chapters..
But I couldn’t remember leaving a comment so here I am begging u to please hurry with your next chap coz I am really excited for these two ladies.
Command has been missing but I guess it wouldn’t hurt if you will entertain us with your own version of crime/suspense and full of love fan fiction..
Another achievement for you friend bcoz u are able to make us asked for more. (Wink!)
Thanks for this Chap! We are The Lucky One(s) *ooppss!!!
Oh my sweet friend!..Sorry it has taken me so long to catch up with your story but thank you so much for dedicating this chapter to me. I continue to improve everyday. You have managed to once again dazzle me with your writing and what a sweet chapter compared to the last one….Can’t wait for the next chapter and thank you for all your love and support.
Luv ya!
Pie
I’m so happy you are my friend because when someone ask one day, hey have you ever read one of Robyn’s amazing books? I can say of course I have, she’s a good friend of mines. lol ok I just had to say that…Seriously Robyn every chapter I am amazed by your writing…gosh you suck! ok not really! But truly you are incredible, fucking incredible! Dedicate your first book to me…something like “To the most beautiful, loving friend I ever known Marq***** oh shit almost let it slip. Anyways I love it…obviously! lol