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Just The Girl 2.0 – Chapter Fifteen and a Half (based loosely on HYD: Returns)
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“Marcus says hello.” She smiled, removing the cellophane wrapping around the fresh Sunflowers that she brought with her on this visit and placed them inside the vase. “He was supposed to come with me here and pay you a visit, but there were problems in the gallery that he had to attend to. One of the exposed pipes burst and flooded the first floor – yet again.” She chuckled softly and shook her head. No matter how much monetary help she had offered to repair the broken-down place, a proud Marcus just wouldn’t budge. “A good friend volunteered to come in his place though,” She added thoughtfully, the artist in her arranging the flowers into a more presentable state. “I don’t think you’ve met her yet but I think you’ll like her. She’s very nice – despite being a hellion when we were kids.” She took a step back and studied her work. Shaking her head, she re-arranged the flowers again. “Actually, she reminds me so much of you. Very passionate, very articulate, very generous, very charming, very funny.. really like you, except she’s more beautiful, curvaceous and have bigger breasts..” She chuckled jokingly, picturing her friend inside her mind. “Oh, and she’s your boss’ daughter.” She added the last part with a knowing smirk, knowing how much Eric had looked up to the great MVP despite being scared shitless by his commanding presence. “I think I,” She paused and grinned lopsidedly. “I like her a lot. I feel lighter when I’m with her, you know? It feels like hanging out with someone like you..” She confessed with a shy smile. “So I hung out with her a lot.. which eventually led to a huge mess, I’m telling you.” She sighed, looking at the reddish burn mark on her arm. “Her girlfriend thinks that we were having an affair. But you know I wouldn’t steal a person away from another right? I’ve had a lot of grief with the girls who continuously hound you before we got married, and I don’t wish to inflict that kind of pain on someone else. It’s just plain evil..” She mumbled, exhaling loudly.
After another minute of fussing over the flowers, she finally found the whole thing to her liking. With that done, she went to the next thing on her agenda: lighting Eric’s favorite aroma therapy candle; the lavender kind. She would’ve lit incense, but he hated the smell of those things. “I have something to tell you..” She started, blowing away the flame on the matchstick after she had lit the candle. “Mom’s um..” Her eyes darted to the ring on her finger, consciously stroking and rotating it. “Mom’s been trying to set me up again with the son of one of her garden club friends..” She shared, turning around to get something from inside her bag. She could imagine Eric turning in his grave with that piece of information. He has always been the jealous type. “But don’t worry, I said no.” She reassured.
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Perfect timing, that classes has been suspended in my part of town, therefore got time to read and re-read your posts without distractions. Hope Jill will not interpret Bette bringing white lillies into something its totally not. Or will she?
hmmmmmmm… did eric bring jill white lillies… and she is thinking its ok for her to go after bette.. I THINK NOT… one more week… come on home tina… remember my heart… pps
I’m a bit scared of your next post there was a “:(” next to it. That can’t be a good thing, or is it? Thanks for the post! I love them!
okay..that was quite the forboding post…you have me worried…really! i know you like the drama,but “..” you know…?!
Ok, bring Tina on home to Bette! PPS
That’s not a good sign. Please let the white lilies mean that he wants her to not pursue Bette. OMG, Tina come home! Thanks alch.
Had to comment twice. I think Bette had a dream about standing in a field of white lilies covered in blood. If I am remembering correctly, then this is definitely not a good sign. Still loving alch.
Poor Jill. I hope she can start letting go, without misreading Bette’s offering of white lilies. What did Alice know about Eric? When’s that going to come to light? Or maybe it shouldn’t. And your preview: Heartless? *blinks* Should I be worried, or… Nahhh. I’m just gonna trust you, Alch. Thanks for the “half” chapter. :)
What an amazing ride this is!! I told you before … you’re writing is a book I can’t put down… one i would read in a day!! I’m a little worried too about “heartless”….. :)
Oh, is this a good sign or a bad sign? It is a good sign in that Jill has been given the go ahead to move forward, but it could be a bad sign if Bette is that person that Jill wants.
That doesn’t sounded right to me:(Come on Jill,the lilies didn’t mean anything,really.And another week to go…hopefully Tina will be back soon,even though I don’t know if anything could be changed if Jill made up her mind:(So much drama,and I can’t stop reading it.PPS
oh nooooooo… Why is the clue ‘heartless’? :( It’s going to be bitter sweet huh? Though knowing this is essentially a Tibette story, I can’t help but to feel down about the incoming temporary(i hope) separation- even after the week :O
woooo that was a longgg chapter,not that im complaining, it was brilliant.i hope that Jill doesn’t misinterpret the flowers as a sign that she should be with Bette. even though she said she would never take Bette away from anyone,she might change her mind because of the “sign” from Eric. im gonna join the other devote Tibette fans and say “Bring Tina home” pretty please. anyway thanks for the post and PPS
I love your long chapters. They’re always such a good read. Thanks a lot for the updates!
OMG! Alchy…you ended with a :(. NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I cling to your inner-Tibetteness that happy is in the future. You wrote the tender moment between Eric and Jill. Well done! Of course…you set us up for that white lily moment. UGG!!!! Please, Jill go away soon…PPS! Love ya Alchy…you so Rock!!!!!!
I am a silent reader….most of the time. But what can I say! Thank you for this story……I love the Bette that you created…..she is different. PPS
That was great and now bring back B&T home and be together again. Please post more, thanks!
You know, you make it difficult for me to leave my place for some days. Even if it is to bring a little sanity in my brain. It’ s the second time that I wasn’ t home and when I’ m back I read two chapters like these two. Hmp… (frustrated sigh)! I want them back together. I can’ t take it any longer. Please… please bring them back together! It hurts too much… Please? Kisses.
everyday i anticipate ur post.. its been more than a week.. am goin mad..i need my weekly hyd fix…please, please, please, post again soon!! – ur avid fan :)