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    Just The Girl 2.0 – Chapter Sixteen (based loosely on HYD: Returns)

    Story written on August 9, 2009 by Alchemy10.
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    It’s a small world after all..

     

    “Good morning!” A figure standing by the curb greeted cheerfully, her back on Sam as she gazed at the greenery of Central Park on the other side of the street.

     

    “Morning?” Sam repeated softly, looking up at the sky with a small frown. It was still dark out. “What time is it?”

     

    “Four AM.”

     

    “What?!” The shipping heiress exclaimed in surprise. Jesus. She was initially under the impression that it was about nine in the evening, her sleepy eyes must’ve seen wrong when she glanced at the alarm clock when Bette called. “B.. the sun isn’t up yet..” She whined, the non-morning person within her lamenting the early wake-up call.

     

    “Then be grateful that you’d be able to watch the sunrise.” Bette replied with a smart ass grin. “Admit it, its a sight that you’ve never seen before.”

     

    “That’s not true!” Sam disagreed. “I’ve seen one lots of times..” She argued, albeit unconvincingly.

     

    “Uh-huh..” Bette pursed her lips and regarded Sam. “So for you, once or twice is a lot?”

     

    “Actually, its seven. I saw it seven times already.” The girl corrected, lifting the corresponding amount of fingers. Her eyes began to dart around when Bette casted her a skeptical glance, knowing fully well that her bestfriend saw right through her lie. “Okay, so maybe seven was stretching it. Maybe four times at the most.”

     

    “Ah Sammy..” Bette sighed, casually draping an arm over her friend’s shoulder. “First of all, I know you’re lying. And-” She raised a finger in warning when she saw Sam about to refute her claim. “And, even if you were telling the truth, do you know how pathetic it is that you remember the exact number of sunrises you’ve watched? It only shows how little of it you’ve seen to begin with.” She pointed out with a smug grin before moving her hand down and playfully giving the girl’s right boob a playful swat.

     

    “Ow!” Sam yelped, pulling away from a chuckling Bette’s grasp.

     

    “Ooh.. no bra?”

     

    “Shut up!” Sam began to flush, tugging on her jacket so that it wouldn’t cling too much to her chest – the cold weather doing wonders to her nipples, much to her embarrassment.

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    1. Applause on the 67 pages Alchemy! And so the famous throwing of the necklace in the pond came into view, wonder who will be doing the heartbreaking water hunting to get it back. You’re always worth the wait, thanks for the post.

    5. I have to say, with work, it took me all morning to read this. But, thank you so much for the long chapters! I wish Bette and Tina would make up already!!! Not worried about the necklace…James was probably watching them. PPS

    6. bloody hell Alch!! that was a doozy! i think while reading that chapter i experienced every human emotion, by the end though i swear i could feel bettes pain – all credit to your writing! Though i absolutely love drama i soooooooooo want them to just kiss/have lots of make up sex/get back together and have babies! pps

    7. wow..what a long read!! that had alittle bit of everything..just Love,love Bette & Sam..so very funny!and “papou”…a term from my childhood-again,wow…did I mention this was really long?! and you saved the heart wrench for last.hmmmm, really well done, but you know you’re killing me here with the drama,right. You were not kidding when you warned us at the beginning of this trek…any sign of light at the end of the tunnel?..thank you…it was a great read…!!

    8. Alchy…W-O-W-S-E-R!!!!!!!!! The pain, the pain, Alchy. Make it go away. Bring the love. Mucho gracias for the 67 pages-fantastic writing! I’ve seen a bit of HYD on youtube, but it doesn’t compare to the emotional writing you do. Your words, the conversations, the pace of the story is all you…and it is truly magnificent. You’re a great writer! I cling to your inner Tibette-ness that happiness will come soon. PPS!

    10. You know that we have no words to describe that, don’ t you? I ‘m sitting here with tears and I’ m waiting the next one. You are simply the best. Thank you for that chapter. Can we have the next one soon, really soon? Many kisses girl.

    11. Stupendously good writing Alch. Hungover Bette will likely regret throwing the necklace in the pool :-( I hope one of them will fish it out. Heartbreaking ending to a great installment – 60 pages long and I still want more – thank you!

