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Lest I Forget (5b)
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“Because we know you haven’t even thought about packing yet, so not only do we have to do that, we need to make sure you’ll have everything you’ll need,” Bette replied.
“Yeah, and we need to make sure you idiots don’t jump right back in bed, too,” Shane added. I could see Alice’s middle finger in my peripheral vision and giggled. “Yeah, laugh it up, Dana. You two are perverts, and I didn’t spend a hundred bucks on this wedding present for you two just so you can miss the stupid thing by having sex.”
“You spent a hundred bucks on this? Shit,” Alice muttered. “You guys really didn’t have to do this, you know.”
“We know, but we wanted to. It’s fine, Alice. But we don’t want you missing it since there aren’t any refunds if you two miss the ship. Now go shower so we can start getting your stuff packed, okay?” Bette said with a laugh. Alice sighed, kissed the side of my neck and walked back to the bedroom. When I followed, she’d already dragged our suitcases from the shelf in the closet and had them open on the bed, where she was haphazardly throwing clothes onto and in them in no sort of organized fashion.
“Al! We’ll take care of it! Jesus Christ, you’ll destroy your room,” Shane scolded as she took the pair of jeans in Alice’s hand and put them into the suitcase.
“Fine, whatever. Just don’t go snooping around in our dresser or anything, perverts,” Alice muttered in response. She still sounded sleepy, and looking at her, she didn’t seem all that with it as she made her way to the bathroom and turned on the shower. I grabbed some clothes for both of us and looked apologetically at Bette and Shane.
“Sorry. We’ll be out before too long,” I told them. They just raised their eyebrows at each other and tried not to laugh. “Shut up, you two. There’s food in the kitchen, help yourselves.” As I shut the bathroom door behind me, I could hear them laughing. Shaking my head in mock disgust, I looked over at Alice, and all thoughts of my friends making me feel awkward left my mind in a heartbeat. She was standing there, naked as the day she was born, looking at me with a loving smile.
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AWESOME! I love how you have Dana being so in-love with Alice, just utterely and completely. That is how I saw it happening on the real show ‘if’ that ding dong IC didn’t knock TV Dana off…ugh it still bugs me, why, okay I can rant on that one forever…back to your story…I truly love this story, so well written you can actually visualize the scenes. And yeah nice touch with the shower, I love it! Nice work!
No, you can’t let her slip away yet, there are years and years of stories to be told … and you must tell it as wonderfully as you have up to now.
I forgot to add this to my comment last night. After watching the Afterellen’s vlog: Worst Lesbian TV Moments where Killing Dana was the #1, I was really bumped out all over again. Then your post came along in the early hours in the morning made me feel a whole lot better. I just wanted you to know that. Honestly, it is this alternative universe of fanfics which gives me a little comfort and plenty of laughs. I cannot stress enough just how much miss DF on the show. Thanks MT and all you Danish writers again.
gasp. But I know you will get Alice back, I just know it. And I love how much in love they were back in the days and still are of course. It’s wonderfully desribed by you. Great.
I agree with MaGoose, this chapter really was a rollercoaster of emotions. I loved the whole interaction with Shane and Bette . And then the kiss Alice gave to Dana right before she slipped back in her coma. Poor Dana. :( I hope Alice will come by for a little while. *keeps fingers crossed*
“So fucking cute”, and Shane was sooo effin’ right! I agree with ACH21, there’s no doubt in my mind that Dana would be consummed body and soul with her love for Alice. It’s very touching, *sigh*. I also have to add that the humor in this story is cracking me up, spot on there MT! I am anxiously waiting to hear more about their life together…
Running out of hot water, fantastic. Bette & Shane’s note was even better. Keeping the passport with the sex toys, LMAO! How the hell do you eat crabs legs with one hand? Ha-ha-haa. S was a real good friend getting D her 3 boxes of seasickness pills. The sunrise scene was perfect. I think this Alaskan honeymoon cruise was just what the doctor ordered. And just when I was having fun reading this update, A might have slipped back into a coma. My heart goes out to D and thank god Charlie and S showed up at the right time. Please let A stay for a little bit longer. Thank you MT for another awesome update. I hope you will be able to post another one before your trip if you have the time.
noooooooooooooooooooooo :'(
Incredible chapter, MT! I started to cut and paste my favorite lines to comment on. However, I realized that it was most of the chapter. What a roller coaster of humor, drama, sadness, romance, sex… I’ve said it before and I will keep saying it: You rock at writing Danish. I trust that Alice will be back from the coma — I know you have a lot more to say about their years together. Thanks so much for the update!!
at last I get a chance to read some stories and I headed straight for yours. This story is fantastic you write so well and are developing the long happy life together that we know this pair could have had beautifully. I expectantly await the next chapter!!!!!