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Lest I Forget (2)
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Just as I felt myself getting closer, she pulled out. “Stay with me,” she whispered, and I withdrew my fingers. She rolled me onto my back and gently stretched herself out on top of me, and we both sighed at the feeling of skin on skin. After a few long kisses, she rested her leg between mine. Understanding her intent, I brought mine up and moaned as I felt just how close she was. We moved together slowly, holding one another close, and when she came, I could have sworn that it was it at the exact same instant that I did. I held her shaking body in my arms and whispered sweet nothings to her for a long time before we started touching again. This time, we were less urgent and a lot more playful, happy to finally be back together in every sense of the word.
When morning finally came, we lay exhausted and sweaty on the hotel bed, breathing the same air and somehow knowing that things were going to be okay.
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After we’d spent a few days on the beach and made a few short trips to the mountains, we decided to extend the vacation by a few days and go to see Pompeii, which Alice had always talked about. I had to admit it was interesting, although I’ve never been as enamored with history as Alice has, even in passing. But it was fun to see her so excited about it, and I thought it was pretty cool.
The few days there went by way too quickly, but we knew we had to get back home. I wasn’t quite recovered enough to run off and see Rome, Venice and Florence, as much as we both wanted to. We promised each other that we’d come back at a later date and see those places, as well as Greece. And Spain. And Egypt, Japan, France, Ireland, Scotland…pretty much everywhere. We spent the entire flight back making plans, and it felt great. I couldn’t remember ever being so happy.
The next couple months passed in much the same way. I was making strides in my recovery, and Alice decided to take our therapist’s advice and wrote out her feelings. She’d often sit for hours on her laptop, barely looking up. I think that if I hadn’t interrupted her for meals, she’d have skipped them altogether.
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After two chapters I am in awe. You are doing a wonderful job writing this from Dana’s perspective, and I look forward to her further recounting their lives together. I somehow have a feeling I will need tissues handy…
I read this as soon as I saw it posted, but, wanted to re-read it before commenting. I really love this story and you know how I feel about your writing (although I am sorry to hear it springs from insomnia. Insomnia sucks). I love the details and the honesty with which you write — it seems so real to the characters. Things aren’t always perfect in relationships, but, if you are in the right one, you can work through it and be stronger. I guess I didn’t realize from the first chapter that Alice would be so “with it”. What a blessing to be able to say goodbye and know the person has heard it. Love the non-verbal communication the girls have after so many years together. I do have to keep reminding myself that they have had 37-38 years together because some of this is just so sad. Thanks for the great story!
Beautifully Written! Looking fwd to the next post!
this is heartbreakingly beautiful. youre such a talent!
Another beautiful chapter MT – I don’t know how you do it, but please continue
This is such a great story. I look forward to hearing more about their life together. I love the way even though Alice can’t talk you give her such a strong voice.
Wow, beautifully written as always and so realistic. People always assume that if you’re old then it’s somewhat ok when it’s your time, not really understanding that sometimes it’s worse. Thank you so much for your dedication too, means a lot :)
you made me cry! hahahah and I don’t cry much:) guess that changes now huh? hehe thanks for updating, this is a wonderful story. I don’t know what I would do if I were Dana in that situation. This is very well written, thanks! you’re awesome… PPS?;D
Thank you for this wonderful 2nd chapter.Realistic and wonderfully written as you always manage to do. I’m just in awe.And to read about their getting back together and their life together is really nice. I probably could say more about this story, but I can’t keep really form the words right now. And english not being my 1st language sucks at this point, lol.Can’t wait for the next chapter.
And again you leave me speechless. Well done! Excellent! I could go on and on with those kind of superlatives when I talk about this story. I hope the next chapter contains memories of Danish with their family. I would love to know how does two were as mums.