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Just The Girl – Chapter Forty Eight Part One (a HYD-inspired fic)
“Love you too.” Bette whispered back, rubbing noses with Tina. “Sleep.” She laughed lightly as she pulled Tina’s face unto her neck. “Take a deep breath and inhale as much of me as you want.” She offered graciously.
“Thanks but no thanks.” Tina giggled. “I’d end up killing you if I do that.”
“Scary.”
“And morbid.” Tina wiggled her brows, capturing Bette’s lips once more.
A slow, languid kiss was shared by the two. And although it started innocent, it didn’t surprise Bette when the exchange took a very nice turn and turned into a deep, scorching kiss initiated by no less than Tina herself.
“I thought..” Bette smiled as Tina proceeded to roll them so that she was topping her. “..that.. you.. wanted.. to.. sleep?” She asked in between kisses.
“Changed my mind.” Tina shrugged, tugging Bette’s pajama top open.
“That quick, huh?” Bette teased, easing out of her top.
“Can’t help it. Maybe just one round.” Tina made good use of her hands and caressed the soft and inviting mocha skin made available to her.
Bette chuckled unbelievingly at Tina’s statement. “It’s never just one round with you.” She helped Tina out of her own obtrusive shirt and moaned when their naked torso’s made contact.
“Never just one round with us.” Tina corrected, drowning in all things Bette as she nipped, kissed and licked her face, neck and shoulder over and over.
“True.” Bette agreed, sighing in pleasure.
So true.
They could go at it all night and lay exhausted afterwards – sexed up and spent.. but still aching for more.
The wonder of the teenage libido.
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“You’re not like the girls I’ve dated before.”
“Well, no self-respecting girl would ever allow themselves to be treated like mindless puppets.” She shoots me a glare. “So I’m thankful that I’m not like the girls you’ve dated in the past. That only means that I have both a brain and a backbone.” She answers me with a scathing look. I feel my lips twitching at the sides. This girl has some major nerve.
“Stop the car.” She orders me.
“What?!” I yell, taken aback by her request. In the middle of nowhere? Has she gone crazy?
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(4 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
One of the absolute best stories I’ve read. Glad you’re back with bank account intact! Glad Melvin has woken up both literally and emotionally. Love the whipped Bette… the dialogue between her and Tina is too cute. Look forward to the other half of the chapter.
This is the way to go Melvin. Bette is your daughter and you love her. You aso own an apology to Ken and Tina tho. Great post Alchemy10. dana still has to apologise to Tina.Bette and Tina are soooooooooo cute , they are funny, full of love and my hope. Can’t wait for the other half to be posted
That was great and they are funny. ok now let see how Bette react and she heard about her father in the hospital
Yey! Melvin is stepping off his high horse! I really, really, really love your story. It has the right mix of drama and comedy in it. Thanks for teh chapter!
great chapter!!!well half chapter can’t wait til you post the other half.Good that melvin has finally come to his senses to see Bette.PPVS
great chapter!!!well half chapter can’t wait til you post the other half.Good that melvin has finally come to his senses to see Bette.PPVS
Another great chapter from the queen of story telling herself. Yay for Melvin. The funny parts have me rolling so hard and yelling at like 4 in the morning, my neighbors are going to try to have me evicted soon. Can’t wait for the next post. Tah!
You’re back!! Great chapter as usual… Dana, I think, won’t be hurting Alice any time soon. But she and Tina still have some making up to do. Maybe a helpful push, even from Porter? And I’m glad Melvin’s coming around. He obviously loves his daughter, but it’s good that his stubbornness is gone so he can see that. And B&T are still just the cutest! Love the story, Alchemy, thanks for the psot!
Love the bantering!! too bad dana and tina couldn’t talk about it, maybe another time? well i’m glad melivin is coming to his senses! :)PPS