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    Just The Girl 2.0 – Chapter Two (based loosely on HYD: Returns)

    Story written on April 1, 2009 by Alchemy10.
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    The itch, the swelling and the pain..

    “No more dirtier than yours.”

    “Excuse me? I beg to disagree..”

    “Disagree all you want, doesn’t make it less true.”

    Tina arched an eyebrow and placed a hand on her hip. “Okay horn dog, shut your dirty mouth, drop the shorts and lie down.”

    “Why?”

    “I’m gonna put some ointment on your rash.”

    “Oh.” Bette exclaimed before giving an exaggerated pout. “That doesn’t sound very sexy..”

    “It doesn’t?” Tina asked, grabbing the medicine tube on the coffee table. “Okay, let me rephrase it then.” She cleared her throat and dropped her voice in a sultry whisper. “Take off your shorts and lie down baby, I’m going to lather up your magnificent – though slightly deformed and grotesque – ass with lots and lots of magic ointment. It will make the swelling subside and let your skin tingle with delight. So remove your clothing and let me in, allow me to massage the red cheeks within.” She purred and winked. “Well? Was that sexy enough for you?”

    “No..” Bette pulled a face. “That was disturbing.”

    “…”

    “It was! And kinda insulting too. Grotesque?”

    Tina shrugged and twisted the cap open, squeezing a decent amount of medicine on her fingers. “Well, I tried my best.”

    Bette sighed and did as she was asked, standing up and kicking aside her shorts and undies. “If I feel better after putting the ointment, can we have sex?” She asked bluntly as she laid herself down on the couch.

    Tina chuckled at the girl’s question. “Don’t you think of anything else other than sex?”

    “Of course, I think of you too.”

    “Sweet.” Tina rolled her eyes and grinned. “Why do I get the impression that someone here’s incredibly sexually frustrated?”

    Bette narrowed her eyes at the girl applying medicine on her butt. “Don’t pretend like you’re not feeling it too.”

    “I’m not.” Tina lied, holding Bette still while waiting for the ointment to get absorbed and dry off.

    “Oh really? Then why did I wake up this morning with your hand massaging my breasts?”

    The blonde smiled innocently, though her eyes twinkled in mischief. “I didn’t know what I was doing. I remember dreaming about kneading bread when that happened.”

    Bette chuckled softly. “I can’t wait to know what’ll happen when you actually have an x-rated dream.”

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    4. Brilliant, as always, Alchemy. Your dialogue and descriptions are so funny. The image of itchy, swollen Bette is just hilarious, especially the breakfast scene. I always look forward to your posts as they brighten any day! Thanks so much for continuing this story.

    5. A hairbrush is a good way to help relieve the itch. Damn jellyfish and other stinging things. I guess that the economic situation is even hitting the fan fiction stories. I love Bette and Tina with their humor along with their love.

    6. Poor Bette, she is too young to be in this economical dilemma. Is it that bad?, is she afraid she has to reduce the number of employees by firing them?, O Alchemy, I’m really hooked up and want to know what will happen :)

    7. Okay… after the fun in the sun with Alice and Shane, and Bette’s… unfortunate (but funny)… bite on her derrière, I’m now worried. Why are the number of employees significant? Is Bette worried about the sheer amount of people she’ll have in her employ? What’s going on with Melvin? What’s happening with PGC? It’s all very ominous, but very gripping. Love the story, thanks Alchemy.

    8. Have I told you I LOVE this story?? Their bantering is so funny & I love both the tenderness & the roughness between them. As you know the “…” are my favorites- they speak volumes..I mean I can SEE the expressions on their faces! And now you leave us hanging tooo…You are SO VERY AWESOME!!

    9. Ok ack to reality humhum. Number of emplyee making Bette seek? Why? trouble trouble trouble. Tat was great love it as usual and sooooo funny. PPVS

    11. That was great, funny about Alice and Shane. Poor Bette about the itchy lol, that was funny and cute. Now let see whats going with the Porters business. Please post more, thanks!

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