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Lest I Forget (5b)
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From there, one of the staff showed us to our suite. I opened the door and gasped. Bette had really gone all out; it was incredible. Even bigger and nicer than on the Olivia cruise, and there were flowers, champagne, a mini bar, and what looked like the most comfortable bed on the face of the earth. As soon as the staff guy shut the door to the cabin, I pulled Alice to the bed and climbed into it with her. It was gargantuan; we could have fit three of our beds at home in it, and our bed was pretty damn big.
It was a good thing we’d boarded early. It was only about 3:30 when we fell asleep, and when we heard the polite knocking on our door at a little past seven, we both felt better. Still sleepy and a little disoriented from the movement of the ship, but a little more rested.
We went to dinner and both had a light meal, grilled chicken salads and bread. I was trying to keep it light to ward off any seasickness that might be trying to get me down, and I really think the nap had helped. I’d swallowed a couple of the pills before I’d gotten into bed, and my stomach was being pretty peaceful for the time being. Still, Alice warned me to take it easy that night and the next day, and that evening all we did was lay in lounge chairs together, watching the sun set over the ocean while holding hands.
That night, I got what I still consider the best sleep of my entire life. Alice has been laughing at me about that for years, saying it was only the drugs that made it so peaceful. I can admit that they might have played a small part, but the way Alice smelled when I put my arms around her lulled me to sleep better than any narcotic ever could.
Alice woke me up the next morning by kissing the tip of my nose. The light in the cabin was very dim, and I had no idea whether it was day or night. She must have sensed my confusion, because all she did was kiss me. “Come on, babe. Put some clothes on so we can go watch the sun come up.”
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AWESOME! I love how you have Dana being so in-love with Alice, just utterely and completely. That is how I saw it happening on the real show ‘if’ that ding dong IC didn’t knock TV Dana off…ugh it still bugs me, why, okay I can rant on that one forever…back to your story…I truly love this story, so well written you can actually visualize the scenes. And yeah nice touch with the shower, I love it! Nice work!
No, you can’t let her slip away yet, there are years and years of stories to be told … and you must tell it as wonderfully as you have up to now.
I forgot to add this to my comment last night. After watching the Afterellen’s vlog: Worst Lesbian TV Moments where Killing Dana was the #1, I was really bumped out all over again. Then your post came along in the early hours in the morning made me feel a whole lot better. I just wanted you to know that. Honestly, it is this alternative universe of fanfics which gives me a little comfort and plenty of laughs. I cannot stress enough just how much miss DF on the show. Thanks MT and all you Danish writers again.
gasp. But I know you will get Alice back, I just know it. And I love how much in love they were back in the days and still are of course. It’s wonderfully desribed by you. Great.
I agree with MaGoose, this chapter really was a rollercoaster of emotions. I loved the whole interaction with Shane and Bette . And then the kiss Alice gave to Dana right before she slipped back in her coma. Poor Dana. :( I hope Alice will come by for a little while. *keeps fingers crossed*
“So fucking cute”, and Shane was sooo effin’ right! I agree with ACH21, there’s no doubt in my mind that Dana would be consummed body and soul with her love for Alice. It’s very touching, *sigh*. I also have to add that the humor in this story is cracking me up, spot on there MT! I am anxiously waiting to hear more about their life together…
Running out of hot water, fantastic. Bette & Shane’s note was even better. Keeping the passport with the sex toys, LMAO! How the hell do you eat crabs legs with one hand? Ha-ha-haa. S was a real good friend getting D her 3 boxes of seasickness pills. The sunrise scene was perfect. I think this Alaskan honeymoon cruise was just what the doctor ordered. And just when I was having fun reading this update, A might have slipped back into a coma. My heart goes out to D and thank god Charlie and S showed up at the right time. Please let A stay for a little bit longer. Thank you MT for another awesome update. I hope you will be able to post another one before your trip if you have the time.
noooooooooooooooooooooo :'(
Incredible chapter, MT! I started to cut and paste my favorite lines to comment on. However, I realized that it was most of the chapter. What a roller coaster of humor, drama, sadness, romance, sex… I’ve said it before and I will keep saying it: You rock at writing Danish. I trust that Alice will be back from the coma — I know you have a lot more to say about their years together. Thanks so much for the update!!
at last I get a chance to read some stories and I headed straight for yours. This story is fantastic you write so well and are developing the long happy life together that we know this pair could have had beautifully. I expectantly await the next chapter!!!!!