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Lest I Forget (5b)
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We couldn’t have slept for more than an a couple of hours or so, and it really did nothing for us at all since we’d spent the entire night exhausting each other. Not that I was objecting…Alice did enough of that for both of us when the buzzer starting going off at a little past nine that morning.
“Fucking fuck,” she muttered, snuggling closer into me. “Don’t people realize that the morning after two people get married is definitely not the time to be visiting at nine fucking a.m.?” She grabbed one of the pillows that we’d managed to throw all over the bed and covered her head with it as the buzzing continued.
I laughed and managed to move the pillow enough to kiss her forehead. She just swatted me away and covered her head again. “Make them quit buzzing at us, Dane,” she begged through the pillow.
“They’re probably just here to get us up for the cruise, baby,” I said softly, amused as she started to kick the blankets in frustration at the continued buzzing. “All right, all right, I’ll go see who it is.”
“Hurry up!” Alice called after me as I walked to the door, somehow figuring out how to throw a bathrobe on as I walked out of the bedroom. “You’re warm and I was all comfy.”
I rolled my eyes and answered the door to find Bette and Shane standing in the hall. They took one look at me and laughed. “Let me guess, no sleep at all?” Shane asked, grinning. “Nice, Dane.”
“No, we got about two hours,” I protested, but in the middle of it I had to cover a yawn. The admission just made them laugh harder.
“Well, wake Alice’s lazy ass up. We’ve got about a two and a half hour drive to San Diego, and we have to get you two all checked in and everything. The ship’s scheduled to leave at five this afternoon,” Bette said, glancing toward the bedroom door. “Morning, Alice,” she said with a smile.
“And fuck you too,” Alice grumbled, but she didn’t seem that upset as she rested her chin on my shoulder and hugged me from behind. I was glad that even in her sleepy state she’d managed to throw on some sweats and a t-shirt. “Okay, so if the ship isn’t leaving until five, why exactly are you bitches bothering us at nine?” she asked, making no effort to stifle her yawn.
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AWESOME! I love how you have Dana being so in-love with Alice, just utterely and completely. That is how I saw it happening on the real show ‘if’ that ding dong IC didn’t knock TV Dana off…ugh it still bugs me, why, okay I can rant on that one forever…back to your story…I truly love this story, so well written you can actually visualize the scenes. And yeah nice touch with the shower, I love it! Nice work!
No, you can’t let her slip away yet, there are years and years of stories to be told … and you must tell it as wonderfully as you have up to now.
I forgot to add this to my comment last night. After watching the Afterellen’s vlog: Worst Lesbian TV Moments where Killing Dana was the #1, I was really bumped out all over again. Then your post came along in the early hours in the morning made me feel a whole lot better. I just wanted you to know that. Honestly, it is this alternative universe of fanfics which gives me a little comfort and plenty of laughs. I cannot stress enough just how much miss DF on the show. Thanks MT and all you Danish writers again.
gasp. But I know you will get Alice back, I just know it. And I love how much in love they were back in the days and still are of course. It’s wonderfully desribed by you. Great.
I agree with MaGoose, this chapter really was a rollercoaster of emotions. I loved the whole interaction with Shane and Bette . And then the kiss Alice gave to Dana right before she slipped back in her coma. Poor Dana. :( I hope Alice will come by for a little while. *keeps fingers crossed*
“So fucking cute”, and Shane was sooo effin’ right! I agree with ACH21, there’s no doubt in my mind that Dana would be consummed body and soul with her love for Alice. It’s very touching, *sigh*. I also have to add that the humor in this story is cracking me up, spot on there MT! I am anxiously waiting to hear more about their life together…
Running out of hot water, fantastic. Bette & Shane’s note was even better. Keeping the passport with the sex toys, LMAO! How the hell do you eat crabs legs with one hand? Ha-ha-haa. S was a real good friend getting D her 3 boxes of seasickness pills. The sunrise scene was perfect. I think this Alaskan honeymoon cruise was just what the doctor ordered. And just when I was having fun reading this update, A might have slipped back into a coma. My heart goes out to D and thank god Charlie and S showed up at the right time. Please let A stay for a little bit longer. Thank you MT for another awesome update. I hope you will be able to post another one before your trip if you have the time.
noooooooooooooooooooooo :'(
Incredible chapter, MT! I started to cut and paste my favorite lines to comment on. However, I realized that it was most of the chapter. What a roller coaster of humor, drama, sadness, romance, sex… I’ve said it before and I will keep saying it: You rock at writing Danish. I trust that Alice will be back from the coma — I know you have a lot more to say about their years together. Thanks so much for the update!!
at last I get a chance to read some stories and I headed straight for yours. This story is fantastic you write so well and are developing the long happy life together that we know this pair could have had beautifully. I expectantly await the next chapter!!!!!