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It doesn’t feel like falling
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Their skin stuck together a little after so many rounds of intense exercises. But it didn’t bother them. All they were feeling was the closeness and the amazingly, torturously, painful afterglow.
“Yeah, I agree… I’m in no shape to move a finger…” Tina looked down her own body and saw the evidence of their craziness. Hickeys, finger marks, even some bite marks were not going away and by the look of them, they would be on her body for a few more days.
Bette was no better, especially on her backside. The blonde repeatedly trailed her fingernails across that area. The scratch marks felt hot on her skin, they must be red and swollen right now. However, the tingling aches were a reminder for this spontaneous but splendid event, and she’d wear them proudly everywhere like they were war wounds. “Ok, ok come here.” She moved closer as if there were still space to be closer, cradling the woman. “I’m sorry.”
“Why, Bette? You’ve nothing to be sorry for.” Tina wanted to turn around to face the brunette but it seemed like a painful undertaking right now.
Bette chuckled with an exhale. “I’m sorry we’re in this situation. A normal person would romance her girlfriend, take her out to fancy dinners, flowers and candlelights, not traumatize her with…” She stopped, and sighed a little.
Tina considered the words. Yes, this was an incredibly unfortunate time, and an impossible situation, she didn’t know what was going to happen, she didn’t know how to continue her investigation, but she knew what her heart desired, she knew she couldn’t go through another day without Bette. With a smile in her voice, she changed the heavy subject and asked. “Did you just call me your girlfriend?”
The brunette paused, then a smile of the same curve registered on her lips. “Pardon me, I didn’t ask first… Will you be my girlfriend?”
Tina smiled into her palm. Of course, Bette made it perfectly clear when she claimed that she was “her woman” in a room of vicious drug dealers. “I guess that means I’m her girlfriend.” “Yes.”
“Good then, ‘girlfriend’…” Bette tasted the word and decided that it sounded just right. Her hand wandered up, to cup the blonde’s breast, and rolling the nipple between her fingers, then it wandered down, across the flat stomach, the belly button and further down.
“Oh no no no we need to stop.” Tina squirmed, trying to avoid the unavoidable contact that would lead to some other unavoidable things.
“But you’re my girlfriend…” Bette purred in her sexy sultry voice and pleaded. “Please… just one more time.” It should mean something, establishing their relationship.
It was all it took for the blonde to lose her resolution. Everything was out of control so she closed her eyes and trusted Bette to take the lead. As she climbed steadily to the highest clouds, exploded, and fell back in pieces, she heard the brunette whisper into her ear, “I love you”, then, it didn’t feel like falling.
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Correction: I dedicate this chapter to Pie, my dear friend! Although…it is NC-17 and a teeny tiny bit inappropriate, but it’s a happy chapter, and a reminder for her to come back soon. She texted me this morning saying that she’s doing better, fighting an infection, but I’m sure she’s gonna kick ass!
And the inspiration of the title was from the song “Gold”, by Wake Owl. It is a really good song.
SO to my twitter family and fanfic readers! Stop by any time and leave me some love ;)
Peace :)
So glad there was some happiness for those two after the brutality. Thanks
Nice Chapter – nice dedication.
Pie seems to be recovering now so hopefully she’ll be back posting soon.
I would be pissed off if someone who supposedly cares for me, would allow someone to shoot drugs into me. I don’t care what the consequences are.
Other then that I really enjoy this story.
This was an awesome chapter… I loved the sexiness and them finally being together truly. But what I truly loved about this chapter was the cuteness factor and the verbal back and forth between them.. I just loved their playfulness!!! Great chapter!!
Wow this was awesome, thankyou!
Such a nice contrast to the violence of the last chapter. Beautiful musings of love and adoration.. Thank you, Rob! Again, Pie would be proud!
Wonderful, sweet and hot loving chapter! Just what we needed after that violence chapter.
It is good to hear Pie_Fair is getting better, she sure will kick ass!
It was a sweet and full of love chapter. It was very relaxing to read, an immense difference to the previous violence chapter.
I loved the playful banter between them.
really liked it. Thank you!
The more you get well soon Pie. and come back to us :)
Rob, it was amazing one NC: 17 pure quality,
my God !! was breathtaking, very sensual, very
romantic, wild and gentle at the same time,
all perfeito.elas simply torched this
history, and there is medicine for my poor heart.
ROB! ALL STARS.
Beautiful chapter amid all this terror!
RT,
I have been following this book and I don’t know if I have left a comment on your previous chapters..
But I couldn’t remember leaving a comment so here I am begging u to please hurry with your next chap coz I am really excited for these two ladies.
Command has been missing but I guess it wouldn’t hurt if you will entertain us with your own version of crime/suspense and full of love fan fiction..
Another achievement for you friend bcoz u are able to make us asked for more. (Wink!)
Thanks for this Chap! We are The Lucky One(s) *ooppss!!!
Oh my sweet friend!..Sorry it has taken me so long to catch up with your story but thank you so much for dedicating this chapter to me. I continue to improve everyday. You have managed to once again dazzle me with your writing and what a sweet chapter compared to the last one….Can’t wait for the next chapter and thank you for all your love and support.
Luv ya!
Pie
I’m so happy you are my friend because when someone ask one day, hey have you ever read one of Robyn’s amazing books? I can say of course I have, she’s a good friend of mines. lol ok I just had to say that…Seriously Robyn every chapter I am amazed by your writing…gosh you suck! ok not really! But truly you are incredible, fucking incredible! Dedicate your first book to me…something like “To the most beautiful, loving friend I ever known Marq***** oh shit almost let it slip. Anyways I love it…obviously! lol