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Let it be – chapter three
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But that was all day dreaming – Tina had to deal with the here and now. And her priorities were making sure that when Pete had screwed her he hadn’t left behind anything but his healthy and strong sperm. She would need a series of tests over the next few weeks. It also worried her that if he had given her anything – had she then passed it to Bette.
The night before she had just needed Bette to take her again. She needed to leave her in no doubt that they belonged together. The other priority was Bette – Tina knew how Bette’s mind worked — and at the moment Tina knew that Bette’s brain was in danger of going into overload. Bette had to deal with what she had seen happen to Tina. If Bette could and they got the all clear and Tina did get pregnant – then it had all been worth it — it was an awful lot of ifs
Tina arrived in at The Planet just before 1pm – to her surprise Bette was standing at the counter ordering lunch from Marina. Tina moved through the lunchtime crowd and rested her hand on Bette’s hips. Bette swung round and grinned
“Hey there “
“Hey – what do you want?”
“Tuna and pasta please “Tina requested
Bette nodded “Claim a table – we seem to be in a strange twilight zone in here- we are here and Dana, Shane and Alice aren’t “
Tina moved to head to the back of the café but Bette held onto her hand – Tina turned. Bette rested her hand on Tina’s face and kissed her. The kiss was soft but full of meaning – when it ended Bette looked deep into Tina’s eyes
“I love you “she said softly
“I love you more “Tina replied
“Sorry to interrupt you two “Marina’s European accent broke the moment. Bette looked at Marina
“Its okay – can I have tuna and pasta salad for T, a chicken sandwich for me and a pot of tea “
“No problem – we don’t often see you here at lunchtime “
Bette looked at Tina as she moved away from the counter before she looked back at Marina
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I see and appreciate that Bette is struggling… in a way, she’s kind of brought this on herself. But I was always glad that Tina got over whatever mental block she was having and realised that Marcus Allenwood was just as viable a donor as anyone else. When Bette originally mooted this boy as a potential (but unwitting) donor, it felt like Bette was making a really haphazard decision, just out of desperation and more than anything else, to please Tina. It felt like she was giving up a lot to go with the kid, just because, after Tina’s strop in Foxworthy’s office, this boy A) had a Y chromosome, and B) he was white. I was relieved it didn’t go through originally, and pleased that Tina got over whatever silly mental hurdle she had. But this take on it so far is really interesting, and quite well-done. I can’t see Bette getting over this easily at all, once she realises just what she’s done in the name of love, and what Tina’s allowed in the name of desperation. Post more of this when you can, ally, but I’ll be looking for your other tales as well. Cheers
You’ve got Bette down to a science….yes she is going to tear herself up for a long time about this and it could be the death of their relationship if she can’t get control of it. Not to mention there are a thousand things that the PI could find out and it would backfire…Oh ally, you have left yourself to many different options it’s making my head swim thinking about where you feel like taking us….Just pls be gentle.
good answer tina…
good answer from tina! i’m happy to see another update of this story hope you do it more often :0)
Great chapter… you continue to amaze me! Please continue soon!
Actually, I think that this will save their relationship, not be the death of it. It seems to be a wake-up call to Bette that she needs. Ally: thanks for this story. Lin
I have to disagree with Tina. No matter how you look at it, it was an astonishingly stupid thing to do. NOW they want to have a clue as to who Pete is. NOW they want to know if he’s healthy. So they didn’t get pregnant before, still not a good reason to pick up strangers as a means to start a family. And besides all that, Bette’s bugging out over having witnessed the stupidity that she arranged. Is Tina REALLY sure that if this got her knocked up it will all be worth it? There’s nothing wrong with wanting children, but is it worth sacrificing the relationhip that should be the basis of a familly? Or is the potential offspring more important?
