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    Just The Girl 2.0 – Chapter Thirteen (based loosely on HYD: Returns)

    Story written on July 13, 2009 by Alchemy10.
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    I can’t smile..

    “I’ll try Alice.” Tina sighed. “No promises though.”

    “I know.”

    “I’m sorry, I know that’s not what you were hoping to hear.”

    “No apologies, TK. I understand completely – or just enough not to bother you about it constantly.”

    “Thanks Al.” Tina chuckled, a throaty sound that didn’t sound like her real laughter at all. It was as if after two days of doing nothing but cry and be angry, her body had forgotten what it was like to laugh.

    “So um.. can you think about the other thing too? About you coming home? It’ll just be another week before the term ends, it’ll be pointless to waste money on a motel when you’ve got a big house waiting for you..” Alice tried again and crossed her fingers, hoping that Tina was at least open to the idea. “Porter’s offering to be the one to move out for a while if you’re not comfortable living within the same space as her..”

    Not comfortable? Tina looked up at the ceiling, trying to keep her tears at bay. Damn.. she hated how easy it was to make her cry these days – her tears were shallow, ready to spill forth with the tiniest bit of provocation. Not comfortable with Bette? The notion ate at her insides and twisted her already jumbled emotions. That couldn’t be farther from the truth two days ago. But now.. now she didn’t know. As much as she loved Bette, she had also become wary of her. The one person she thought she knew the best, appeared in her eyes as a stranger – and that, that is reason enough to feel uncomfortable.

    “TK?”

    “I.. I’m sorry Al. But my answer’s no.”

    “No?”

    “A definite no.”

    Alice sighed. “Fine. But I’ll be sending out a bodyguard to look after your room 24/7, okay?”

    “Al.” Tina ran a tired hand down her face. “I don’t need a caretaker. I want to be alone.”

    “He won’t intrude, he’ll only stay outside your door. It’ll be like he wasn’t there at all. These guys can act invisible if you want them to.”

    “Alice, please,” Tina begged, her voice weary. “I don’t want one.”

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    2. I went back and read JTG chapter 30 – the one with the Ferris wheel and the gift-cookies for Bette’s B’day…including the “Tina’s heart cookie.” Bette promised not to hurt TK’s heart. Don’t you just hate it when someone brings back something you’ve said or done in the past to make a point. :) He-he! Need to fix this…PPS. :)

    3. Going back to your hiding hole? What the….? I know that doesn’t mean a few months before another post?! Very nice lengthy update but I need more…this story is my crack. LMAO! Bring on groveling Bette!

    4. So good I have to comment twice. :-) I forgot to say earlier that I don’t often get into teenage TiBette stories, but this story is just beyond good. I love all your characters, B and T especially. Your reformed and generous Bette, and your strong, passionate, stubborn Tina – “the immortal weed” – always a pleasure to read your updates. Thank you for taking the time to write and share with us. :-)

    5. Ah, girl! Thank you again. I don’ t know what can I say to you. I love that story. And sorry I’ m late but I was out of town. Have a nice day. Kisses.

    6. Groveling Bette…bring it on Alchemy! Tina deserves major groveling.Alice was hysterical in this chapter! Her snarkiness to Clara…too good!Kareoke…with double dare…classic. Wonderful balence of drama and humor. Once again, you rock!

    7. Thanks for this update Alchemy. I can just imagine Bettes singing. And seems, the we havent reach the peak of the drama for whats to come. I remember the scenes with those effects. But please dont wait till the end to get them back together, pretty pls.

    9. Barry! LOL! That was great, and I thought this was very up lifting. I’m also happy that Jill made that effort to talk to Tina. Although, I did fear for a second that she was going to leave DD marks on her. LOL. I’m loving it, thanks for the post.

    10. What a cliffy! I loved it before and I still love it up to now. Thanks for the post. I wish their heartache would end. I am hurting too…

    12. I left that comment for the wrong author, oops. *blush* This B&T are rather heartbreaking. I hope Tina can listen to poor, half-strangled Shane… But the onus is on Bette. She’s got to earn Tina’s trust again. But Tina does need to know that Bette didn’t cheat on her. Grovelling Bette will be interesting. Thanks for the post, Alchemy.

    14. what can i say… i hate what they are doing… but i have faith it will end soon and be back together… at least i hope tina is willing to start forgiving bette… more ass kissing is called for… for sure… but tina needs to get out of where she is… let bette suffer some more… seeing tina all the tima and net being with her will kill her more..pps

    15. Okay so this dose of drama was definitely better..it’s what they must go through..I appreciatethe lovely balance of humor w/ the drama..and of course I love Sam’s return..the only other one Bette listens to…thank you

    16. Alchemy your mix of humor, drama, and sweetness is incomparable. :-) Bette dug her own hole with Tina, and now she needs to dig herself out. Trust is a fragile thing, and hard to earn back when it’s broken. The singing was priceless, haha! Thank you for this lighter chapter – it’s always a joy to read your writing.

    19. Man, I feel for both Bette and Tina. Tina has been royally wronged, but Bette is trying to make up for past mistakes. If Bette is ever in a position of talking to Tina she needs to come clean with all that she has been doing and why.

    20. That was great, sad to see B&T apart but hope they will talk, work thing out and get back together soon. Alice is crazy but gonna love her. Please post more, thanks!

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