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“Lamenting”–a script for Season 2 episode 1, part 1
Dana:
It’s just not going to happen…it was too fast…it was the stress…I just needed something solid…I thought that this was it. I’m so sorry. I know how unfair this is to you…when he died…I just needed some sure footing, some loving constant to fill this house…
Tonya:
Oh, ***** Mr. P. I hated that cat.
Dana:
What?
Tonya:
That’s right, I hated him. I hated the way he watched us, I hated that he puked on the bed and that I had to clean it up.
Dana:
But you said that you loved Mr. P…
Tonya:
Oh, Jesus…Dana, how old are you?
Dana:
Obviously not old enough. I think you should go now.
Tonya:
(looking frantic)
But sweetie, don’t you know how much I love you?
Dana:
And I want the ring back.
Tonya:
You and what army? This is mine.
Scene 12: The Planet, afternoon
(Alice is at the counter placing an order)
Alice:
Two skinny lattes to go, please.
(Marina emerges from her office)
Marina:
Hello, Alice.
(gives Alice a quick hug and kiss on the cheek)
Where was everyone this morning?
Alice:
(looking and sounding nervous)
Oh, who can say? It’s been a busy day. You know, Fridays.
(the clerk puts her order up on the counter)
Marina:
(watching Alice quizzically)
Are you okay?
Alice:
Oh, yeah…just lots going on, you know. We go to press on Monday and I haven’t finished my story yet…under pressure, you know. (sings the melody to Queen’s "Under Pressure")
Marina:
(shoots Alice a knowing glance, eying the two lattes)
Uh huh…
Alice:
Well, yeah, gotta run now. Bye Marina.
Marina:
Are you coming to Radar tonight?
Alice:
Um, I’m gonna try. Okay? Bye.
(Alice quickly exits The Planet and walks toward her car)
Alice:
(mumbling to herself)
Jesus Christ on a cross…
Scene 12: CAC parking garage, afternoon
(Bette pulls in to her space, turns off engine, takes a deep breath and puts her head on the steering wheel for a moment, then gets out of the car)
(From inside Candace’s car: she watches through the windshield as Bette exits her Saab. But then she stops and leans against the side of it and puts her head in her hands)
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WOW. Just like watching the show….nearly better! Please continue, cause man that was great:) Thanks…
Wow strong stuff. Hope you have time for the next chapter soon.
i like the style please continue
very very good story…that was amazing..go on
You are a terrific screen writer! Bravo! Love that Marina is still here. Loooove it. :)
Wow this is just like the show and I’m like watching the show right now, this is awesome, lov it. Please post soon the next chapter, thank you!