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It is a game, a dangerous game
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“Do you know why we call her Vincent?” Jorge started to recall the time they first met. “The old Vincent, he was a hell of a guy, was my best man, five years ago he died, protecting me. Then she came along, all wounded and screwed up, but you know what? I saw potential in her. And I wasn’t wrong, she is one of the best I’ve ever seen.” He took another sip of his wine and leaned back in his chair. “Who would’ve thought naming her Vincent was probably the most brilliant idea ever? That’s all it takes to be one step ahead of the other party, you just gotta surprise them.” And boy were they surprised. Jorge believed that the reason Vincent had not a single record on her was that nobody was anticipating “him” to be a woman.
Tina listened, her pain getting worse by every passing second. The more she learned about Bette’s past, the more it hurt. “I… I’m sorry but um, I think I should go check on Jodi…”
Jorge didn’t force her to stay. He nodded and downed all his wine.
Tina didn’t know where to go, she couldn’t go inside the house because she knew she could not resist the temptation of going to Bette’s room. She was afraid that she might break down into tears in front of her because her heart was hurting so badly.
Henry was watching the whole interaction with an uneasy feeling. He stole himself after her and followed her into the backyard. While they were finally alone, blocked by the landscape and the woods from where everyone else was sitting, he asked with the same anger days ago. “What are you doing?”
“What am I doing?” She threw the question back at him. “No, the question should be what are YOU doing? What the hell is going on, Henry? Why didn’t you report truthfully to your superior?”
Tina’s questions were obviously hitting home and Henry was not prepared to answer either of them. He began to feel like it was not a good idea to try to kick her out of the picture this early. But the more she knew, the more danger he’d be put into. “I have other things to worry about.” He tried to dodge but it was of little use.
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Ha! Finally put together another post! Hope I’m fast enough for you guys.
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Uhhhh I know this post is sad and it’s probably going to be a bit sadder as it progress, but you know I’ll be doing everything to fix this. Have faith in me!
Ok I really need to go to bed now. My GBF is nagging me about my unhealthy lifestyle lol.
Don’t forget to leave some comments and love for me~ Goodnight ladies!
Peace :)
I think bette mouth shut and then we would have an NC-17 history, but I hope it bette undercover cop, expect more kisses and caresses, and thanks for sharing your imagination with your fans.
Good to see I’m not the only one up so late lol.
Wow that was fucking amazing! I love your style of writing and the complete brilliance you bring to a story and I’m not just saying that because you are a friend but because its the truth, you are amazing RT. This was heartbreaking for sure, finding out that Bette had been strung out on drugs is too much for any tibetter to bare but I’m happy you put this in the story because it gives the reader an insight on just how broken she was back in high school and afterwards. So sad for Bette and her life…and for Tina who continues to battle with her emotions and heart, so sad that both women are in horrible predicaments, I’m very exciting to see how this story plays out. Well well well done my friend, keep it coming!
I’m burning the late night oil after changing out of a sweat drenched shirt. And now can’t sleep so I finally got to your story! Very intriguing and intense RT! Bette’s background is particularly sad and Tina fighting her emotions…*sigh*. ..You definitely have a good one brewing here my friend! Very well written! Of course your stories always are!
you know I cried for the Chinese version, I sense that you will make me cry more in the next few chapters.you know the Chinese saying,healthy is the foundament for revolution，so have a good rest!
Well RT you ask me to have faith in you and at the same time promise me more sadness!
I did find this chapter very sad and even though I know you are going to make me even sadder, I will have faith but, please make Bette’s life better asap!
Bravo RT! Sad that Bette has gone through so much hardship – being shunned because of her father led her right down a similar path, and the drugs! – very tragic. Tina is getting in deep almost too fast. Will Bette save her from the darkness? As always, your writing is superb! Thank you for updating so quickly.
It was a great chapter, very well written. despite the fact that my heart is broken!
Bette almost died because of drugs, it was very sad.
and Tina again shattered her heart. but I’m glad that in the end Bette didn’t do anything hurt herself.
I hope Tina give up the struggle against her feelings, I understand that she is a cop and wants to act correctly, but still ….
I’m looking forward to the sequel.
will be even sadder? (help me) :D
What can i say more than the other comments i read.
It is breaking my Tibette heart, this story is so sad and it will be sadder, but i have faith in you to make this better.
Still wondering what Bette’s role is in this drug cartel.
And poor Tina, stuck between good and bad.
I hope you had a good sleep and are able to update soon.
Lots of love for you!
This is sad for them, hope they can find some way to be with each other
So sad but hopefully love will win out.
This time already broke my heart and you me
says it will get even sad, in this case, need
go to the pharmacy to buy my medicine
heart, because that way I will not endure.
Bette not deserve to suffer again already was not
Bette have suffered enough in pasado.
I faith that Bette is not a criminal
after all.
And here to us that kiss was the famous “Footprint Porter”
10 Stars.
Whoa! A new one to obsess about! Hope, Bette is not really part of this corrupt group and just an undercover agent like Tina.
Just read the three chapters in one sitting and if it was already finished I think I’d just keep reading all through the day! I’m loving it, your creativity is just amazing. I’ll look forward to other posts!