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Lest I Forget (5b)
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“Dana,” she murmured, twisting around in my arms so she could look at me. “You could never, ever disappoint me, baby. I love you. There’s no guessing in that, okay? I’ve never been more sure of anything in my life. I’m just scared I’ll be the one who ends up disappointing you,” she finished in a bare whisper. I was glad she was still facing me, because that made it easier for me to kiss her.
“You couldn’t if you tried,” I told her. “I love you so much, Alice.” And that was all I needed to say. Somehow we managed to make it back to our cabin without tearing each other’s clothes off in our haste to touch one another.
We made love urgently all that night, trying hard to prove through physical contact how much we really loved each other. I’m not sure if she ever felt the same, but for me, it could never have been half enough.
The rest of the cruise…well, to be honest here I only remember certain parts of it. I know she wanted to go ashore when we got to Vancouver, so we did. The rest of the time, we were obviously on the ship. We made very good use of the big bed, but we also spent a lot of time cuddling on deck. When we got to Alaska and it got noticeably colder, we’d sit on the deck in a lounge chair, wrapped up in a blanket as we watched the sun reflect in pinks and yellows off the glaciers as it set. It was beautiful, and Alice adored taking pictures of the scenery. I could see her point; if I hadn’t been so fixated on her the entire time, I might have taken some myself.
But for me, even looking at the colors and patterns of the snow, the incredible and slightly overwhelming visibility and number of the stars at night, and the glaciers rising out of the ocean and looking like a postcard from some sort of fairy tale world of my childhood, the light reflecting back at me from the depths of her eyes was more breathtaking than anything in Alaska or the rest of the world could ever hope to be. I still feel that way. Over the years we’ve seen a lot of the world, both together and separately, and not one thing has even come close to matching her in terms of beauty.
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AWESOME! I love how you have Dana being so in-love with Alice, just utterely and completely. That is how I saw it happening on the real show ‘if’ that ding dong IC didn’t knock TV Dana off…ugh it still bugs me, why, okay I can rant on that one forever…back to your story…I truly love this story, so well written you can actually visualize the scenes. And yeah nice touch with the shower, I love it! Nice work!
No, you can’t let her slip away yet, there are years and years of stories to be told … and you must tell it as wonderfully as you have up to now.
I forgot to add this to my comment last night. After watching the Afterellen’s vlog: Worst Lesbian TV Moments where Killing Dana was the #1, I was really bumped out all over again. Then your post came along in the early hours in the morning made me feel a whole lot better. I just wanted you to know that. Honestly, it is this alternative universe of fanfics which gives me a little comfort and plenty of laughs. I cannot stress enough just how much miss DF on the show. Thanks MT and all you Danish writers again.
gasp. But I know you will get Alice back, I just know it. And I love how much in love they were back in the days and still are of course. It’s wonderfully desribed by you. Great.
I agree with MaGoose, this chapter really was a rollercoaster of emotions. I loved the whole interaction with Shane and Bette . And then the kiss Alice gave to Dana right before she slipped back in her coma. Poor Dana. :( I hope Alice will come by for a little while. *keeps fingers crossed*
“So fucking cute”, and Shane was sooo effin’ right! I agree with ACH21, there’s no doubt in my mind that Dana would be consummed body and soul with her love for Alice. It’s very touching, *sigh*. I also have to add that the humor in this story is cracking me up, spot on there MT! I am anxiously waiting to hear more about their life together…
Running out of hot water, fantastic. Bette & Shane’s note was even better. Keeping the passport with the sex toys, LMAO! How the hell do you eat crabs legs with one hand? Ha-ha-haa. S was a real good friend getting D her 3 boxes of seasickness pills. The sunrise scene was perfect. I think this Alaskan honeymoon cruise was just what the doctor ordered. And just when I was having fun reading this update, A might have slipped back into a coma. My heart goes out to D and thank god Charlie and S showed up at the right time. Please let A stay for a little bit longer. Thank you MT for another awesome update. I hope you will be able to post another one before your trip if you have the time.
noooooooooooooooooooooo :'(
Incredible chapter, MT! I started to cut and paste my favorite lines to comment on. However, I realized that it was most of the chapter. What a roller coaster of humor, drama, sadness, romance, sex… I’ve said it before and I will keep saying it: You rock at writing Danish. I trust that Alice will be back from the coma — I know you have a lot more to say about their years together. Thanks so much for the update!!
at last I get a chance to read some stories and I headed straight for yours. This story is fantastic you write so well and are developing the long happy life together that we know this pair could have had beautifully. I expectantly await the next chapter!!!!!