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Lest I Forget (2)
I suppose I’d been expecting it to be a big discussion, but it wasn’t. We’d gotten settled in and had a nice dinner at a restaurant not far away, and after coming back to the room, we were both shy with one another. There was an obvious undercurrent in the room, but neither of us wanted to be the first to bring it up. Finally, I couldn’t take the tense silence anymore and got up to hug her. She hugged me back tightly, and I finally got up the courage to whisper “I’ve missed you,” in her ear. I felt her shaking in my arms as she moved back enough to kiss me.
It felt better than I’d thought to be able to touch her again, and to have her touch me. We undressed each other slowly, marveling at how beautiful we found each other to be. I’d been concerned that she would think I was ugly now, but she showed me beyond a doubt that she felt the opposite. I could feel tears pricking my eyes as she took in all the new scars and jutting bones that hadn’t been there before, and my emaciated look as well as the lack of definition that was now in my muscles didn’t deter her a bit. As she put her mouth on me, I knew all that didn’t matter. She loved me anyway, and wanted me even in this depleted state. The way she kissed and nipped my neck, the feel of her fingers playing over my scars, the slight but welcome pain as she bit gently on my nipple told me I was still wanted more than anything she could ever have said.
We made love all night. I’d forgotten how amazing it felt to be inside of her, and to have her inside me, but she was determined to jog my memory. I could only lay there in rapt silence as she kissed and nuzzled her way down my body, making love to me with her mouth as if it was the first time. There was urgency in her touch, but there was nothing rushed about it. We kept our eye contact as she started to move her tongue inside me, and I couldn’t remember ever feeling anything so intense. I’m fairly sure I came a few times before she stretched back up to lay beside me. When we kissed, I could taste myself in her mouth, and it made me want to return her affections. My fingers slipped into her wetness before I really had time to process what I was doing…not that she minded. She just gasped and bit my shoulder lightly, reciprocating as if it was something she’d always wanted to do.
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After two chapters I am in awe. You are doing a wonderful job writing this from Dana’s perspective, and I look forward to her further recounting their lives together. I somehow have a feeling I will need tissues handy…
I read this as soon as I saw it posted, but, wanted to re-read it before commenting. I really love this story and you know how I feel about your writing (although I am sorry to hear it springs from insomnia. Insomnia sucks). I love the details and the honesty with which you write — it seems so real to the characters. Things aren’t always perfect in relationships, but, if you are in the right one, you can work through it and be stronger. I guess I didn’t realize from the first chapter that Alice would be so “with it”. What a blessing to be able to say goodbye and know the person has heard it. Love the non-verbal communication the girls have after so many years together. I do have to keep reminding myself that they have had 37-38 years together because some of this is just so sad. Thanks for the great story!
Beautifully Written! Looking fwd to the next post!
this is heartbreakingly beautiful. youre such a talent!
Another beautiful chapter MT – I don’t know how you do it, but please continue
This is such a great story. I look forward to hearing more about their life together. I love the way even though Alice can’t talk you give her such a strong voice.
Wow, beautifully written as always and so realistic. People always assume that if you’re old then it’s somewhat ok when it’s your time, not really understanding that sometimes it’s worse. Thank you so much for your dedication too, means a lot :)
you made me cry! hahahah and I don’t cry much:) guess that changes now huh? hehe thanks for updating, this is a wonderful story. I don’t know what I would do if I were Dana in that situation. This is very well written, thanks! you’re awesome… PPS?;D
Thank you for this wonderful 2nd chapter.Realistic and wonderfully written as you always manage to do. I’m just in awe.And to read about their getting back together and their life together is really nice. I probably could say more about this story, but I can’t keep really form the words right now. And english not being my 1st language sucks at this point, lol.Can’t wait for the next chapter.
And again you leave me speechless. Well done! Excellent! I could go on and on with those kind of superlatives when I talk about this story. I hope the next chapter contains memories of Danish with their family. I would love to know how does two were as mums.