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Lest I Forget (5b)
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“Baby,” I whispered as I took a couple steps toward her. She just giggled and covered my mouth with hers, her hands finding a resting spot under my robe. “Sweetie, we can’t,” I mumbled into her mouth. “They’re right outside,” I tried again, but even I didn’t really care where our friends were as her fingers worked their way down my body.
“So? It’s the morning after the wedding, Dana. If they’re not expecting this, they’re idiots. Besides, what do you think they’re expecting? They’re the ones who told us to shower,” she said into my ear as she untied the sash on the robe and pushed it off my shoulders. We backed into the shower together, and I sighed as she pressed me into the tiles.
“Well, I suppose if you insist,” I muttered as she bit my neck and started to lick away the streams of water coursing down it. I could feel myself trembling as her hands got a little more aggressive, her teeth pressing into my skin hard enough that I was sure she was leaving marks. I couldn’t make myself care, though. Without thinking about it, I slid my hands over the wet skin of her back and held her close to me. She sighed and moved closer to me, murmuring “I love you,” repeatedly into my neck as her fingers traced patterns over my skin.
I couldn’t hold back a gasp as I felt her fingers slide into me like they’d always belonged there. I pulled her face to mine and kissed her as she moved inside me. She pressed herself into me, her center on my leg, and the wetness against me had nothing to do with the water streaming down on us. I raised my leg into her as she started thrusting into me harder, and she tore her mouth from mine and moved to my nipple, scraping it with her teeth as she moved against my leg. Then her tongue was in my mouth again, her fingers touching places inside me that I’d never known were there. I felt her stiffen against me, her teeth digging into my shoulder as she came, moving her fingers in a hard upward motion inside me. I dig my nails into her back and gasped out, “Oh fuck, IloveyouAl,” as I came, the orgasm leaving me breathless. She held me up against the wall until we stopped shaking and the water turned lukewarm.
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AWESOME! I love how you have Dana being so in-love with Alice, just utterely and completely. That is how I saw it happening on the real show ‘if’ that ding dong IC didn’t knock TV Dana off…ugh it still bugs me, why, okay I can rant on that one forever…back to your story…I truly love this story, so well written you can actually visualize the scenes. And yeah nice touch with the shower, I love it! Nice work!
No, you can’t let her slip away yet, there are years and years of stories to be told … and you must tell it as wonderfully as you have up to now.
I forgot to add this to my comment last night. After watching the Afterellen’s vlog: Worst Lesbian TV Moments where Killing Dana was the #1, I was really bumped out all over again. Then your post came along in the early hours in the morning made me feel a whole lot better. I just wanted you to know that. Honestly, it is this alternative universe of fanfics which gives me a little comfort and plenty of laughs. I cannot stress enough just how much miss DF on the show. Thanks MT and all you Danish writers again.
gasp. But I know you will get Alice back, I just know it. And I love how much in love they were back in the days and still are of course. It’s wonderfully desribed by you. Great.
I agree with MaGoose, this chapter really was a rollercoaster of emotions. I loved the whole interaction with Shane and Bette . And then the kiss Alice gave to Dana right before she slipped back in her coma. Poor Dana. :( I hope Alice will come by for a little while. *keeps fingers crossed*
“So fucking cute”, and Shane was sooo effin’ right! I agree with ACH21, there’s no doubt in my mind that Dana would be consummed body and soul with her love for Alice. It’s very touching, *sigh*. I also have to add that the humor in this story is cracking me up, spot on there MT! I am anxiously waiting to hear more about their life together…
Running out of hot water, fantastic. Bette & Shane’s note was even better. Keeping the passport with the sex toys, LMAO! How the hell do you eat crabs legs with one hand? Ha-ha-haa. S was a real good friend getting D her 3 boxes of seasickness pills. The sunrise scene was perfect. I think this Alaskan honeymoon cruise was just what the doctor ordered. And just when I was having fun reading this update, A might have slipped back into a coma. My heart goes out to D and thank god Charlie and S showed up at the right time. Please let A stay for a little bit longer. Thank you MT for another awesome update. I hope you will be able to post another one before your trip if you have the time.
noooooooooooooooooooooo :'(
Incredible chapter, MT! I started to cut and paste my favorite lines to comment on. However, I realized that it was most of the chapter. What a roller coaster of humor, drama, sadness, romance, sex… I’ve said it before and I will keep saying it: You rock at writing Danish. I trust that Alice will be back from the coma — I know you have a lot more to say about their years together. Thanks so much for the update!!
at last I get a chance to read some stories and I headed straight for yours. This story is fantastic you write so well and are developing the long happy life together that we know this pair could have had beautifully. I expectantly await the next chapter!!!!!