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    Just The Girl 2.0 – Chapter Thirteen (based loosely on HYD: Returns)

    Story written on July 13, 2009 by Alchemy10.
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    I can’t smile..

    “Hm?”

    “Did you talk to her about coming home?”

    “I did.” Alice nodded.

    “And?”

    “She didn’t want to.”

    “Of course.” Bette dropped her head. She was expecting to be let down but shit, that still hurt.

    “She’s not ready, you have to understand that..”

    “I’m trying..”

    “Well try harder.” Alice advised. “And please, stop calling Tina. It’s not helping your case, I think its annoying her.”

    “But I miss her..”

    “I know you do.”

    “Does she miss me?”

    “She says no,” Alice shrugged, making Bette’s face fall in disappointment. “But we all know otherwise.” She dished out a quick save. “Give her time Bette, she’s still mad and hurting.”

    “But I’m hurting too!” Bette whined. “But you don’t see me wanting to take a break from her..”

    “Can you blame her wanting to get away from you? She thought you were cheating on her!” Alice folded her arms. “Seeing you being so friendly with that girl was one thing, but Tonya’s pictures just brought it to a whole new level..”

    “Yeah, well, and along with this..” Bette frowned, taking the crumpled piece of bright pink underwear inside her pocket and throwing it in the middle of the table. If she wasn’t so intent in looking for the owner of the thong, she would have poured gas on it and burned it into ash.

    “Eww..” Alice pulled a face. Bette and Tina never mentioned anything about underwear. “Whose is that?”

    “I dunno!” Bette threw her hands in the air, exasperation laced in her voice. “But Tina found it inside my car so she came up to the logical conclusion that it was Jill’s.”

    “Is it?”

    “No!”

    “Gawd..” Alice lifted the undergarments carefully with her thumb and forefinger. You know that something was really ugly and tacky when.. “Even I wouldn’t wear this crap!”

    “Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!” A voice by the door exclaimed, oozing with awe and happiness. “You found it! Omigod, I’ve been searching everywhere for that!”

    Alice’s blue eyes widened.

    Bette’s brown ones narrowed.

    Oblivious to the world, Clara’s green orbs twinkled with delight.

    “This is yours?” Bette asked Clara, her voice quiet and subdued – a nice mask for the turmoil bubbling underneath.

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    2. I went back and read JTG chapter 30 – the one with the Ferris wheel and the gift-cookies for Bette’s B’day…including the “Tina’s heart cookie.” Bette promised not to hurt TK’s heart. Don’t you just hate it when someone brings back something you’ve said or done in the past to make a point. :) He-he! Need to fix this…PPS. :)

    3. Going back to your hiding hole? What the….? I know that doesn’t mean a few months before another post?! Very nice lengthy update but I need more…this story is my crack. LMAO! Bring on groveling Bette!

    4. So good I have to comment twice. :-) I forgot to say earlier that I don’t often get into teenage TiBette stories, but this story is just beyond good. I love all your characters, B and T especially. Your reformed and generous Bette, and your strong, passionate, stubborn Tina – “the immortal weed” – always a pleasure to read your updates. Thank you for taking the time to write and share with us. :-)

    5. Ah, girl! Thank you again. I don’ t know what can I say to you. I love that story. And sorry I’ m late but I was out of town. Have a nice day. Kisses.

    6. Groveling Bette…bring it on Alchemy! Tina deserves major groveling.Alice was hysterical in this chapter! Her snarkiness to Clara…too good!Kareoke…with double dare…classic. Wonderful balence of drama and humor. Once again, you rock!

    7. Thanks for this update Alchemy. I can just imagine Bettes singing. And seems, the we havent reach the peak of the drama for whats to come. I remember the scenes with those effects. But please dont wait till the end to get them back together, pretty pls.

    9. Barry! LOL! That was great, and I thought this was very up lifting. I’m also happy that Jill made that effort to talk to Tina. Although, I did fear for a second that she was going to leave DD marks on her. LOL. I’m loving it, thanks for the post.

    10. What a cliffy! I loved it before and I still love it up to now. Thanks for the post. I wish their heartache would end. I am hurting too…

    12. I left that comment for the wrong author, oops. *blush* This B&T are rather heartbreaking. I hope Tina can listen to poor, half-strangled Shane… But the onus is on Bette. She’s got to earn Tina’s trust again. But Tina does need to know that Bette didn’t cheat on her. Grovelling Bette will be interesting. Thanks for the post, Alchemy.

    14. what can i say… i hate what they are doing… but i have faith it will end soon and be back together… at least i hope tina is willing to start forgiving bette… more ass kissing is called for… for sure… but tina needs to get out of where she is… let bette suffer some more… seeing tina all the tima and net being with her will kill her more..pps

    15. Okay so this dose of drama was definitely better..it’s what they must go through..I appreciatethe lovely balance of humor w/ the drama..and of course I love Sam’s return..the only other one Bette listens to…thank you

    16. Alchemy your mix of humor, drama, and sweetness is incomparable. :-) Bette dug her own hole with Tina, and now she needs to dig herself out. Trust is a fragile thing, and hard to earn back when it’s broken. The singing was priceless, haha! Thank you for this lighter chapter – it’s always a joy to read your writing.

    19. Man, I feel for both Bette and Tina. Tina has been royally wronged, but Bette is trying to make up for past mistakes. If Bette is ever in a position of talking to Tina she needs to come clean with all that she has been doing and why.

    20. That was great, sad to see B&T apart but hope they will talk, work thing out and get back together soon. Alice is crazy but gonna love her. Please post more, thanks!

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