    12. Wow I just got back from my 3 week vacation and come back to 5 chapters of reading! I couldn’t stop and read all the chapters today! I gotta say you’re breaking my heart here, please fix our girls and their hearts and fast!! Can’t wait for the next chappie:0

    13. Holy smokes A! That was one emotional rollercoaster. I had to read the entire post on my ‘berry…That was painful, on so many levels. These two are just tearing each other apart. You would think that they would talk to each other before jumping to a conclusion.

    14. Holy smokes A! That was one emotional rollercoaster. I had to read the entire post on my ‘berry…That was painful, on so many levels. These two are just tearing each other apart. You would think that they would talk to each other before jumping to a conclusion.

    15. Either Tina’s donning scuba gear and looking for that pendant, or when a more sober Porter realizes what she’s done, she’s having that pond drained. At least I *hope* so. Alchemy, you’re breaking my heart, but that’s not going to stop me from wanting another 60 odd pages. Brilliant chapter, I love this story! Thanks :)

    17. You might have saved my sanity but you definitely broke my heart. :'( I know that scene from the show. It broke my heart watching it then and now it breaks my heart even more by reading your words. *sobs* Make this better, please!

    18. Thank you alchemy! Thanks for all the effort you put into this awesome story and I don’t mind the long chapters coz I know it’s gonna be worth reading. You have brought tears into my eyes from the past chappies and this is no exception and I hope you give us something to smile about soon! Looking forward to the next one hope it’s soon!

    19. That post espeically at the end was heartbreaking.Those two really have to sort their problems out. I don’t know how much longer i can take this. i do wonder though who will go and find the necklace in the pond Bette or Tina. PPS and please please please make it a little less heartbreaking please

    20. Wow, amazing Alch. Before I started reading, I went out for supplies and made sure I was good to go because I did not want to stop reading. I unplugged the phone and turned off my cell even. AWESOME! Love child of MC hammer and Lady Gaga, LOL, good stuff. I’ve always felt that way about heart spotted clothes, like they were to be cupid’s target practice range LOL. Thanks for the post. It’s okay if you post a that many at a time, I’ll quit my job to make the time to read them. BTW, you didn’t crash the website server by posting this many at one time? This has got to be a record for fanfic. Thanks for the post, loving it.

    21. I had every intention of reading the chapter in a couple of sittings, but somehow never found a place to stop! Fantastic, Alchemy! At the end, I imagined Tina making a swan dive into that pond and Bette’s security detail pulling her out with necklace in hand. Love the way you offset the sadness with so many hilarious images and situations.

    22. It took me awhile to get through this one,but it was awesome.I can’t remember last time when I laughed so hard reading a fanfic,Bette in the beginning ‘torturing’ all the F4’s members – it was priceless.Then I have to say that I’m a huge Tina fan,and there’s no fanfic in which I liked Bette more than Tina,until I read this one.Your Bette is really good,even if she’s a bitch sometimes,a smart ass or whatever,shes’ exceptionally well written,I love her lol.But this chapter I don’t know,I would go against the flow and I would say that I don’t want TiBette together anymore(don’t hit me!).The last part made me hate Tina a little,I don’t know it doesn’t sound right but that’s it.This vulnerable Bette is too damn cute to resist,and now I really want Jill to be interested in Bette(oh my,what I ask for?),so this way Bette will get a little bit of loving,granted that she’s a ‘heartless drunken bitch’ but she didn’t deserve Tina to give her back the necklace,what she’s supposed to do now?Anyway if you get them back(okay more like when) someone should go ‘fishing’ for that pendant,and I hope that someone wouldn’t be Bette.Waiting (not so) patiently for the next update.Thanks.

    23. Simply a-ma-zing…bril-liant…awe-some! BRAVA, Alchemy! I read and re-read it for almost two hours at the other site. (It’s easier to read long chapters and huge chunks of paragraphs there.) Truly worth every minute of my time. An excellent, entertaining read from start to finish. All I can give in return for your heroic effort and generosity is my industrial-strength, warm, cyber-bear hug. *I’m squishing you now, can you feel it?* :> Thank you, thank you, a thousand times thank you, Alchemy! :)

    28. I only watched bits and pieces of the taiwanese version and on the korean version it was there but not in this context.. i cannot wait how u would incorporate the maid part.. such a great and entertaining story.. one of the best.. pls post again soon.. ur avid fan..:)

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