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Chapter 31
Bette stared at the space in front of her, her feet wouldn’t move her from the spot she stood in and her eyes wouldn’t move from the wooden chair that she would never see rock again…
The pain in her chest had seemed to subside to a manageable level, but not to a level where she could utter a word about Lily’s passing to anyone.
Her cell phone had rung several times during the morning, but she couldn’t bring herself to answer it. On checking the ID, she had seen that it was Kit, and with a quick SMS, she knew that it would appease her sister’s wondering, but not to the extent that she told her what was going on.
The previous day had been so much harder than she had ever anticipated it would, but then, she hadn’t even given it a thought of how it would feel to lose Lily, not the actuality of the event. Her mind had passed over her diagnosis and its meaning, but not to the point of the end result, why would it…, it wasn’t meant to happen yet…
The only thing she could compare the previous day’s happenings with was the days leading to her mother’s death. It was apparent it was imminent and along with Lily, they had those silent shared looks that confirmed that time was short.
But they all knew.
The night they slept in one another’s arms it was as if they all knew that when morning came Maxy would have slipped away.
But it was the pain that was the only comparable.
There was no way on God’s given earth that Bette had been prepared to sit on the deck with Lily, holding the woman’s hand in her own, only to discover that after a short time she was gone.
There was no obvious deterioration in her health. There were no words between them to share as the last. There were no long nights, wondering if it was going to be the last…
They had cleared the breakfast dishes together…
Lily’s headache. Was that the sign she should have taken more notice of…? Was that it…? Was the sudden pain she felt that made her hold her head in her hands the thing triggered it all…?
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ok, you and skipton know how to keep us fans from missing The L Word. Thanks for posting, you are a very good writer, I really enjoy your stories
Absolutely perfect! You have captured everything necessary in this chapter to bring so much of Lily’s life to a close properly. Mate, the note just sent chills down my spine. It’s so true that in love, one must take tender care of the other ones heart. Let’s watch that tenderness unfold through your delicate hands. Jo, you never cease to please. A brilliant and gifted writer indeed. I think a certain someone else would have been proud of the way you brought Lily to life in this fic. A great honor, and a great service. xo
Wow Jo, another fabulous chapter! You write so beautifully and the emotion just drips from the page. I have a feeling that Bette won’t be alone too long; Tina senses she needs her.
such anguish…..makes me fell the need to have a bucket and a box of kleenex by my side!!!!
Jo it eems that I can never find enough words or the right words to tell you how much I enjoy your writing. This chapter was so beautfully written and expressed all the love, and care that one feels for ths specal someone. Your writing and your words are so eloquent and I love everything that you write. So happy to see you back. Post when you can.
This is such a beautiful story. I cried again and still can’t get enough. I feel so sorry for Bette and what she’s going through. Can’t Tina make some sort a plan to go back for the papers. She has to know and feel how much Bette needs her. I’m sure she also knows how Bette will hold her feelings inside and not ask for her to come home. So sad…but I’m sure you’ll bring them together when the time is right. Please let it be soon. PPS
So touching, and perfectly written, you always have been and always will be the one who touches our hearts and move us in a way that no one could. Thank you so much. Post soon and have a great weekend.
I absolutely adore you writing, Jo. I had to read it twice just to savor every word… that note had me teary-eyed. I hope I’m misunderstanding your note that you anticipate only one more chapter… I’m never prepared for your stories to end. Thanks for the lovely read!
Damn Jo, you made me cry!!!! Wow!!!! What an amazing chapter!!!! Thank you
Always glad to see your name, mate. What a great way to end my day! This was an amazing post… hey anything you write is amazing! Such a moving story!P.S Why is this Frisky one distracting you? I think you need to ignore the Badger… we need more updates from you! =)
I absolutely love everything you write and this story is no exception. Please don’t end the story, there’s so much more to be told. PPS
Very moving story Jo. Enjoy your writing very much. Looking forward to more.
love this connection between B&T, and totally understand Bette’s hesitence to accept that she needs someone…Tina better go to her
This is so sad and emotinal!
You made me cry. Knowing how broken Bette is and her inability to reach out to Tina was heart breaking. I am glad that Tina trusted her gut feelings about Bette. I hope she can get to her and ease her burden. Beautifully written!
Jo, I just finished this chapter after reading the whole story last week-end and this, I have so many emotions running through my head I could never put them all down here. Just know it ever posed the question again, if your stories ever changed someones path in life, you can say “Yes they have” Thank you so much. Md
Wow! That was emotional. Tears streaming down my face. I hope Tina can get to Bette soon. Great chapter.
You just described the exact feelings one has when we lose the most important person who has shaped and made our lives important. Yes, that lump on our throats is unavoidable, plus the feeling of emptyness, which represents the imminent “absence” of that person. After grieving, you are comforted that the memory of such an extraordinary person remains and lives in your heart. However, the sting always surfaces, when you remember that such a special person is not there, with you. Thanks, Jo. You really honored, with dignity, the Lillys who have touched and made us better people. Sincerely, Lucero & Marsha – JC’s Salsa Aunties, from Mexico City
Beautifully done, Jo. You were really able to describe Lilly’s kind spirit throughout this story and the note she left for Bette, continued to show how unconditionally she loved her. It broke my heart that Bette couldn’t pick up the phone to tell Tina she needed her. Let her in Bette ! Let Tina be there to help you during this time of sorrow. PS.