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The water ran all over her. Bette shook her head at the mischievous woman in her arms. She never expected her to be so daring. Though inexperienced, Tina was a pleasant surprise. Like little arsonists, the slender fingers were starting fires everywhere they touch, a kind of fire that could not be put out by water.
“Take it off.” Tina whispered against her lips, and lifted the tank top slightly up above her waist. While Bette struggled to peel off the drenched cloth, she indulged herself into the softness of the darker complexion. Her hands found the tightening abs, and they traveled up north for more of the smooth skin.
Hot water kept running down her shoulders, her chest, her whole body but she still shivered in excitement. Her senses were highly alerted to notice every little touch bestowed on her body. “T— Tina… I want to—”
“No talking.” The blonde launched a hungry kiss on Bette’s pulse point.
“Mmm…” So she abandoned whatever she had in mind and moaned instead. It was a rare occasion for her to be at loss of words. However, she sure remembered what she wanted to do to please her woman.
Tina jumped against the stronger woman when she felt Bette slid a hand in between her thighs and cupped her sex. The brunette didn’t even have to move to make her fall all over her.
Bette smiled, wrapped the blonde from underneath her arm to provide some balance, and rubbed her hands back and forth in the secretive place she found at the apex of those snowy legs. There, she felt the warm liquid that had a different texture than the water. It was smooth, coating her fingers.
This was torture, sweet sweet torture, to have the sly fingers teasing her opening but not entering her. A small groan rolled out from the back of her throat. Tina hissed through her teeth when Bette again purposefully missed her aching clit. She needed Bette to take her, take all of her, but she was rather shy to voice her needs. So she just held on to the brunette tighter, resumed their kiss, and ground into the touch.
Of course Bette read the body language, and found the little impatience and desperation very lovely. “Tell me what you want…” She said in between kisses.
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Correction: I dedicate this chapter to Pie, my dear friend! Although…it is NC-17 and a teeny tiny bit inappropriate, but it’s a happy chapter, and a reminder for her to come back soon. She texted me this morning saying that she’s doing better, fighting an infection, but I’m sure she’s gonna kick ass!
And the inspiration of the title was from the song “Gold”, by Wake Owl. It is a really good song.
SO to my twitter family and fanfic readers! Stop by any time and leave me some love ;)
Peace :)
So glad there was some happiness for those two after the brutality. Thanks
Nice Chapter – nice dedication.
Pie seems to be recovering now so hopefully she’ll be back posting soon.
I would be pissed off if someone who supposedly cares for me, would allow someone to shoot drugs into me. I don’t care what the consequences are.
Other then that I really enjoy this story.
This was an awesome chapter… I loved the sexiness and them finally being together truly. But what I truly loved about this chapter was the cuteness factor and the verbal back and forth between them.. I just loved their playfulness!!! Great chapter!!
Wow this was awesome, thankyou!
Such a nice contrast to the violence of the last chapter. Beautiful musings of love and adoration.. Thank you, Rob! Again, Pie would be proud!
Wonderful, sweet and hot loving chapter! Just what we needed after that violence chapter.
It is good to hear Pie_Fair is getting better, she sure will kick ass!
It was a sweet and full of love chapter. It was very relaxing to read, an immense difference to the previous violence chapter.
I loved the playful banter between them.
really liked it. Thank you!
The more you get well soon Pie. and come back to us :)
Rob, it was amazing one NC: 17 pure quality,
my God !! was breathtaking, very sensual, very
romantic, wild and gentle at the same time,
all perfeito.elas simply torched this
history, and there is medicine for my poor heart.
ROB! ALL STARS.
Beautiful chapter amid all this terror!
RT,
I have been following this book and I don’t know if I have left a comment on your previous chapters..
But I couldn’t remember leaving a comment so here I am begging u to please hurry with your next chap coz I am really excited for these two ladies.
Command has been missing but I guess it wouldn’t hurt if you will entertain us with your own version of crime/suspense and full of love fan fiction..
Another achievement for you friend bcoz u are able to make us asked for more. (Wink!)
Thanks for this Chap! We are The Lucky One(s) *ooppss!!!
Oh my sweet friend!..Sorry it has taken me so long to catch up with your story but thank you so much for dedicating this chapter to me. I continue to improve everyday. You have managed to once again dazzle me with your writing and what a sweet chapter compared to the last one….Can’t wait for the next chapter and thank you for all your love and support.
Luv ya!
Pie
I’m so happy you are my friend because when someone ask one day, hey have you ever read one of Robyn’s amazing books? I can say of course I have, she’s a good friend of mines. lol ok I just had to say that…Seriously Robyn every chapter I am amazed by your writing…gosh you suck! ok not really! But truly you are incredible, fucking incredible! Dedicate your first book to me…something like “To the most beautiful, loving friend I ever known Marq***** oh shit almost let it slip. Anyways I love it…obviously! lol