Dear sweet baby jesus on the manger, let Tina not be pregnant by this man and let them find a way to marcus allenwood so that Tina can give birth to Angelica. J/K I love ur story. PPS
I agree with funnyone! In this day and age that was an incredibly stupid high risk to take. Tina is really thinking that the end justifies the means and sometimes it’s not. I don’t see how Bette would ever get over any of this. Gosh Ally this story can go in so many different directions. I can definetly seeing Tina sleeping with him again,behind Bette’s back if she does not get pregnant. Now that would be some DRAMA! OOOO,I love it!!!!
So glad to see Tina taking some action in getting tested…it’s a wonder Bette hasn’t made an appointment yet, as it did cross her mind that this guy may be sick. From Bette’s thoughts, I gather that they didn’t even bother to ask him before they did the deed – very foolish indeed. I pray that neither of them have contracted any diseases. It just always seemed so improbable that Bette, with her personality, would go through with this. And Tina too…as well as she knows Bette, it seems like she would have said no at the last minute just because she knows how this is going to mess with Bette’s head. Come on people!!! There are so many OTHER ways to get sperm…there’s even this 20th century place called…a SPERM BANK! It’s especially easy for people who can go out a buy high end gold & diamond bracelets on a whim, to get their hands on good sperm! Oh, but Ally, I love the way you write them. You’ve got all of them down…even when you wrote Marina interrupting B&T at the counter…”Sorry to interrupt you two” I could hear her voice in my head. Yep, you’ve got a gift Ally! I think the proper response for Tina at the end would have been “No ONE is more attractive than Bette in my eyes”, but I know why she said MAN at this point and time. Thank you Ally!
This is going to drive Bette nuts. I don’t know wheather I want Tina to be pregnant or not. I’m glad you’re writing this & I’m not! PPS!!
When I saw this on the show, I was just amazed that they would think to do this and here again. Just please let him be disease free and let Tina NOT BE PREGNANT BY HIM. Let htem find Marcus and let Tina get over her initial thoughts of her inability to parent a bi-racial child. That is so much crap. Children are a blessing and are to be loved, whatever the race She just has to be that strong alpha woman and tell the world be damned. Love your stories AllyE. PPS
Nice chapter. Since you need to re-test in at least another 6 months for diseases like HIV, the majority of this pregnancy (if Tina is pregnant now) will be clouded with an STD scare. This story could get really dark if you wanted to.
ally, I love that you re following up this s/l with another possiblity – I agree it was dumb dumb dumb but I would say they aren’t the first or last who would take this risk. Of course no one wants to see these two as that dumb but what you are doing with the consequences makes for interesting storytelling. However I too want Angelica and not a child from this sexual moment that would be best left in the past IMO but what will Ally do? that is the question. Write on and surprize us with your vision – can’t wait to see where you go.
i still find it awing that someone would have unprotected sex with a man (espiecially) in this day and age. it would freak me the hell out actually. so i can really understand struggling with those thoughts. thanks.
Hello Ally, Thank you for this delightful update. I do think this is how Bette would react if that night had gone as you suggested. The desire to have a child has become all consumming for Bette and Tina. And it seems at any cost. The harsh light of day can bring many doubts and show the recklessness of the previous night’s events. I love thast Tina knows this and is doing all that she can to demonstrate to Bette how much this meant to her and how she understands these morning after regrets. The truth is that it happened and now the possibility of a child is real and what they both want so Bette has to deal with it. Good to see that Bette is beginning to see how she has neglected Tina recently and is now trying to make amends. Basically, Bette and Tina have an opportunity to rekindle their romance and have a child. That has got to be worth one night of madness. Please continue this loving tale soon. Many, many thanks for taking a road not taken. Your Loyal Fan.
WOW!!!! Ally, I just hope no matter what happens B&T can live through it and stay together. This is slowly going to eat away at Bette for the rest of her life I think. You are telling this story in such a great way. Thank you Ally
Good chapter. Hope he not got any disease or anything that put Tina in risk and hope she not pregnant too. Good that Tina go check up and take test and everything, poor Bette this it driving her more crazy. Please let them be ok and no drama please, thanks! Please post soon, thanks!