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Just The Girl 2.0 – Chapter Seventeen (Based loosely on HYD: Returns)
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Bette takes a deep calming breath before speaking up again. “I guess we both need more time, huh?” She says with a sigh. And with that, she really leaves the room and disappears into the maze of hallways that was her house.
“You’re really serious about wanting to pay for this?” Sonja breaks through my thoughts a second later, looking at the mess she was about to clean up.
I sigh and cradle my forehead in my palm. Why do I always get myself in these situations? I still had to pay an advance in rent for the new boarding house I’m eyeing in Brooklyn, what more, I had travel and food expenses to think about. Dang. After a minute, I look at Sonja and exhale weakly. Suck it up Kennard. You and Bette both have to make amends now. “Do you think she’ll accept installment payments? I think I’ll be able to pay it off in fifty years.”
She looks at me with a twinkle in her eyes and smiles. “Forget fifty years. You can pay it off in three weeks.”
What?! “How?” I ask eagerly.
“I know a perfect job for you.”
“But I already have a job at the studio..”
“This one’s just part-time work..”
“I dunno Sonja, does it involve nudity?”
“A bit.. sometimes.”
“Drugs?”
“Only the legal kind.”
“Sex?”
“If you want to.”
Now I’m intrigued. “Does it pay a lot of money?”
“Oh honey, you have no idea.” She smiles from ear to ear, wagging her brows.
Really? Well then.. “I’m in!”
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Bette.
I can’t sleep.
In a little while, Sonja’s gonna come barging through those doors, singing me the usual morning greeting while pulling the curtains open and letting the morning sun stream in. On my part, I’m gonna pretend to be sleeping – and actually play annoyed that I was “rudely” awoken from my peaceful slumber. It was a game we liked to play. I spent the entire night tossing and turning in bed, haunted by the faint scent of Tina’s perfume still lingering inside my room.
I shift to my side and sigh against the pillow. I didn’t want to be act so stand-offish around Tina. But I felt like I had to. I was ready to make peace with her at the park yesterday, but then that midget showed up and ruined things. Memories of seeing Kate and Tina still lingered in my mind, and thoughts of what happened a few nights ago at that same park disturbed me as well. And though I still love her with every fiber of my being, I realize that like Tina, I had to allow myself some time to be angry too. I’ll talk to her when I’m not feeling as murderous anymore. My vile mood will do nothing but invite another argument, and I was getting sick of those.
One hour had passed when I hear my bedroom door slowly creaking open. As always, my chambermaid was right on schedule. I keep still and close my eyes – playing dead. I felt the heat of the sun hitting my exposed arm when the curtains were opened. Pretty soon, I felt the heat of Sonja’s body beside me on the edge of the bed. She’s gonna poke my arm once.. twice.. and then shake me gently. That was her usual technique.
So imagine my surprise when I felt my pillow violently yanked from below my head and used several times to hit me with staggering shots to the body. Jesus Christ! I’m awake! I’m awake!
“What the fuck?!” I yelled, sitting up in bed.
But instead of Sonja’s round face, someone else was looking back at me with a devious grin and twinkling eyes.
Am I dreaming of porn? I knew I shouldn’t have visited xtube last night..
It was Tina. My Tina. In a maids uniform.
“Good morning Miss Bette!”
Holy hell.
Tbc..
Next: The master and the maid.
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thanks alch!!! i think i’m getting greedy with your awesome storytelling, the more you post the more i want more!!! but i know you need time to do a follow-up to this wonderful update so i’ll try to patiently wait. my emotions are up and down, laughing and crying at the same time while reading this but for sure i was just over the moon with the update. i think good times are coming back with bette and tina playing the master and the maid and i’m sure you’ll have fun writing it so i hope you start soon! thanks again.
thanks a million for your generosity in sharing this ever surprising, moving, funny, happy sad sweet most excellente story – i should call it a novel :-) – with us! that’s our tina – stubborn and immortal weed. i love how you write her and write both characters with such balance. the next chapters will be so much fun :-) i liked your switchup, writing first person from the characters pov in this installment – it worked great. like chakakadin i’m always greedy for more – thank you for another superb ride, alch
Yay, an update; I had given up hope
wow that was heartbreaking to read,but such a brilliant post, however i loved the last page, really can’t wait for your next post with Tina being Bette’s maid (no pressure). also really loved what you did with writing it in 1st person, it really worked.Cheers for the post PPS
ahhh alch you’ve made my day!! love this story sooooo much! at last, there’s hope on the horizon and i’m glad it’s tina that’s forced this to happen, it always seems to be our bette that has to make the first move. Can’t wait to see how this is gonna play out though! oh and the “human bush” thing – proper made me chuckle…hell i think i even snorted at that!!
DAMN-you’re GOOD!! These epics are getting to be worth the wait,so what if it takes some time to finish!! I LOVED the different POV and so appropriate at this place in the tale!!And thank you for the blissful humor you lavished us with!! It did much to buffer the heartacheand now Tina as her maid?? Can it get any better??Can not wait!!
Great update as usual. Liked your writing in 1st person.. Thanks for the image of Tina in a maid’s uniform… really hot. I hope they fix things soon. Thanks for posting PPS
The master and the maid… my imagination is running wild!! Great chapter and I liked the format. I’m sad that Tina didn’t recover Eternity…I’m hoping you’ll fix that. Such funny moments amid all the turmoil. Loved it, Alchy.
God u r killing me here, How I was impatiently waiting for this update :)) and now I hope we won’t have to wait long for the next post so PLEASE PPPVVVVS
Wowser! You are the “epic-queen-of-fan fiction!” You are a rock star! These long chapters are an emotional roller coaster rides…I cried (“She gave it back”), laughed (Sam & Bette), relieved (Jill’s confession), anger (Kate’s timing turning up at the park), sadness (no return of eternity), and roared with laughter (dreaming of porn…My Tina). You are an incredible writer!!!! Ok…we’ve hung on to the drama…please some lightness and “combative” fun that these 2 capture on paper. Rock on Alchy!!!!
Oh, that was good. My heart was hurting most of this post, but in the end some of the pain was relieved.
Way hilarious but not missing on dramatic moments too. And must say, Bettes new maid is a little rough around the edges. LOL
i always feel after reading one of your posts, that i just read a really good book and i can’t wait for the sequel!!!
I knew Jill had the hots for Bette, don’t what she’ll do but I hope her crush fades, like Sam told her. That scene with Kate and “accidental jogger” was too funny. Maybe we can hook Kate and Jill up? Just a suggestion, well more like a request LOL. Love it Alch.
I savored this over 2 wonderful days, I don’t like waiting for more updates just so you know. I will though, wait that is because that’s all I can do, sit and wait, and wait and sit. Thanks for the update it’s something wonderful to look forward to, and now this twist….hmm delicious to read I’m sure!!
So, Tina is the maid! Can’t wait to see how this plays out in the next chapters! PPS
Hey girl. Glad you are back and with a big one. Many emotions during the reading but the last one is anticipation. We need you back soon… :) Thanks for the incredible story. Kisses
That was awesome, the drunk Bette is funny and crazy and scary too lol. Hope she and Tina will sit down and talk and work thing out but now let see some maid and master here lol. I think jill and kate should hook up and they can stay out of B&T’s life. Please post more, thanks!