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Lest I Forget (5a)
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With some final detailed attention to her lips, which were now swollen from the intensity of our kissing, I moved down the slightest bit to kiss her pulse point, delighting in how her pulse sped up at my actions. She moaned again and threw her head back, giving me more access. I took advantage of this and sucked at her neck as if I would never be able to get enough, and maybe that was true. At the moment, it definitely felt like it was. She certainly didn’t seem to mind, but after a few minutes of this she gently put her hands on my face and pulled me up to look at her.
“I love you,” she said in something between a whimper and a growl. I thought it was the single sexiest thing I’d ever heard, but I didn’t have time to process it much further before she pulled me to her and kissed me hard and rough. I moaned as she bit gently on my tongue, and without really thinking about it I brought my hand to her right breast and squeezed it through her dress. She sighed into my mouth and broke the kiss reluctantly, pushing me back a little. I looked up at her, confused.
“Are you okay?” I asked, concerned that I’d hurt her somehow. She looked away from me and bit her lip, and I felt even worse for a second until she looked back at me. There were oceans of desire in her eyes, but a little bit of shyness and embarrassment too, and I thought it was adorable.
“I’m fine,” she replied in a murmur. “I’m better than fine, really. I just…well, this will sound really dumb, but I don’t want our first time as a married couple to be on a couch.” I just stared at her, having absolutely no clue why that should matter. Then again, I suppose I wasn’t really thinking altogether clearly at the moment. She saw my confusion and smiled, caressing my face with her hand. I sighed and closed my eyes, leaning into her touch. “It’s dumb, I know. I just feel like when we consummate our marriage it’s important, you know? And as much as I want you to fuck me right now, I feel like it’ll be cheap if it’s on the damn couch. Is it okay if we go in the bedroom?” she asked, still not looking at me. “I know it’s stupid. It’s stupid, right? Nevermind.” I finally registered what she was saying and how cute it was, as well as the fact that I agreed when I gave it some thought. I eased myself up off of her gently and held my hand out to her. She grinned and took it, and I didn’t so much lead her to the bedroom as we ended up racing each other.
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hey! Sorry for not commenting on the 4th part of this story. I was wondering the whole time if you updated it, I just appearently didn’t see it. But hey, that gave me two parts at one time!Lovely wedding and wonderful wedding night. Just everything about it was beautifully written and described. Them first just sitting down on the couch after they got home was kinda typically danish and it fit somehow. I found it sweet. And don’t worry, you did a very good job with the first person writing. Loved it!
Beautifully Written….and HOT!I love thier relationship!
As I said before, better and better – oh, and hotter and hotter … Wow!! Wonderful, fantastic, bravo, more!!
I guess I was overwhelmed by the 2 paragraphs and the last line “I was truly saying goodbye to her just sent me over the top and I had to take a break. This post is another great piece of work. S’s toast was right on and touching. I am glad that that the rest of the chapter is more about happy Danish, I was a little apprehensive that I might keep crying for the rest of the chapter. Then you showed us the humor. “…couldn’t pee on our own, then other was to buy a gun and start firing,,. and racing each other to the bedroom, classic! I might have mentioned this before, and I will say it again, you have to be the “Yoda of Danish.” I have not read one piece of your work that would negate my opinion. You have A & D down pact, writing as if you were themselves. And please do not second guess yourself. I echo what MaGoose said, “excellent first person NC-17.” Just awesome MT. Thank you.
MT great story I love it you are an amazing writer keep it up
MT great story I love it you are an amazing writer keep it up
I’m thinking of contucting a petition drive for keeping Alice alive in this story ;p. It’s too haaaard!!! So, hereby I ask, beg, plead for this fanfic to be a little sci-fic… Anyone join me? ;) just kiddin’ (well, half true). Anyway, I loved it as always MT, so once more eskerrik asko!
The first part was very moving. I could totally picture the two of them being all caught up in their own little world on their wedding. And the second part…damn, that was the hottest strap-on scene ever! :D L3 is only 3,5 weeks away. I’m counting the days!
wow…that’s the only word i can form. i almost stopped reading after the 1st page to tell you how fn amazing and touching dana’s breakdown was written. but i forged on and the rest of this is just…wow.
Okay I didn’t think I was going to get through the first page. Dana’s breakdown almost did me in and was very affecting. I think eveyone who’s reading this will agree that your writing from Dana’s perspective is just spot on. Shane’s speech at the reception was just exactly what I would’ve imagined from Shane! Back at the apartment… Dana and Alice’s slow burn was very Danish. However the line, “But I love the way you beg me when I wear it, and the way you moan for me when I use it,” OMG. Anyway, it was a pretty hot little scene in a very good chapter. I reaaallly wish Alice’s condition would improve, or at the least case we get “many” more chapters of happy memories. Great writing!
Well, I think we can say that you mastered writing a sex scene in the first person pretty successfully! That was great, I loved the whole scene in the living room after they got home…so tender. It’s so sad to know that despite all the good times this ain’t going to end well! Draw out the memories for us please!!
im speechless……that was aaaamazing muted how is it that you get better and better every single time you just exceed my expectations again and again your a genius writer is it your profession, can i ask that? neways blew me away so sweet i hate thinking that she’s gunna pass away tho if only she didnt have to, miraculous recovery perhaps? yay! i’d believe it :)
awesome. really, really, really beautiful. :)
wow wow wow muted, it takes a lot for me to cry with the written word, but somehow your words touch my heart. you have an amazing way of describing the love of dana and alice, it is truly a gift and i feel greatful that i have the opportunity to read it. PPS and well done as always.
Loved Shane’s speech at the wedding. It just shows that your dialog talents are not limited to Danish. And, might I say, you did some excellent first person NC-17. The strap-on thing? HOT! I’m with wonderingaloud — please draw out the happy memories. And with sonny_gal wishing for a miraculous recovery — although I know there won’t be one. I do have to keep reminding myself that they have had 37-some-odd years together and that no one lives forever…and that they are fictional people. You and the other great Danish writers make them seem so real (plus the incredible acting in the first three seasons by Erin and Leisha). Thanks so much for the new chapter and the great story!
Nothing cheers me up more than reading some happy Danish! Yay!! Such wonderful memories written so beautifully that it feels as though we’re all reliving these happy moments with them. Dana’s breakdown was so real and understandable. Well Done hun :D
I have just finished reading 2 paragraghs and I am bawling. I need some time out before I continue. This is so unbelievable.